- Sep 11, 2017
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CarrionDEV I love the concept of this game but i wanted to provide some input (take it or leave it).
1) I knew the male reminded me of someone, he reminds me of Viserys Targaryen - you know, that effiminate douchebag from Game of Thrones that gets melted by gold? Yeah - not good... Make the protagonist at least a little more masculine and ditch the long blond hair (or give the option to the player on how the MC should look).
2) I understand this is an H-Game , but let's slow down the sexy scenes to at least a moderate pace ... jumping right into it kind of kills the build up // suspense..
3) The Dungeon crawling mechanic needs a LOT of work - without representation on the minimap of where you are located, its very easy to get lost... great concept but so far poor execution , needs a LOT of polish.
4) The scenes and backgrounds look phenominal , keep up the good work there (almost look like they are lifted from other sources)
5) Some form of roadmap would be welcome - storyboarding and including the community to bring in more ideas - (this has potential to be a great game)
6) Consequences to actions - take a look at the RenPy game Polarity for better ideas....
7) Please hire a writer or get someone to assist in the writing aspect - this was a huge turnoff for me from contributing on your patreon... clean up the writing aspect and i'll be more convinced to pledge..
1) I knew the male reminded me of someone, he reminds me of Viserys Targaryen - you know, that effiminate douchebag from Game of Thrones that gets melted by gold? Yeah - not good... Make the protagonist at least a little more masculine and ditch the long blond hair (or give the option to the player on how the MC should look).
2) I understand this is an H-Game , but let's slow down the sexy scenes to at least a moderate pace ... jumping right into it kind of kills the build up // suspense..
3) The Dungeon crawling mechanic needs a LOT of work - without representation on the minimap of where you are located, its very easy to get lost... great concept but so far poor execution , needs a LOT of polish.
4) The scenes and backgrounds look phenominal , keep up the good work there (almost look like they are lifted from other sources)
5) Some form of roadmap would be welcome - storyboarding and including the community to bring in more ideas - (this has potential to be a great game)
6) Consequences to actions - take a look at the RenPy game Polarity for better ideas....
7) Please hire a writer or get someone to assist in the writing aspect - this was a huge turnoff for me from contributing on your patreon... clean up the writing aspect and i'll be more convinced to pledge..
At least is the NTR avoidable or like a punishment for playing bad? Or will happen anyways?
Love your proof of concept with Vivian and the zombie. One thing I absolutely hate about zombie games is how unrealistic they are compared to folklore, movie and tv portrayals. People get infected so much easier in general but in a porn game where the MC keeps having sex or gets violated by hordes and they are still healthy as fuck. So I do hope if you are going to introduce zombie NTR, zombie sex that you at least make the characters "realistic" like they will get infected and will slowly succumbing to whatever virus/bacteria/fungus/toxin/protein/disease that's causing the outbreak.
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Looking at the sample pics, I seriously thought the MC was supposed to be the MC's mother. XD Because he looks like a flatchested Martha Stewart. I'm afraid I might find that it detracts from the experience. I mean, I'm open minded, but.... that bitch commited crimes against money! MONEY!! XD
- Sep 29, 2017
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I want to personally thank everyone for their feedback and critics!
quick round up top of mind
1) lewd pacing. 100% agreed it's too fast, it was a concern from the get go but I also feared not having enough or people being dissapointed by a slow pace, we'll find that sweet spot soon i'm certain.
2) Spelling, phrasing & English.
Yeeeeaaahhh.. ima need some time on that one xD English isn't my primary language and I'll be the first to admit alot of dialogue in this build was rushed to the point of not being proof read - ya reap what you sow.
3) Dungeon.
The dungeon crawling is what I'm aiming to make about 30% of the gameplay - Not if it keeps working like it does currently that's for sure. the mini map not telling you where you are was a last minute decision that I'm not proud of, I don't really like the idea of "This is exactly where you are down to the inch" Map design. Idealiy, I'd like to remedy that by making the maps, walls, props all distinct. - Less Dungeon Crawler, More Walking through tight alley ways, sorta deal. + It needs combat... how that combat is going to play out is still a bit in the air, but I'd prefer to avoid traditions and make something simple & elegant.
4) Protag.
I'm not even remotly upset about the response to him. Couple of people pointed out already "Honey Select Males are always going to look ugly" He is meant to look a bit girlish but, I might just have to look else where to make us a nice protag.
5) Fetishes.
They will be optional. (but there will be a large platter of them) No kink shaming now, ya hear?
But they will be there....waiting....watching....tempting...
6) Where to next?
There's still so much to do, my main focus right now is ensuring Patreons have the rewards they deserve. Then a couple of days off for the holidays (i'm always online on our Discord) and then i'll hit ya's up with a bit of a roap map
quick round up top of mind
1) lewd pacing. 100% agreed it's too fast, it was a concern from the get go but I also feared not having enough or people being dissapointed by a slow pace, we'll find that sweet spot soon i'm certain.
2) Spelling, phrasing & English.
Yeeeeaaahhh.. ima need some time on that one xD English isn't my primary language and I'll be the first to admit alot of dialogue in this build was rushed to the point of not being proof read - ya reap what you sow.
3) Dungeon.
The dungeon crawling is what I'm aiming to make about 30% of the gameplay - Not if it keeps working like it does currently that's for sure. the mini map not telling you where you are was a last minute decision that I'm not proud of, I don't really like the idea of "This is exactly where you are down to the inch" Map design. Idealiy, I'd like to remedy that by making the maps, walls, props all distinct. - Less Dungeon Crawler, More Walking through tight alley ways, sorta deal. + It needs combat... how that combat is going to play out is still a bit in the air, but I'd prefer to avoid traditions and make something simple & elegant.
4) Protag.
I'm not even remotly upset about the response to him. Couple of people pointed out already "Honey Select Males are always going to look ugly" He is meant to look a bit girlish but, I might just have to look else where to make us a nice protag.
5) Fetishes.
They will be optional. (but there will be a large platter of them) No kink shaming now, ya hear?
But they will be there....waiting....watching....tempting...
6) Where to next?
There's still so much to do, my main focus right now is ensuring Patreons have the rewards they deserve. Then a couple of days off for the holidays (i'm always online on our Discord) and then i'll hit ya's up with a bit of a roap map
I don't get this dungeon thing. i can't click anywhere and i just see a brick wall. the game says head east but nothing moves. and i can't click the house even after it says "the only thing good is to go home to the next scene" and I can't click the top right upper most square either.
I had the same problem as you initially but then I discovered the 'W' 'A' and 'D' keys...I guess they should have been more clear about using them to navigate the maze.
- May 5, 2017
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I admit I'm keen to see more of this game, I love the humour and style. Plus, I anticipate some lovely erotic psuedo-horror that should be quite fun. And I always appreciate a nice chubby mum, so there's that.
I do encounter quite a few errors at different places. And I realise this game is still quite early in development, so no worries there. But I'd wager I can recreate the errors should the developer want to see them. But for now, cheers for a fun new twist on an old kink.
I do encounter quite a few errors at different places. And I realise this game is still quite early in development, so no worries there. But I'd wager I can recreate the errors should the developer want to see them. But for now, cheers for a fun new twist on an old kink.
That was meant as a sample of the NTR in the future versions and that the game said that stuff like that would be avoidable.
Should be avoidable in the future but one sample NTR scene is at the end of this version. It's kind of obvious when it's coming since it's after all the actual stuff, so you can just stop at that point.
Yanno, just for the good humor in which you've taken the ribbings and critiques...I may give it a shot. At least until the first unavoidable NTR scene. lolI want to personally thank everyone for their feedback and critics!
quick round up top of mind
1) lewd pacing. 100% agreed it's too fast, it was a concern from the get go but I also feared not having enough or people being dissapointed by a slow pace, we'll find that sweet spot soon i'm certain.
2) Spelling, phrasing & English.
Yeeeeaaahhh.. ima need some time on that one xD English isn't my primary language and I'll be the first to admit alot of dialogue in this build was rushed to the point of not being proof read - ya reap what you sow.
3) Dungeon.
The dungeon crawling is what I'm aiming to make about 30% of the gameplay - Not if it keeps working like it does currently that's for sure. the mini map not telling you where you are was a last minute decision that I'm not proud of, I don't really like the idea of "This is exactly where you are down to the inch" Map design. Idealiy, I'd like to remedy that by making the maps, walls, props all distinct. - Less Dungeon Crawler, More Walking through tight alley ways, sorta deal. + It needs combat... how that combat is going to play out is still a bit in the air, but I'd prefer to avoid traditions and make something simple & elegant.
4) Protag.
I'm not even remotly upset about the response to him. Couple of people pointed out already "Honey Select Males are always going to look ugly" He is meant to look a bit girlish but, I might just have to look else where to make us a nice protag.
5) Fetishes.
They will be optional. (but there will be a large platter of them) No kink shaming now, ya hear?
But they will be there....waiting....watching....tempting...
6) Where to next?
There's still so much to do, my main focus right now is ensuring Patreons have the rewards they deserve. Then a couple of days off for the holidays (i'm always online on our Discord) and then i'll hit ya's up with a bit of a roap map
TheCrimsonRevenger
There is no unavoidable NTR as it will be avoidable. There is a scene at the end that shows what some of the NTR animations will be like but you can close the game before that if you want and I'm not sure zombie rape/sex would be considered NTR as to me it would be more in the rape vein then NTR vein.
CarrionDEV
You should get a hold of one of the staff on the site and let them know that you are a DEV so they can give you the DEV tag.
There is no unavoidable NTR as it will be avoidable. There is a scene at the end that shows what some of the NTR animations will be like but you can close the game before that if you want and I'm not sure zombie rape/sex would be considered NTR as to me it would be more in the rape vein then NTR vein.
CarrionDEV
You should get a hold of one of the staff on the site and let them know that you are a DEV so they can give you the DEV tag.
- May 10, 2018
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am so torn..i see zombies and crud and am..cool..i see ntr and multiple protag and am..meh..i'll try this but have my evac kit ready if needed
maze=delete..oh well..buh bye
maze=delete..oh well..buh bye
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Yup! A bathroom/shower scene (with couple a differant paths) and an ending scene that's stirring a fair bit of controversy, highly recommended!
- Jun 5, 2017
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Was actually better as I expected, however not a fan of switching characters. Def on the try again in a few versions list.
