I never read this story before, but I like the idea of gaming it. There are lots of other stories I would like to see made into a VN or Kinetic Novel. This story doesn't seem to have a copy right.
Another thing I would like to interject, good renders do make a VN better, but I find the story is the most important part and the renders are a vehicle to help the imagination.
I have found some crappy Games or VNs here with great renders, and some great ones with bad renders. Just my thoughts out loud (so to speak).
I hope to see updates soon. with lots of content.