VN Ren'Py Abandoned Lovers Lane [v0.1] [Mr.X]

[sipi]

k great work thx mate and i love this game and hope make long story

 

[DELETADO]

put others sites to download

 

[Avariz]

Wow! I loved the original text version of this story, all parts of it. I hope you finish this game and give visual justice to the story. Kudos!

 

[ssrrxxbr]

I would like to see Suzanne corrupting Susan to a lascive life...

 

[Frankline]

intresting idea but 2much text

 

[eagleslash]

I like the game

 

[AnimeHentaiGamer]

i really like Akami. i hope we can get some action with her.

 

[Gary_Indiana]

Thanks for you concerns about plagiarism, but don't worry i already have the authors permission.

If you truly have his permission then get his help with the text, team up. Because currently the text in your game is awful compared to the source

 

[Mikey Mike]

Good start, I'm impressed and ready for more!

However, the mom's and aunt's breasts don't quite look to be 38G cups to me, especially compared to a living legend Samantha 38G?!

 

[Mondoblasto]

I don't know if it's a European thing, but get rid of the tongue touching the backside of the upper teeth visuals. Frankly it looks stupid and off-putting.

 

[WINTEX]

As i can see, the redhead has son too. Why? It would be swinger thing? Like, in the end both males fuck all girls? Isnt it would be better if MC gets all the ladies? I mean, that what you expect from incest game, NOT SHARING YOUR MOTHER AND SISTER. Or it for future NTR(god, please, no)?

 

[Mr..Xxx]

As i can see, the redhead has son too. Why? It would be swinger thing? Like, in the end both males fuck all girls? Isnt it would be better if MC gets all the ladies? I mean, that what you expect from incest game, NOT SHARING YOUR MOTHER AND SISTER. Or it for future NTR(god, please, no)?

Don't worry there will be no NTR content on this game and yes maby MC will get all the ladies.

 

[Baharomont]

"Incest, Vaginal Sex, Male Protagonist, Public Sex, Bdsm , Mother-Son,Brother=Sisterm, Anal Sex, Big Tits, Rape, Voyeurism, Corruption, Animated, Footjob, Handjob, Titfuck"

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DEV, or you Liar or you just F***ing Troll 80 LVL
Did not use Genre Spoiler Blank for you Planned Tags... PLS, put only Tags what you already put in Game!

 

[oidex]

I don't know if it's a European thing, but get rid of the tongue touching the backside of the upper teeth visuals. Frankly it looks stupid and off-putting.

It's not. Looks just as stupid on this side of the pond.

 

[triplededo]

Suzanne and Susan? I think is a little confusing...

 

[Tarasia]

only 6?

 

[mickster101]

Don't worry there will be no NTR content on this game and yes maby MC will get all the ladies.

Always prefer the possibility of NTR as it is an easy way to introduce more sex into the game. Still, understand people's reservations about it. Hoping that rape tag is a non-starter. Violence against women is a complete turn off.

 

[Trasher2018]

That was one hell of an exposition dump in the intro.

Yep. Horrible - thats why I had a look at the comments and after reading how poor the writing continues, I might stop it now .. maybe ^^

Edit: Ok - as soon as the characters start do talk It really becomes a mess. There a so many errors with wrong dialog and it is exhausting to keep track who really talks or thinks.

Nothing that can't be fixed - all in all quite solid.

 

[HandofVecna]

Not much here. It's rough. I'd be happy to help with rewriting in native English. Note though I am no English major.

Bring in all the cuties in the splash photo you've got pure gold here.

 

[wakawaka]

Always prefer the possibility of NTR as it is an easy way to introduce more sex into the game. Still, understand people's reservations about it. Hoping that rape tag is a non-starter. Violence against women is a complete turn off.

If the dev is just copying Spacer's story you won't have to worry about a lack of sex. If he started rendering scenes ... he might have enough to cover maybe 10% of the total scenes after about a year. Hell, blowjobs in the story sometimes last hours. MC has mythical dick powers.

Don't worry about the rape tag.