- Oct 1, 2019
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You know, I think Fran is probably my fav in this whole game. She is a total trip, specially with the "Kelly Jelly" thing.
One of the problems for the game is that the dream sections drags and not fun.I just join the "I like this game" crew! As I do!
It has what I want, a non-wimp MC, beautiful and different LIs (always looking out for a good harem), good renders (some are a little grainy but most is good) and good lewd scenes.. So, just keep up the good work Dev!You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Tenses are frequent, mostly using past tense when it's current or future topics. Also you aren't "on a class" you're "in" one. Similarly, your sweat is "on" your body not flowing "in" it. The whole on/in thing is very frequentIt's cool man, you make a few mistakes with tenses here and there and they're fine cause i know what you meant and they're so minor, that one just stood out cause it happened like 6 times in a short time frame.
I'll keep this in mind. The earlier parts of the game have more mistakes because I used to not check them. Thank you for this.Tenses are frequent, mostly using past tense when it's current or future topics. Also you aren't "on a class" you're "in" one. Similarly, your sweat is "on" your body not flowing "in" it. The whole on/in thing is very frequent
Thank you for the feedback . The pacing is something I always think about. I will try to give proper time for each setting and better transitions.I liked the game thus far, there are however a few things that i feel drag the game down a little bit. First thing would of course be the typos and grammar mistakes. It's not too bad in this case but still noticable. This will probably be fixed over time. Whats more important is that i feel like some parts of the story flow are a little rushed when it comes to scene transitions. Sometimes it feels like you are just zipping from place to place. I feel like a little bit of a transition would help the story flow a little smoother. It might possibly just be me but I personally would have liked to see the other characters reaction to the MC telling them he's a Lune instead of just reading: "I told them".
Apart from that I'd say the story is decently interesting. The characters are all different which is great and animations are decent. I'll keep an eye on this one and hope the developement goes well.