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Jimskeleton

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This is definitely not getting the amount of attention it deserves, was already enjoying this and just played the new update, really good stuff, not often I find a VN that has a tolerable MC, a good story and all the LIs are interesting. Keep up the good work.
 

wildride69

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DEV Note.

Just a quick observation from a lazy guy admittedly. The overview would be better in my opinion if it started of at

"Our story is about a young orphan Lune who is just, trying to survive everyday life but will soon discover that life is not as simple for a Lune like him, especially since he doesn't fully know his race or himself.
He may already be a Lune, and that alone makes him unique, but he is actually more special than the other Lunes.
Let's just say he has a very big advantage in finding a suitable partner in life."

It's clearer and gives a much better summary of what to expect then the first paragraph that doesn't draw in a potential viewer/player. Just give them what they need to know to get them interested and explain the background lore in the opening of the game.

Just an observation because some will get bored two sentences in and move on, I was about to do that until I glanced down and read the above paragraph which got me interested in the game, vs the first paragraph that bored the hell out of me.

Good Luck with the project
 
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Crosaith.

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Damn dude... that prison scene was retarded. It's hard to stay immersed in the game when the story repeatedly shifts between serious and random.
 

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Adjustment MOD

Hi,
I put together a few minor adjustments for this title (mods and a few minor visual changes).

  • Changed the default clear textbox, to a custom bottom shaded version...(which aids with viewing the dialog text without blocking any of the background content).
  • Included the 0x52_URM tool, which allows a user to view as well edit Ren'Py titles. Also used as a secondary support with the UCD mod, which can also be used to see data behind the story choices like the UCD mod, and as well shows requirement checks as they happen in the story.
  • Included the Universal Choice Descriptor mod, which can display on screen data behind some of the story choices that offer points and other game info. (This mod is NOT a walk through, but it can still display some info behind the story choices like one.)
  • Also included a Universal Quick Menu mod which can hide the game's quick menu by pressing your Q key. (Used to clean up your dialog area of your screen, by hiding the quick menu from sight.)
  • Included a Universal Textbox Opacity Slider mod, which is used to adjust the shading intensity of the dialog textbox.

Install:
Just extract and merge the game folder with this titles game folder. Then run your game exe, and enjoy a few minor visual adjustments.

Regards.


Before Adjustment Mod was applied (default textbox)
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This image is after the Adjustment Mod has been installed, with the quick menu hidden and opacity at 100% (custom textbox).
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Sample image of the Universal Opacity Slider Mod settings inside the options tab.
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wildride69

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It's really strange,.......this game's one of the unique and awesome harem AVN, but still just 5 pages?
Renders 8/10.

Story 9/10.

MC 7/10.

Lis (beauty+attitude) 8/10 (as far as I know there's no tsundere love interest)

Player experience 7/10.

Total = around 7.8/10

This game is a hidden gem, whoever the dev is hats off for your masterpiece.:love:
Well lets look at it from the standpoint of a brand new user...
The tags for this game aren't super interesting and it give you very little insight into what the story contains.
3dcg animated big ass big tits fantasy graphic violence male protagonist mobile game monster girl oral sex school setting teasing voyeurism

Judging from this you are in a school setting. playing a male MC, some fantasy violence and there will probably be some big ass and tits at some point. Nothing really wrong with them but nothing to set this VN apart.

Then you have the overview, to the Dev and the people playing the game this may all make perfect sense, but to a new user that first paragraph does the marketing for this game no favors. It doesn't spark any "I need to see this" interest and I'll bet a lot of people just move to the next title.

Then you have the render samples, there is nothing wrong with them per se, except for the fact they are generic (stock footage), to experienced user we have seen these models before. (One example is Nympho Tamer, most of the models used are used there as well)

The most interesting part of this game, when you are looking for a new VN is the title graphic


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It's very eye catching and makes you take notice when you are looking for a new VN, it is very well done from a marketing standpoint.

This could be the best VN on here but most people won't know that because the marketing isn't making people stop and give this title a chance in my opinion.

I am downloading the game now and I'm going to give it a playthrough because I came across the title screen and the second paragraph made it seem somewhat interesting.

Just my two cents as a frequently looking for new VN's to play user. This is in no way shape or form a knock against the Dev or the Title just an observation from someone who just discovered this VN.
 
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Bse

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Aug 1, 2019
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game until 0.4 nice but not sure about update rate and story... yes other rework all 6 month or even drop it. so where we go with it? and update rate is a little slow and don´t have many. mhh still try to understand the dev here .
 

Saphfire

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Well this is really very strange. So few comments for a really good avn.
This deserves way more attraction imo.
 

Simpgor

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I dont know how people consider this a "good story"... if you like it that is fine but it really is not well written... just some examples (from as far as i could go in) are the dev "explaining" the body swap game (which reads like a wiki article on a math proof) only for the swap to be hilariously obvious with every LI doing their single thing (angry,lewd,not talking, cant take compliments), or that the very next scene relies on braindead logic when a character says "the imposter 100% is not MC" only for that same character to vote for MC as the imposter because [no reason given in game] with the real reason she has to vote MC is because the minigame is poorly designed and would be unwinnable if she picked the wrong person which she has 75% odds to do :KEK:

I had to give up when an exchange at a bank goes like this:
Robbers: All we want is money! and also show us your eyes so we can see if they are weird!
MC: blankface.jpg
2 seconds pass whlle MC swears to protect his waifu from the badmen
Robbers: Mention eyes again
MC: WAIT THEY ARE LOOKING FOR LUNE?!?1

The story isnt bad in the "generic/copy paste" way but more in the dev is overreaching in their (storytelling) ability, the girls and their interactions are servericable enough (for a porn game) but soooo many of the interactions and events that transpire make no logical sense or feel like they were written render by render with no information retained between them
 
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Safetydummy

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Well lets look at it from the standpoint of a brand new user...
The tags for this game aren't super interesting and it give you very little insight into what the story contains.
3dcg animated big ass big tits fantasy graphic violence male protagonist mobile game monster girl oral sex school setting teasing voyeurism

Judging from this you are in a school setting. playing a male MC, some fantasy violence and there will probably be some big ass and tits at some point. Nothing really wrong with them but nothing to set this VN apart.

Then you have the overview, to the Dev and the people playing the game this may all make perfect sense, but to a new user that first paragraph does the marketing for this game no favors. It doesn't spark any "I need to see this" interest and I'll bet a lot of people just move to the next title.

Then you have the render samples, there is nothing wrong with them per se, except for the fact they are generic (stock footage), to experienced user we have seen these models before. (One example is Nympho Tamer, most of the models used are used there as well)

The most interesting part of this game, when you are looking for a new VN is the title graphic


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It's very eye catching and makes you take notice when you are looking for a new VN, it is very well done from a marketing standpoint.

This could be the best VN on here but most people won't know that because the marketing isn't making people stop and give this title a chance in my opinion.

I am downloading the game now and I'm going to give it a playthrough because I came across the title screen and the second paragraph made it seem somewhat interesting.

Just my two cents as a frequently looking for new VN's to play user. This is in no way shape or form a knock against the Dev or the Title just an observation from someone who just discovered this VN.
I completely agree with your thoughts on the Title Card. That's how I ended up checking out this game. ;)

It's a very eye-catching image and single word title sums up everything rather succinctly. It conjures up images of mystery, whimsy, imagination, wonder and (obviously) a dream-like state. From the stars and clock-faces in the eyes (reminiscent of say Lewis Carrol, almost), the black BG, and the star-field in the logo (which just makes it stand out). It says so much, by saying so little. If this were a movie poster- I'd most likely go and see the film. Just sayin'.

I've yet to play the game, but if the Title Card and renders are anything to go off of- I have very high hopes for this game and wish the Dev the best of luck. :D


P.S. Have we received a general consensus ruling on the WT yet?
 
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MayhemSixx

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Jul 3, 2022
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My Norton did not detect any virus. Also, the download link does not work.
It's most likely a false positive, I'm pretty sure that detection is a bug, but I am not talking my chances with it that's for sure.
is WT safe? never gotten a virus detection on here before
P.S. Have we received a general consensus ruling on the WT yet?
I made a report and just got this answer :
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If mods say so, I guess it's safe :)
 
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RammingRam

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Dec 4, 2022
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I dont know how people consider this a "good story"... if you like it that is fine but it really is not well written... just some examples (from as far as i could go in) are the dev "explaining" the body swap game (which reads like a wiki article on a math proof) only for the swap to be hilariously obvious with every LI doing their single thing (angry,lewd,not talking, cant take compliments), or that the very next scene relies on braindead logic when a character says "the imposter 100% is not MC" only for that same character to vote for MC as the imposter because [no reason given in game] with the real reason she has to vote MC is because the minigame is poorly designed and would be unwinnable if she picked the wrong person which she has 75% odds to do :KEK:

I had to give up when an exchange at a bank goes like this:
Robbers: All we want is money! and also show us your eyes so we can see if they are weird!
MC: blankface.jpg
2 seconds pass whlle MC swears to protect his waifu from the badmen
Robbers: Mention eyes again
MC: WAIT THEY ARE LOOKING FOR LUNE?!?1

The story isnt bad in the "generic/copy paste" way but more in the dev is overreaching in their (storytelling) ability, the girls and their interactions are servericable enough (for a porn game) but soooo many of the interactions and events that transpire make no logical sense or feel like they were written render by render with no information retained between them
I would have to disagree with this. You make it sound weird, but that was the first time the MC encountered his enemies that are out to get him, and this is in a dangerous situation. I didn't find it weird at all. I guess it's just a difference in opinions. I played tons of porn games already and this is one of the good ones story wise. My only problem is the really early parts, but it's not that big of a deal if you're playing the latest updates.
 
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