Well first thanks to creator whoever create this game because he give his time for nothing that I feel after reading all the post. I can see what he trying to do hear but still I have question actually questions. First why you make this in a game form when we cant change anything its all about past 12 days right you should just make this in a story way . Anyway you did really good with all things in this you went wrong when you put all this in game not in story .
Good game...well made. I was hoping for bdsm content...was kinda a let down on that part. S/m ending would have been epic....the possible things in this game...like on one side Dom one of the girls...or flip the tables and join pasal and become a trainer in the red room.... damn this game could have so much more....a bdsm dream game if u wanted to be kinky
this game's models are fucking good, but the architecture of this game has a lot of room to upgrade, BDSM/DRUG/CHEAT and corruption topics can have many ways to develop.
I suggest dev try BangCity, the semi open design is very suitable for this game.
The MC can have 3-4 divisions to choose:
1. Kill or replace Pascal and be the underground King;
2.have some open relationship with other girl
3.Use man/woman to set a group like gang, made money by sex and drugs.
I think No. 1/2 is very easy to do, and 3 need some new materials.
Anyway, it's a good work, i'm waiting for your next move!
I suggest dev try BangCity, the semi open design is very suitable for this game.
The MC can have 3-4 divisions to choose:
1. Kill or replace Pascal and be the underground King;
2.have some open relationship with other girl
3.Use man/woman to set a group like gang, made money by sex and drugs.
I think No. 1/2 is very easy to do, and 3 need some new materials.
Anyway, it's a good work, i'm waiting for your next move!
If the "details" on the renders include pointy cheekbones of the 39-51 yo ladies, small nipples and short hair, delete them.
Or add settings to disable them, please.
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thanos255 I enjoyed this game quite a lot. Even though I mostly only play NTR games, I think this story is very well written.
I think there's plenty of opportunity to create a well rounded game where there ARE bad ends (like Babysitter). An obvious one being, cheat on Lucie with other girls, ignore her needs, belittle her, don't warn her about Pascal, leads to a bad end where she is completely sexually dominated by Pascal.
A game and story is only fun when there's risk of failure. Games and movies where heroes never die results in stale products, like every superhero movie right now. Game of Thrones was good because you couldn't predict who was going to die: there's risk and it keeps the viewer engaged.
As a developer, who says he doesn't do this for the money, you should have more confidence in your product. Tell the story you want to tell. Fuck the naysayers who complain about pirating your game for free.
I think there's plenty of opportunity to create a well rounded game where there ARE bad ends (like Babysitter). An obvious one being, cheat on Lucie with other girls, ignore her needs, belittle her, don't warn her about Pascal, leads to a bad end where she is completely sexually dominated by Pascal.
A game and story is only fun when there's risk of failure. Games and movies where heroes never die results in stale products, like every superhero movie right now. Game of Thrones was good because you couldn't predict who was going to die: there's risk and it keeps the viewer engaged.
As a developer, who says he doesn't do this for the money, you should have more confidence in your product. Tell the story you want to tell. Fuck the naysayers who complain about pirating your game for free.
In what ***** way were it a good idea to add a fight where you have no time to click your arrow keys as if you are playing guitar hero? Straight up the dumbest thing I've seen so far.
But MC isn't this type of person. He only does dom for revenge and he's a hero who goes to risk his life to save Julie. Why would he become a monster like Pascal? Also that would totally not work with the beginning of the game where he's in jail.
You are not the only one, the game just ended when it started to take flight I was left wanting moreI am probably one of very few but I would have loved it to have even more content happening in that BDSM room.
That is my favorite part of the game!
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One human pro translator + 2 proofreaders ... If you see some errors, please MP.
I'm doing a pause. Some people on F95 are not very nice with developper and it's very hard for them.
I have the basics for the next game (Corrupted Paradise), with corruption, story, interaction etc. More information on Patreon.
I learned a lot about Lucie and I know where I want to go.
However, I need news ideas and story. So I'm writing erotica again.
I will be back to erotic video games after.