VN Ren'Py Luminary Protocol [v0.42] [Jubs Games]

[Jubs!]

I enjoyed the story in v.41. I found it very compelling. The short movement animations looked great for the most part. Here is a short list of typos/misspellings and incorrect word usages I noticed:

covering -> covered
the excitement the crowd want -> the excitement the crowd wants
But you are woken by a knock. -> But you are awakened by a knock.
commit of much of it as possible to member as you can. -> commit as much of it as possible to memory as you can.
Daniel wonders off -> Daniel wanders off
It hubris, and it's going to be -> It's hubris, and it's going to be
You can see her arena gear sticking out of her back in an open locker. -> Did you mean "out of her pack"?
her voice a low, steady, and focused. -> her voice is low, steady, and focused.
Down on the sand, Cassia is standing rooted to the spot Alice, horrified. -> Doesn't make sense. Can't tell exactly what you meant to say. Maybe, "standing, rooted next to the spot where Alice lies, horrified."
too far away to see much else, but Lyra is. -> too far away to see much else, but Lyra does.
until her body can replace it what it's lost. -> until her body can replace what it's lost.
Well, I'm gunna -> Well, I'm gonna
The big headline on page 2 catches your eye -> Looking at the paper itself shows that it's page 3.
and the one attempted murder of her student. -> and the attempted murder of her student.

Thank you. I did catch a few of those in the 0.42 update I just uploaded, but not all of them. Ill get them corrected for the next update. The news paper was one of the images I replaced. I smudged out the number on the other page. Then realised that there is no way that page 3 could be on the left side of the paper and decided I'll need to rework the image in a future update

 

[pedersilver5]

Thank you for this update. I played it previously probably a couple of years ago. Including some of the Pirate tales and diplomacy from that area of the Triumvirate and a bit of exploration. I started from the beginning again, using some of the same choices previously made, sort of like Norse Thor chaotic good direction because of the Chaos affinity of the MC. For fellow adventure story lovers I recommend this for the AD&D like plot and exploration. Still early into this update, again, thank you for the share.

 

[Cforcer]

Looks nice so far... thank you for sharing... hopefully won't get abandoned ...

 

[pedersilver5]

The MC looks like me at the top of my game, MMA, USN, add 3" to the equipment and maybe unknown to height. A 6'3" 184 lbs 54" chest, 34" waist. Equipped just below navel aroused, are you experienced. All that aside. I love Vivian's shoppe, reminds me of the quality Italian tailors, shoemakers, and haberdasheries as a young teen and beyond. Quality is always best. Never settle for less. Tailors and seamstresses bustling about basic suits, that after you are measured, and a week later wala (stolen from) Ghost-busters: do you believe in Magic?, or the cowardly lion, I do I do believe in spooks."

The train, inter city and country trains in the glory remnant of an age no graffiti, elegant polished mahogany wood I enjoyed in the mid to late seventies Italy: Venice, Rome, Napoli... I am certain those are gone. Once road the holiday trains from storage which were similar but not as elegant.

Stadium fight high heels, really? You went there? No one fights in high heels.

 

[pedersilver5]

After the stadium fight it goes to a black screen that I cannot get out of besides going to the no progress in story reviews. I know I went further in past releases, is this an error?

 

[Jubs!]

After the stadium fight it goes to a black screen that I cannot get out of besides going to the no progress in story reviews. I know I went further in past releases, is this an error?

It shouldn't do that. It doesn't on mine and no-one else has reported that, what version/platform are you running it on and which stadium fight are you referring to?

 

[Yabba]

After the final bout in college touney where his sig other gets injured-it plays out till they return but then no further progress is available.

Great game btw if theres more please fix - im using win10

 

[effuotse]

After the final bout in college touney where his sig other gets injured-it plays out till they return but then no further progress is available.

Great game btw if theres more please fix - im using win10

same issue here but on mac

 

[Yabba]

Im dl it again as it seeems a fix was added this morning -see if it fixes

 

[Jubs!]

Im still not 100% certain where eactly the content is cutting out for you. The whole event ends with them on the train returning back home. There will be popups on the screen saying galleries updated, video gallery unlocked for Lyra etc. and then it will take you to the hub menu. Depending on whether you have done Emelia's shopping event or not there will either be that available or nothing as no further content.

If you are referring to them returning to the changing rooms after the final fight scene, there is only one choice that could break the progression - choosing whether or not to stay with Alice as she cleans herself up. But both those paths work on my version.

What is the last piece of text you see before it happens?

 

[Evil_Geoff]

I got on the train to return, then the hub menu, then nada because "end of update". Chilling and playing other stuff until the next update arrives.

Jubs - Just a thought: Add a text screen with "END OF UPDATE. SAVE HERE" instead of leaving a blank black screen. That way people will not worry that the game is broken.

 

[salty_croissant]

I hate AI games but this ... this is good

 

[Jubs!]

I got on the train to return, then the hub menu, then nada because "end of update". Chilling and playing other stuff until the next update arrives.

Jubs - Just a thought: Add a text screen with "END OF UPDATE. SAVE HERE" instead of leaving a blank black screen. That way people will not worry that the game is broken.

Hah! That's what I had before. The problem is that unless you are in a menu, renpy always wants to be advancing something when the player clicks the mouse. So that screen has to be setup in a never ending loop and lots of players didn't realise they had to go to the hub screen to find more content. So I changed it to drop them to the hub screen, which will have flashing icons if there is more content. I plan to change those icons so that rather than just not being there if there isn't content, there will be a version of the button that says "No content".

 

[Yabba]

Hah! That's what I had before. The problem is that unless you are in a menu, renpy always wants to be advancing something when the player clicks the mouse. So that screen has to be setup in a never ending loop and lots of players didn't realise they had to go to the hub screen to find more content. So I changed it to drop them to the hub screen, which will have flashing icons if there is more content. I plan to change those icons so that rather than just not being there if there isn't content, there will be a version of the button that says "No content".

Ok i get it - i did get all the content ,so no worries -i only had to speed play it 4 more times to be sure - but its a great game keep it up!!