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Redgy

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Anyone else finds the writing for this game to be incredibly cringy? I always thought that the writing wasn't this game's strongest point but lately it seems to have gotten worse? Like, I legitimately have to skip some the dialog because I'm getting second-hand embarrassment from it. The way Alice can't stop thirsting after everyone she meets in the game like a middleschool boy, who just got his first boner and these jokes, man.

- Yeah, it's a great weather. IF YOU ARE A SUNFLOWER HAHAHA.
- HAHA, Oh, Alice, you have a great sense of humour!

Does she? :HideThePain:
 

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I mean the new art doesn't look too bad, but its a bit rough and not detailed enough... Im playing an adult game, but the new art looks blurry and even her pussy are not clear... It looks like an oil painting.
 
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saw some people arguing over whether she traces over real pictures, but it looks like she traced over arion69's supergirl art from way back. I don't know if that's frowned upon or anything though. Also I don't think arion traces art bc they usually provide details on their art process, so it's unlikely they just traced from the same real image.
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saw some people arguing over whether she traces over real pictures, but it looks like she traced over arion69's supergirl art from way back. I don't know if that's frowned upon or anything though. Also I don't think arion traces art bc they usually provide details on their art process, so it's unlikely they just traced from the same real image.
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Definitely frowned upon to trace someone else's art, yeah. If you alter it significantly its more of a grey area, but either way someone tracing is an indication that the art will be very inconsistent at best. But the funny thing is that lower image is obviously copied straight from a photo as well (maybe not traced but definitely referenced), so the top one could have just traced that same photo I guess, but if those 2 line up perfectly either they were both tracing or just the newer one was.
 

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saw some people arguing over whether she traces over real pictures, but it looks like she traced over arion69's supergirl art from way back. I don't know if that's frowned upon or anything though. Also I don't think arion traces art bc they usually provide details on their art process, so it's unlikely they just traced from the same real image.
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Very much so. I witnessed the drama of one game dev cutting ties with the artist because they traced and it wasn't even is obvious as that - just some hand positions and stuff. I didn't think it was a big deal but people were pretty pissed.
 

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You can trace (porn) movies like EvaKiss (GGGB, ORS) but not other piece of art? Is it some kind of an artist code of honor?
 

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You can trace (porn) movies like EvaKiss (GGGB, ORS) but not other piece of art? Is it some kind of an artist code of honor?
It would appear so. Drawing from real life source is fine, no different than drawing an art model posing for you, while tracing from other people's art is considered stealing. At least that's my understanding of it.
 
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Porn isn't exactly high art, but I'd consider it part of the arts since it's fundamentally the same as a Wes Anderson film, just different content.
 

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Definitely frowned upon to trace someone else's art, yeah. If you alter it significantly its more of a grey area, but either way someone tracing is an indication that the art will be very inconsistent at best. But the funny thing is that lower image is obviously copied straight from a photo as well (maybe not traced but definitely referenced), so the top one could have just traced that same photo I guess, but if those 2 line up perfectly either they were both tracing or just the newer one was.
I would guess that both are tracing art. The low quality feets and legs on the second image makes me think the original source was cropped at the lower end of the model's body.

While the consistence issue may be true, we can see that easily on Good Girl Gone Bad and Our Red String of Fate with how different some characters may look during sex scenes, it doesn't bother me much. The quality is still high and the frequency of artwork has increased a lot when compared to the previous artist.
 
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They scheduled chapter 6 for august 2023 :rolleyes:
You know that the Dev said the new chapter 5 of remakes will be released around this time, june or july when they choose to remake this game, right? And here we are with chapter 3, so yeah, nothing too good if they said that chapter 4 will be released on august this year, and thats also only happend if theres no delay again like all the previous updates :BootyTime::BootyTime:

But hey, ill be more than happy if this game makes an epic comeback after reaching the level of old story on chapter 4 and start to makes a completely fresh story each chapter after that, so yeah, finger crossed
 

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You can trace (porn) movies like EvaKiss (GGGB, ORS) but not other piece of art? Is it some kind of an artist code of honor?
Sort of a code of honor yeah, but even aside from any arbitrary rules, traced art will pretty much just always look worse than legit drawings. If you're tracing you're much more limited on what you can make because you have to find the perfect reference to trace and you probably don't know how to alter it. And on top of that, as an artist you aren't really improving by tracing because it takes very little thought. So really, its less of an honor thing and more just "you're cheating yourself as well as others." Hopefully that makes sense.
 

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Anyone else finds the writing for this game to be incredibly cringy? I always thought that the writing wasn't this game's strongest point but lately it seems to have gotten worse? Like, I legitimately have to skip some the dialog because I'm getting second-hand embarrassment from it. The way Alice can't stop thirsting after everyone she meets in the game like a middleschool boy, who just got his first boner and these jokes, man.

- Yeah, it's a great weather. IF YOU ARE A SUNFLOWER HAHAHA.
- HAHA, Oh, Alice, you have a great sense of humour!

Does she? :HideThePain:
I was going through the original one and I thought several times the author was trying too hard to force comedic moments. It's especially apparent with the nerd, Alice and the BFF. I hate them in scenes together. It's like they become caricatures of the tropes they're meant to be.

Also, maybe this is redone in the reworked version, but I just hate Tom's sister. She's too much of a bitch for me to enjoy. The animosity was too much and, too late and poorly explained. Tom himself was barely hanging in the love-to-hate ring as well. Should I really be siding with their dad while he cuts through their self-esteem?

After meeting and expressing dislike of them, I don't understand why Alice wouldn't avoid both of them indefinitely.
 

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For anyone who played the original version, was the BMB match as straightforward about bdsm as he is in the current version?
 

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For anyone who played the original version, was the BMB match as straightforward about bdsm as he is in the current version?
Yep, it was.

On that topic, tbh I don´t think it really fits with the overall pace and the "conservative small town girl" premise of the game?
I mean, unless I missed something there is only 1 sex scene in 3 chapters so far but girl wants to be "severely beaten by a sugardaddy" ... ok?! :unsure:
 

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I was going through the original one and I thought several times the author was trying too hard to force comedic moments. It's especially apparent with the nerd, Alice and the BFF. I hate them in scenes together. It's like they become caricatures of the tropes they're meant to be.

Also, maybe this is redone in the reworked version, but I just hate Tom's sister. She's too much of a bitch for me to enjoy. The animosity was too much and, too late and poorly explained. Tom himself was barely hanging in the love-to-hate ring as well. Should I really be siding with their dad while he cuts through their self-esteem?

After meeting and expressing dislike of them, I don't understand why Alice wouldn't avoid both of them indefinitely.
It won't do much good to argue about the merits of the old version of this game.

I believe the relationships are a bit different in the new version. So you might want to try the new one, and see if you like the writing better.
 

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I hope so. I imagine there's still a general track to follow with each character, like Tom being a misfit, but a few tweaks would make some things more bearable. I want to enjoy this, I like every other character besides Tom and his sister.

I'll try the reworked version once I speed through the old version a few times.
 
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