Okay, since you gave me a detailed answer, let me repay in kind.
Didn't expect such a reaction.
I was very busy, and perhaps not quite correctly answered. Nobody upset me, didn't hurt me. You have expressed an opinion, this is normal. It was detailed, thanks for that.
I wrote about the names, because the translator made several mistakes in the names. When I noticed this, I corrected the text for a long time. Freaky was Ann in several places. Ivan was written in different ways Iwan and Ivan. So I decided that I had not seen everything. Just in case, he clarified who's name.
I knew right away that you were talking about a hypothetical situation. But, there is such a thing as high expectations. People are waiting, as in the same Mass Effect, for an epic ending, but they get a traffic light at the end. Then they shout that the developers did not guess their wishes.
In this case, I decided to immediately clarify some points about the game. When I was uploading the game here, I omitted a few tags on purpose so that the events would come as a surprise. Now I also cannot explain why Lena cannot be with Alice. This is spelled out in the character of Lena, and the further history of the character.
This is my personal opinion, but it seems to me that if something happened to a person that happened to Alice, he will not want a relationship. A character's attitude towards romance or sex can change. Let's see how it works out for us.
I understand that it is necessary to cover the interests of many, and therefore Frikki became bi, several guys appeared, and a big bald guy with dark skin. In the future, we will try to maintain diversity. (I don’t know how to write it all correctly, but I hope I didn’t hurt anyone)
The scene in the tent happened because, although people went to work, they still left the city, away from people. They relaxed, newcomers appeared, bonfire, guitar, conversations. I wanted to relax after work, get a little romantic adventure. It didn't work out with Lena because of a quarrel.
When I came up with the plot, it was completely different, then it underwent changes and was written before the end of the demo. There the heroes studied at the institute, everything happened in the park, quite by accident, half of the characters were not there. I read it all and decided that I had to start over. The scene in the subway, I think, but the idea was this, we will be back. Maybe we'll find out who the guy in the hood was.
I will repeat it again. There is a core plot, I know what happened to Alice, who those guys were, why they attacked Alice. I know who Lena is, why she is not in love with Alice. I know what will be further far ahead. This was discussed and was the original idea. But, as many things are discussed and I will listen to the opinion of the players. Write ideas, ask questions.
For help in translation. I was told that you can ask people, and if they like the game, they will agree to help. This is all very good. And, in fact, it would help a lot. But, I can't ask people for this, just showing not such a large piece of the game. Although, due to the forks, there is a lot of text. And yet, there are some points in the text, apparently not everyone noticed this, which are important for understanding the game. You might think that there are mistakes, but this was done on purpose. If I explain the plot itself or the moments that do not need to be edited, will the person be interested in the plot in the future?
And authors can take criticism negatively 
