- Oct 22, 2017
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Been following this since the beginning and my opinion the quality of the story/writing really went downhill. I don't expect an Ernest Hemmingway of porn here, but there is clearly a difference between the last couple of updates and the ones before the huge development pause. Did the dev change the writer or something? Every lewd scene turns out like "Oh my god your dick is so huge, I'm so wet all of a sudden. Let's go to another location and let me suck your cock. Fuck it, let's just do it here in the middle of the street". That's just predictable and boring as hell. The cinema scene from the first or second update was brilliant compared to that. Hopes aren't high, but maybe he gets back on track with that...
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