and i love your game i m following i since v0.1 and i will always follow you bacause you do a very hard work to upload your game every month so even only a new image is enought i know how hard is 
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My only (minor) issue with the story was that I was allowed to progress to the final scene where I am given a choice as to who should die, whether its my roomate or Delilah. This was in a playthrough where I barely even knew Delilah, and we hadnt even kissed.
Why did the game assume that we are really close? Why do I care about her as much as I do for Kaylie or my Roommate???
Please make it so in the next update, the player isnt allowed to progress to that scene, and put a "Complete more of Delilah's storyline" message in the quests screen, so that the player realizes they need to complete more quests in order to reach that stage of the game.
As it stands, when I reached that final scene, it definitely felt like end-game content, at least for version 0.9, and it also felt like I wasnt supposed to be seeing that content, given that I hadnt done anything with Delilah. Really, Delilah and the MC shouldnt have had feelings for each other, and it should have been an easy choice, something I am sure you (the creator) did not intend for.
I also felt I missed stuff with Delilah, and that feeling was confirmed after I loaded a previous save and advanced her storyline.
I believe that this final scene is not only crucial/important to the story, but it adds something that other games in this genre cant offer. Your game feels significant, ambitious, deep, at least for a "porn" game, so to speak.
You have good reason to be proud of your work so far, but its just unfortunate that some of this hard work (especially your excellent writing) is let down by not considering the different paths and focus on character storylines that each of us (the users) might take.
Personally, I wanted to finish my Roommate's and Kaylie's storylines, BEFORE I proceed with Delilah's, and that ultimately was what lessened the impact that this final scene is supposed to have.
Please understand, these little things can actually hurt the playthrough experience quite a bit, they heavily affect how the player is supposed to feel, especially with the amazing dialogue that you deliver in the final scene, and the many revelations that the player gets.
One last thing: When I loaded my previous save, going back in order to advance the story with Delilah, why does she get pregnant? I made sure not to cum inside her, so that shouldnt have happened. I think that there is the implication that there was more sex with her but I didnt see it, and it involved impregnation?
That one didnt really make much sense, but I thought that maybe I was supposed to choose "cum inside" as she was egging me on?
Not quite sure here.
Thank you, and keep up the great work!
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EndlessTaboo There isn't an option for a smaller resolution on Mac. Playing on windowed mode results in a window bigger than my display. I'm assuming you can add more options.
The game has potential, it really just needs a cleanup. The navigation system (both map and going between rooms) is bad at best, and broken at worst. There seem to be a few bugs dotted around with events not triggering.
One thing that may be personal opinion is the "Sex" and "Sneak" inventory items feel like they'd be better suited to pop up icons when something is hovered over, it's just not intuitive at all. Items that are interact-able and not meant to be hidden (e.g. doors or movement hitboxes) should be highlighted or given always visible icons (White with black outline or similar can't ever go wrong).
The games feels rather grindy also as there's no ability to skip text even things that you've seen before. The transition fade between images is too long and text should be allowed to have instant pop in.
The game just feels really clunky and slow right now, and it commits the ultimate sin of being boring. But the concept and writing isn't too bad at all. I hope this is helpful and gives a reasonable checklist of things to improve.
A good test when you're putting in mechanics is clicks and "dead time" how much time would the player take to complete a particular task usually? How much of this is spent doing nothing at all? (e.g. watching fade transitions). How much time is spent doing something that isn't engaging? (e.g. navigating) How many clicks and how much time did it take overall? Does it need to take this many clicks? Does it need to take this long? Follow this process and you'll be sorted in no time.
The game has potential, it really just needs a cleanup. The navigation system (both map and going between rooms) is bad at best, and broken at worst. There seem to be a few bugs dotted around with events not triggering.
One thing that may be personal opinion is the "Sex" and "Sneak" inventory items feel like they'd be better suited to pop up icons when something is hovered over, it's just not intuitive at all. Items that are interact-able and not meant to be hidden (e.g. doors or movement hitboxes) should be highlighted or given always visible icons (White with black outline or similar can't ever go wrong).
The games feels rather grindy also as there's no ability to skip text even things that you've seen before. The transition fade between images is too long and text should be allowed to have instant pop in.
The game just feels really clunky and slow right now, and it commits the ultimate sin of being boring. But the concept and writing isn't too bad at all. I hope this is helpful and gives a reasonable checklist of things to improve.
A good test when you're putting in mechanics is clicks and "dead time" how much time would the player take to complete a particular task usually? How much of this is spent doing nothing at all? (e.g. watching fade transitions). How much time is spent doing something that isn't engaging? (e.g. navigating) How many clicks and how much time did it take overall? Does it need to take this many clicks? Does it need to take this long? Follow this process and you'll be sorted in no time.
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I actually really enjoyed the self aware humor of the X-mas special.
Laughed a number of times.
The way I viewed it - it was a short bonus story - that ended with Lucia.
(Quite well written - Imho)
The last photo of the "room-mate" was the present.
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i=I can't find the building in the city center where I should find the dagger
guys - I can not Progress with deliah although i have given her everything - how to start that Picture? where is the Location?
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after giving her the spices and her backpack (need to be asked for those by her first) use the "Sex" Icon from the inventory on her and choose intercourse -> Vaginal
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I found coming back another day allows you to see her.
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well i stuck at christmas tree
girl says mistle toe something and northing happens
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Add +relationship and pregnancy for main picture girl she is Hot
fix weapons are so weak 2 - 3 hits they broke + exploration + survival
add more diferent sex positions
you could make main chars Mother alive = make she have amnesia to dam i have demon inside me hahaha ...
fix weapons are so weak 2 - 3 hits they broke + exploration + survival
add more diferent sex positions
you could make main chars Mother alive
= make she have amnesia to dam i have demon inside me hahaha ...
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Yes that's the end of it.
It tried endlessly to try to kiss her also but - but I guess that was just to taboo to implement in a holiday version.
(But would have been nice)
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can someone help me please, i already gived her the card's pack, but i can't meet with they in the dining room because she not appear. (sy my english)