VN Ren'Py Completed Making Memories [v1.0a] [Kvitravn Tales]

[Deleted member 3078705]

Man, this game has potential! Both relationships are starting to get hot, and I love that there's much more to them than just trying to fuck.

As a side note for the dev, I'm sure you're aware that your renders are quite grainy. You might want to look into something like Topaz Denoiser.

 

[crazyfingers87]

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Overview:
A trip not taken, a lie befallen - as Alvaro (name changeable) and his ward are both traumatized by a sudden change in their lives.
With not many whom he knows, he goes back to the only one who knows him inside out as they rediscover and re-evaluate the nature of their relationships and make new memories.​

Thread Updated: 2022-08-02
Release Date: 2022-08-01
Developer: Kvitravn Tales

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Censored: No
Version: Episode 6 - v0.6a
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Please start a new game if you're encountering any crashes related to missing audio files.
Here are the saves that leave you just before the new update starts.*

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Others: COMPRESSED* - ANDROID*

Extras: Saves - * (Also Includes HOTFIX)
HOTFIX (Missing sayer in Xiomara's TOP route, Not needed for v0.6a)
* This unofficial port/version is not released by the developer, download at your own risk.


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Looks like the Chicks are very well Drawn & Sexy Can't wait to play.

 

[Kvitravn Dev]

Man, this game has potential! Both relationships are starting to get hot, and I love that there's much more to them than just trying to fuck.

As a side note for the dev, I'm sure you're aware that your renders are quite grainy. You might want to look into something like Topaz Denoiser.

Already use Denoise AI, but since my go to mood is Low light, the choices I'm left with are clean but washed out images or detailed but grainy images.
I tend to lean towards the later.
I still do use it if the grain is unavoidable.

 

[jekass69]

no sex scene?

 

[herreraaa]

IC patch is working?
MC only calls his sis "best friend" but Xioama he calls daughter

 

[QaliberDK]

Already use Denoise AI, but since my go to mood is Low light, the choices I'm left with are clean but washed out images or detailed but grainy images.
I tend to lean towards the later.
I still do use it if the grain is unavoidable.

Hmm, i don't really notice it much while playing.
Almost looks like a subtle film grain or artistic filter, i honestly quite like it like that.
Personal preference, i guess.

 

[Spuds18]

great game so far, although i wish we could ignore the ward xD .

 

[AntiTsundere]

4 gigs of no action, amazing

 

[jelow333]

It's a shame you drew the wife so attractively. But MC is also one of the most attractive middle-aged male characters in games. Praised

 

[moonshadow]

That's the main reason why I wished Luisa would remain. Not because I 'accept' her behaviour. IRL I would'nt even have given her a second of my time to 'talk'. Cheating is never ok. But again, this is a 'game', not irl. And Luisa is effing fine to look at. And again it might be controversial, but I find Luisa more pleasant to the eyes than Ava. Ava is lovely dont get me wrong. But if I had to choose, based on apperance, Luisa all the way.
Ava has a slight touch of kindness in her appearance (cant rly explain it better) that I love though. Luisa truly gives me the vibes of someone u cant truly 100% trust. And again not fair to judge people like that based on their looks alone. BUT this is, once again, fiction, a game.

 

[jelow333]

Nice family drama (I like it), well written, but with a bitter aftertaste. What kind of mother and wife would choose a home (in our bed, I know it's just a game, but sometimes I'm too much in the game, sorry and my destruction is not rational) for such cheating, with a young colleague. Maybe we (players who don't like to see their wife cheating on them in the game) would understand if she fucked in some hotel, his apartment, after a few drinks. But she planned it, so she paid for their absence (store visit). Or what a rotten person you have to be to even think about screwing a young co-worker and not think about the day your daughter graduates. It would be better for me if there was no explanation from Luisa. Only she is gone, the other two (sister and daughter are beautiful) and I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story. Please continue with the game according to your ideas from the developers (sorry Google translation).

 

[Boogg]

Oh man so the cheating bitch just keeps hanging around. Yea I am out. Especially since the dev is going to use her in future titles. Thanks for the Heads up dev! One more for the recycle bin.

 

[herreraaa]

It was sad to not had a choice "choke ex wife to death"
Lame excuse and looks like she was always distant, specially from Xiomara.
Good ridance, hope the cab explode.

 

[jelow333]

No, don't stop, please try, daughter and sister, they deserve it. You will see. The wife is unimportant, I don't think she will be in the story at all. The wife has moved away, now the real story is unfolding. The decision will be only which of the beautiful women you will have, or several of them?

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

I'm not mad about the whole thing with Luisa and how it unfolded. At first going into this game I wanted nothing more than for the MC to get revenge of some sort but at the end when the option came to give her a "proper farewell" I took it. Regardless of what she did and how moronic her excuse was,the MC seems genuinely happy with his life now for the first time in years and so does Mara. he also gets closure by parting with her on good terms. I say that's way better than getting petty revenge that would only cause him self destruction and leave him bitter. Plus I think her life atm is punishment enough. She lost her family and her husband, she's all alone now. She thought she deserved better than what she had and now she has nothing,pretty sad, tho it's the mistake most of us make in life. but to qoute Linkin Park "you don't know what you've got until it's gone"

 

[Boogg]

No, don't stop, please try, daughter and sister, they deserve it. You will see. The wife is unimportant, I don't think she will be in the story at all. The wife has moved away, now the real story is unfolding. The decision will be only which of the beautiful women you will have, or several of them?

I don't know. I just don't like the direction the story is going in. Add to that the fact that I don't know a word of Spanish! If the game is in English then use English! I don't care about their "native" language or and the constant use of Spanish is killing the flow for me.

 

[Deleted member 3078705]

I liked the way Luisa's send-off went. I thought the dev giving the option to say nothing was great because it felt like a "I won't waste my breath" moment. I don't know if that's what he intended, but it felt like a last middle finger to Luisa. Now she has to see the man she did dirty be happier than he's been in years.

 

[Simulacrum29]

Kvitravn Dev
I tried the game the first time and I love it. The visuals and the animations are great, I like Xio and Ava. I like the Relationship building between Mc and the girls.

But the translation could/should be better. There are some instances where the sentences are only half there. Some parts feel clunky and unnatural.

In some parts, the Narrator is false, for example, when Ava kicks the air after she hears about the cheating, is labeled as MC-Name and this happens in a small number of places before that.

The female version of the Oedipus complex is called the Elektra complex.

There were some instances where the mc is referred to as "your MC-Name" which should probably be "your Dad". At least one of those is in the first Therapy session.

After the first therapy session and after the nightmare Ava stands in front of the MC in a Sundress and talks to him about her going to therapy and what she and Elvira are up to all while the pictures show how Xio is sleeping on you???
followed by jump cuts between Xio and Ava.

who the fuck is Carmin and what is she doing in our Home? (cake with police escort scene)
Carmin got introduced half a chapter later. Either those scenes are out of order or there is some explanation missing. Why started Ava a Bakery out of her kitchen?

 

[Demogorgon1422]

Those damned costume changes! The detail put into each day is different outfit. So well done

 

[thetrueredking]

The random spanish interjected is throwing me off