Éama
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Lovely and very unique VN. Congrats for finishing it. 
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Making Memories [v1.0a] [Kvitravn Tales]
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Avaron1974
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baklol
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well if you cant support devs don't talk shit about it you should make your own vn then
baklol
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sorry my bad mate i thought you were talking about game
Zoomaa
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not that many this vn is very story focused not a lot of sex but when it happens its meaningful
PPLayer
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Kvitravn Dev ...
At first and most important I wanna say "Congratulations for finishing your game" too.
It adds to your reputation
And secondly, I played every update of your game, but now with the completed "tag" I feel shockingly surprised & quite a bit disappointed - somewhat left hanging ... I was hoping/expecting for more story & scenes ... for example more scenes with the characters you introduced to us during the game. The classmate of the daughter, the friends of the sister, the coffee-shop/bakery visitors, the ex-wife. And not to forget: the daughter, Sister and Neighbor ...
I feel there is sooooo much wasted potential - so many possible sexy scenes not happened.
However, I wish you good luck too with your next project ^^
Maybe we see us there again ...
At first and most important I wanna say "Congratulations for finishing your game" too.
It adds to your reputation
And secondly, I played every update of your game, but now with the completed "tag" I feel shockingly surprised & quite a bit disappointed - somewhat left hanging ... I was hoping/expecting for more story & scenes ... for example more scenes with the characters you introduced to us during the game. The classmate of the daughter, the friends of the sister, the coffee-shop/bakery visitors, the ex-wife. And not to forget: the daughter, Sister and Neighbor ...
I feel there is sooooo much wasted potential - so many possible sexy scenes not happened.
However, I wish you good luck too with your next project ^^
Maybe we see us there again ...
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kaczy091
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Wow, now you shocked me that this game was "finished" For me, it was just the middle of the story and I was hoping to start the best part of the game, where there are a lot of scenes and developing them.
absalon1977
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I am pretty sure it was announced at some point that this game was just the prequel to the main story.
moovigym
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Yes, this game was a prologue to a much bigger, much in-depth game.
Everyone with a detailed enough model will get their own storyline - be it them being the LIs, Friend character or MCs.
Making all of it under one game would mean having to restrict myself to just 1 style of creating and the imminent risk of bloating the game to unmanageable proportions.
Appreciate it, chiefAt first and most important I wanna say "Congratulations for finishing your game" too.
It adds to your reputation
Demoness_Kiss
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my only complain aside the broken english: The Epilogue
Why?
Because an epilogue is supposed to be a way to let your readers know what happened to your characters after the story has ended—particularly if the end of the story is ambiguous. It can also be a chance for you to show how the events of the entire story impacted the characters—the lessons they learned, and how they have grown.
But here it doesn't happen: We have the characters opening their restaurant and that's it, this is a conclusion, an epilogue is the "post-conclusion" it's usually a time-skip that shows the characters AFTER an amount of time(like a time-skip a couple of years later) which again it doesn't happen here
Why?
Because an epilogue is supposed to be a way to let your readers know what happened to your characters after the story has ended—particularly if the end of the story is ambiguous. It can also be a chance for you to show how the events of the entire story impacted the characters—the lessons they learned, and how they have grown.
But here it doesn't happen: We have the characters opening their restaurant and that's it, this is a conclusion, an epilogue is the "post-conclusion" it's usually a time-skip that shows the characters AFTER an amount of time(like a time-skip a couple of years later) which again it doesn't happen here
Danyboyrojas995
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At first I was a little disappointed to see that it was "completed", but seeing the comments it calms me down a bit, he continues to do a very good job,
very good VN, good characters, story and renders, keep it up
Well my opinion does not change with this latest update..
The last three chapters have disappointed me overall.
Even if I’m not really interested in Ava, I must admit that her story has been well measured.
But the daughter is a disaster for me...
If I have to do a summary of the evolution (MCxdaughter ) quickly =
For me this game was created around Ava and the daughter is only secondary.
That’s just my opinion.
The last three chapters have disappointed me overall.
Even if I’m not really interested in Ava, I must admit that her story has been well measured.
But the daughter is a disaster for me...
If I have to do a summary of the evolution (MCxdaughter ) quickly =
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For me this game was created around Ava and the daughter is only secondary.
That’s just my opinion.
Pimpam
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Kudos to the developer for finishing his project, which most developers on this site couldn't achieve.