VN Ren'Py Completed Making Memories [v1.0a] [Kvitravn Tales]

[Kristu]

bro i liked this game a lot, and i hate these type of incest where u just fck ur mother on day1... but i need to say...
Blue balls in this game is real man too much teasing and ending with nothing

 

[daemonblackfyre]

Does this game has animations?
I like the render from previews.

 

[sobstorydev_memes]

Does this game has animation?s
I like the render from previews.

do you like public transport? when this is your kink, you enjoy this .... whatever it is.

 

[daemonblackfyre]

do you like public transport? when this is your kink, you enjoy this .... whatever it is.

I was drunk actually hahaha.

 

[NakkiMuki]

7 episodes and no content. These games can't keep you interested with just kisses and good-looking characters. Even before 5 episodes, I started pressing ctrl when nothing happens in the game. And I wasn't wrong when nothing happened after 7 episodes. In other words, the story of this game died already in 4 episodes and it has no interest in the whole thing, since there is no sexual content. NO SEXUAL CONTENT tag should be added to the list. And it does NOT bring more game enjoyment if the choices do not affect anything. So this can almost be marked as a mere demo or a presentation of the game now with this content. Well, at least I'll get more hard drive space after this.

At this level, if this is a slow burn, then TP: The Class Next Door will have a bad competitor. I can't stand playing a game that has no content. If I want this kind of content, I read a book.

 

[sorco2003]

Excellent episode! every time I like it more, the story takes me by the nose, when I think that the intention is already transparent, it gives a little turn that leaves me waiting for more...
I like that game of past and present with Ava, it gives a lot of play to what happens to them today. I'm surprised by the end of the episode, even though the harem lite made you assume how things were going to be, the fact that it's like this adds some surprises (will Ava think the same?).
Great VN, it even made me forget the bad taste in my mouth that the encounter with Luisa left me.
Great job!

 

[Kitchentable]

Btw. is Elvira a vampire or something like that?

There was a line where she said that she mentored Ava in college.
Dunno if that is a lost in translation thing but I understood it as her
being a professor so their age gap should be bigger? Elvira doesn't
look that much older.

But then again...Elvira could just been a postgraduate and thus the age gap
being smaller.

But then again Elvira also used a line where she said that she's seen things for decades.
Decades are not centuries but only old people talk about their experiences in decades.
Not even 40 year olds do that yet. And around 40-ish is what her and Ava are supposed to be, no?

 

[Kvitravn Dev]

Btw. is Elvira a vampire or something like that?

You're onto something here, chief.

 

[gadu2121]

7 episodes and no content. These games can't keep you interested with just kisses and good-looking characters. Even before 5 episodes, I started pressing ctrl when nothing happens in the game. And I wasn't wrong when nothing happened after 7 episodes. In other words, the story of this game died already in 4 episodes and it has no interest in the whole thing, since there is no sexual content. NO SEXUAL CONTENT tag should be added to the list. And it does NOT bring more game enjoyment if the choices do not affect anything. So this can almost be marked as a mere demo or a presentation of the game now with this content. Well, at least I'll get more hard drive space after this.

At this level, if this is a slow burn, then TP: The Class Next Door will have a bad competitor. I can't stand playing a game that has no content. If I want this kind of content, I read a book.

In general I agree with what you say but

what you need to understand to make a good VN is to find the middle ground between strong and interesting story and sexual stuff (if you want to make it erotic VN or porn of course )

2 VN I loved: HILLSIDE
On the one hand a great story but after so much time without explicit scenes ... I got tired .

and Motherless which is all the opposite
A simplistic mafia story and tons of sex scenes that are all the same . I got tired too..

 

[bubba145]

This game is breath of fresh air for triple x games imo.Probably will be in my top 5 or 3.I hate those mindless 'porn games'.Looking forward to see the next updates,I would hate to see it get abandoned.

 

[franksiinatra]

wow, I haven't checked in for 3 updates and STILL its a whole lot of talking and not enough fucking. I get it Disney, romance or whatever, it's been 7 episodes already man, hop to it jesus christ. This almost gives worse blue balls than Russian made VN's

 

[NakkiMuki]

In general I agree with what you say but

what you need to understand to make a good VN is to find the middle ground between strong and interesting story and sexual stuff (if you want to make it erotic VN or porn of course )

2 VN I loved: HILLSIDE
On the one hand a great story but after so much time without explicit scenes ... I got tired .

and Motherless which is all the opposite
A simplistic mafia story and tons of sex scenes that are all the same . I got tired too..

Just think to yourself how explosive this game would be if there was more content. Now this is absolutely zero. I don't care how well things are written if there is no sexual content. Then that story is completely crap and I'll move on to another game like for example Motherless...

 

[faradhii]

OK, don't get me wrong the sister is hotter than hot (except for the enormous boobs. Sorry, just not into that, to each their own) but I came into the story for the father daughter relationship. Is it just me or does Xiomara seem like she's distancing herself and pushing dad into the sisters arms? If that's going to be the case it just isn't my cup of tea. Anyone have any insights?

 

[gadu2121]

OK, don't get me wrong the sister is hotter than hot (except for the enormous boobs. Sorry, just not into that, to each their own) but I came into the story for the father daughter relationship. Is it just me or does Xiomara seem like she's distancing herself and pushing dad into the sisters arms? If that's going to be the case it just isn't my cup of tea. Anyone have any insights?

I think the same thing.
This episode focuses the sister and her potential as "mom"
During the photo session the girl sees very well how close her father is to her sister.
The question is, does the girl step aside because she "wants a mom" and does it for her father’s sake because she’s leaving the house?

or if she doesn’t feel comfortable with the MC’s complicity with her sister and she’s thinking about quitting.
The fact that the episode have no time dad/daughter does not really help to understand.In the next episode I imagine

 

[kameohawk]

OK, don't get me wrong the sister is hotter than hot (except for the enormous boobs. Sorry, just not into that, to each their own) but I came into the story for the father daughter relationship. Is it just me or does Xiomara seem like she's distancing herself and pushing dad into the sisters arms? If that's going to be the case it just isn't my cup of tea. Anyone have any insights?

I think the manner in which 0.6 ended and 0.7 started, she's starting to notice there's chemistry between the MC and his sister. As someone who's just lost her family I can appreciate her trying to fill that void by creating a new one, at least to a certain degree. She's enabling the chemistry she believes she's seeing but that doesn't detract from her own feelings or chemistry with the MC, it will just take longer to allow that to open up.

The fact during the latest release she goes as far as to refer to the sister as "mom shaped" and how every girl needs her mom back that up. She's lost something and she sees a way of getting it back, or at least a suitable equivalent.

The game doesn't seem to be set up to have her walk off into the sunset "David Banner style", it's not at the "huh, those two kissed, we should totally bang"

 

[ShiroObake]

i am having the exact same issue. with and without the patch. anyone have a answer as to why?

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[kameohawk]

I had a look on Discord and didn't see anything, is there anywhere in particular we should raise wee dialogue issues? Incorrectly capitalised words, spelling mistakes etc?

 

[Demogorgon1422]

I love this game. Thank you for update

 

[MythMackay]

i am having the exact same issue. with and without the patch. anyone have a answer as to why?

I got the same error when choosing "I know". I just selected "Tease her" and moved on, but that should probably be looked in to. Great update, though.

 

[NakedSingularity]

7 episodes and no content. These games can't keep you interested with just kisses and good-looking characters. Even before 5 episodes, I started pressing ctrl when nothing happens in the game. And I wasn't wrong when nothing happened after 7 episodes. In other words, the story of this game died already in 4 episodes and it has no interest in the whole thing, since there is no sexual content. NO SEXUAL CONTENT tag should be added to the list. And it does NOT bring more game enjoyment if the choices do not affect anything. So this can almost be marked as a mere demo or a presentation of the game now with this content. Well, at least I'll get more hard drive space after this.

At this level, if this is a slow burn, then TP: The Class Next Door will have a bad competitor. I can't stand playing a game that has no content. If I want this kind of content, I read a book.

Can you imagine making a porn movie that actually had a plot and the only sex scene was the last 10 minutes after 3-4 hours of story development and maybe some kisses and teasing? Some AVN's like blueballing their dwindling fanbase and there's not much A in their AVN. At least Summer's Gone warns you at the beginning before the menu that the MC and his sister Nami will just be teasing so long that the player could probably fuck his real life sister faster (only took ~3 years for mine if you count the time the secret crush started).