hi
AdultKing
you cant imagine how happy i am, you still work on "mans best friend" !!
i would like to give you some pros/cons, cuz thats the best way to improve, right ?
pros:
- story overall great idea and to hear what MC doggo thinks !! ( inner voice ) really fun !
- same goes for human "inner voice" great idea!
- i really love the idea with "Safah" how she tries to gets Zoey into besti
...pls let it develop
really slow, dont rush it with zoey and the girls getting into
...bestiality !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! take your time !!!
- overall renderings getting better !
cons:
- VN ... yes Visual Novel.. right know it feels like you click through different scenes
...and the story in general, but there is no corruption system or decisions MC doggo
...can make or where he wants to go etc...
- Rendering, there are many many clipping errors, f.e feets in high heels, legs
...through clothes / outfits and hair clipping..
- the story progresses to fast imho, dont rush is, give it more time !
I would love to help you with rendering and get into your team, so you can progress faster, dunno if you are interested, you can PM me.. no payment needed !!!!