I am disappointed.
You don't need to render every motion. You render the critical action once and let the rest animate in the viewer's imagination. Check the renders in Pale Pure. Less quantity and more quality.
The story can be more interesting. Right now, it appears the women are more horny than the dog. Poor dog.
Do away with dog dialogues. They are distracting. Also, they sound like human thoughts. Render just picture with setting and the viewer will imagine the dog's feelings and motives.
Too many women. Build character over gallery. Simulate viewer's imagination.
I hope my feedback helps.
You don't need to render every motion. You render the critical action once and let the rest animate in the viewer's imagination. Check the renders in Pale Pure. Less quantity and more quality.
The story can be more interesting. Right now, it appears the women are more horny than the dog. Poor dog.
Do away with dog dialogues. They are distracting. Also, they sound like human thoughts. Render just picture with setting and the viewer will imagine the dog's feelings and motives.
Too many women. Build character over gallery. Simulate viewer's imagination.
I hope my feedback helps.