Havenless_

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Well, what more can I say that hasn't already been said?
Very good first chapter. The main character is a maybe a little goof for my taste with certain comments he makes, but I don't see it as excessive. As I said, it's just for my taste. Overall I like him. It's an enjoyable MC.

The girls are very attractive. So far, my favorite is Rylee. But maybe because of history I'm feeling more connected to Layla.
My least favorite is Chrysta. (I think that's her name) Those kind of bitchy characters I don't usually ever like, but maybe in the future she can be a good friend and sure, more than just a friend.

Finally, I want to talk about Sierra. I don't know how her character will develop in the future. I'll put it under a spoiler just in case.

From what has been seen so far, I'm very glad that the relationship between her and the MC didn't end because one of them was unfaithful. Normally this is the argument when we are told that the MC broke up with his girlfriend, because she cheated on him. But I'm glad that's not the case. I get the impression that they had a pretty healthy and stable relationship. Sierra seems nice enough. I hope to have the opportunity for the MC to reconnect with her in a good way.

Very nice work and much success in the development!
 

Bucketbot89

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This MC is really unlikeable, which is kinda the point I guess, but the ladies are gonna have to be super likeable to make up for him. To be fair I did like the girls so far (Xia's got a fun personality and a nice ass). I'll see ya in v 0.2.
Speaking of Xia:
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There may or may not be other clipping issues, I wasn't really looking for them, I just happened to notice these.
 

Sleeping In Pieces

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This MC is really unlikeable, which is kinda the point I guess, but the ladies are gonna have to be super likeable to make up for him. To be fair I did like the girls so far (Xia's got a fun personality and a nice ass). I'll see ya in v 0.2.
Speaking of Xia:
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There may or may not be other clipping issues, I wasn't really looking for them, I just happened to notice these.
The second preview image has this issue as well.
 

Joi_fan

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What is the relationship between the mc and the ladies? In other words, does it have any incest?

I know is no tagged as such, but some games have incest without a tag and I'm hopping this is one of them:p
 

Star Dude

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What is the relationship between the mc and the ladies? In other words, does it have any incest?

I know is no tagged as such, but some games have incest without a tag and I'm hopping this is one of them:p
No incest - one is a former neighbor otherwise moved away from mother. Any incest patch would really, really force things.
Can't we have some games without incest?
 

seekin4porn

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Hats off to you, devs! You know you made an awesome job when you create a visual novel worth reading. Every. Line!
 

draken99999

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Not bad as a whole but some of the choices are well.. I have no idea what I'm choosing. Mostly when talking to Layla have no idea if MC is flirting or perving..o_O
 

Blue Otter Games

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Going to comment this as a general thing: no character for Chapter 1 is just in it for that chapter.

The stewardess and Siarra are both going to come back in the story, and it isn't as simple as what they could or couldn't be. This is a story of your character. Things aren't as easy as apologize and get back together.

If you like these characters, fret not, they are coming back! Maybe in ways you don't entirely expect and some you want. :)
 

Sleeping In Pieces

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So let me get this straight:
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Well... They had to be able to afford the surgeries and therapy somehow.
Going to comment this as a general thing: no character for Chapter 1 is just in it for that chapter.
Eh.... What about Xia's nude models? Are we ever going to get side action with them?
Because frankly of the main LIs, one is still moving you out of the bro-zone, one hates your guts, one is probably well versed at fending off sexual advances and the last two are different brands of crazy. Oh and Siarra's halfway around the country/world.

Also, i'd recommend making the otter hunt persistent. Having to replay the game just because you missed one or two is going to get old quickly as the game grows.
 

Blue Otter Games

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I've made a Walkthrough/gallery mod for this game

Features
  • Best dialogue choises highlighted green
  • Added a "Unlock all" to Otter hunt gallery
  • Added a scene gallery
Installation: Extract the mod folder to your Matrix Hearts folder then overwrite if prompted

Download:
We and others have found a bork with the Otter Hunt code that doesn't keep the unlocks persistent.

I promise we are working on it for the next update!

Until then, show this man some appreciation. His mod has the function to keep them all unlocked for you until we fix it.

Thanks Scrappy! Appreciate the effort and work! :)
 
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