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I just tried out your game and it appears that you changed the penis size, at least that's what I assume from the forums. Everyone was saying that he was on the small side but the MC I am seeing is oversized. It's a shame because I'm with the crowd that is tired of horse-dicks. I'd prefer average or just a bit larger instead of ridiculous. It's a trope that has begun to wear on a lot of us.
That brings me to the second trope in your game. The sister and the blacksmith. For some reason a lot of creators think that we want girl on girl content and a lot of us are sick of Bi-sexual Li's being thrown into the game to justify this content. It just bores us. I read something yesterday in another forum that made it finally make sense to me. A lot of new creators use porn as the source of their sex scenes and that is actually the opposite of what most of us want in a visual novel. It does however explain the girl on girl content and the voyeurism scene, (which the tag is missing for) which you made avoidable but did not give enough clue to know what it was until you stepped in the middle of it, with the clue "Interesting noises". That could have meant anything in this type of game and disgusted me because I couldn't even roll back to get out of it.
All that being said I have no issue with any fetishes that you put in your game but I will not play it unless you have tagged it appropriately and it is clearly scripted to be 100% avoidable. The Bi-sexual Li's on the other hand have been made canon and that basically ruins them for a lot of us. If you had made that content 100% avoidable and optional it would work for us.
I like the premise of your game and I would have liked to play it and instead of just deleting it so I wanted to give you some constructive criticism rather than being silent. Make the game that you want but be transparent of your intentions. Your work gives off NTR vibes which will ignite a firestorm in the forums and chase a lot of people away unless you state unequivocally yes or no to whether it will be in your game.
I wish you best with your story and I'll check out the forums in the future to see where you went with this and if I like what they say I'll give your work another go.
That brings me to the second trope in your game. The sister and the blacksmith. For some reason a lot of creators think that we want girl on girl content and a lot of us are sick of Bi-sexual Li's being thrown into the game to justify this content. It just bores us. I read something yesterday in another forum that made it finally make sense to me. A lot of new creators use porn as the source of their sex scenes and that is actually the opposite of what most of us want in a visual novel. It does however explain the girl on girl content and the voyeurism scene, (which the tag is missing for) which you made avoidable but did not give enough clue to know what it was until you stepped in the middle of it, with the clue "Interesting noises". That could have meant anything in this type of game and disgusted me because I couldn't even roll back to get out of it.
All that being said I have no issue with any fetishes that you put in your game but I will not play it unless you have tagged it appropriately and it is clearly scripted to be 100% avoidable. The Bi-sexual Li's on the other hand have been made canon and that basically ruins them for a lot of us. If you had made that content 100% avoidable and optional it would work for us.
I like the premise of your game and I would have liked to play it and instead of just deleting it so I wanted to give you some constructive criticism rather than being silent. Make the game that you want but be transparent of your intentions. Your work gives off NTR vibes which will ignite a firestorm in the forums and chase a lot of people away unless you state unequivocally yes or no to whether it will be in your game.
I wish you best with your story and I'll check out the forums in the future to see where you went with this and if I like what they say I'll give your work another go.
