- Dec 1, 2019
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Great writing and progression in the story so far, hope the MC grows in confidence with the "landlady" and starts to be more dominant.
Well there is handjob and ass touching.is it still just a tease or does it have some action on it guys?
thanx man better wait for the next update then lolWell there is handjob and ass touching.
So it has been a kind of blueballing experience for me so far but its not intentional by design so far.. Just how far the story had progressed.
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Suzinak, it is indeed a good idea to put some research into this issue, as the saying goes better late then never.Thanks for all the good comments / reviews.
I have written something in my bad English, I hope it is understandable.
I start with whether what I do is ethical or not. I turn a story shared for free into a visual novel and publish it completely free of charge. I have a Patreon page yes but no one has to subscribe to me to play this game. I tried to reach the author to get his/her permission, but as I said, he/she has not been active for 10 years and I could not reach it. And it saddens me that some people write here as if I took the author's story and shared it and made money from it. The story can be very good and I think it is very good, but I have a very serious effort to turn it into a visual novel and again I distribute it for free. I cannot understand what is written about whether it is ethical or not. UndercoverLover As you mentioned, I could change the story a little bit and share it like a story I wrote, then would it be ethical? Maybe I am thinking wrong and what I did may be wrong and if there is a lot of criticism about this, I can close my Patreon page and stop turning someone else's story into a visual novel.
UndercoverLover When it comes to copyright, I don't think it will be a problem since I can convert a free shared story into a visual novel for free, but I will do research on it. Thanks for your warning.
No. No one needs to be randomly cucked.Well, I only go by girls, so I was referring landlady (mom).
I did not understand the course of your thoughts.No. No one needs to be randomly cucked.
what a shitty example. The renders for the first two episodes probably took way more work than writing that story. Besides that, the story is 11 years old by now, rotting on some website with literally thousands of other stories. You act like he's stealing some man's life work, while all parts of the story were released over a course of three months. Probably took him a few hours to write, a couple of days at most. This thread already has more comments than the original story with a total of 42 comments.Dont kid yourself into wording that this is not profiting from this as youre not selling the game directly. Also you would be pretty stupid to take that possibillity later on to sell it to steam which is also out of the question if things stay as they are.
How would you like it if i come back to this and steal your as you said hard work in renders and release a new game with them with other text around them in a few years without your consent?
Actually what they are suggesting would help the fun to continue no matter what. Intentionally leaving your work vulnerable to copyright strike does the opposite. This VN has practically copypasted parts word for word from that story (seriously even the commas). Taking the story and then using your own freakin words to make the VN based on it, isn't that hard. We are not talking about Shakespeare here, it's just a silly story about measuring cum...what a shitty example. The renders for the first two episodes probably took way more work than writing that story. Besides that, the story is 11 years old by now, rotting on some website with literally thousands of other stories. You act like he's stealing some man's life work, while all parts of the story were released over a course of three months. Probably took him a few hours to write, a couple of days at most. This thread already has more comments than the original story with a total of 42 comments.
Get a hold of yourself and stop spoiling the fun for everyone because you feel obliged to play the morality police, over some internet porn story whose existence is barely know to anyone. You are the guy that must be most fun at parties.