Ren'Py Abandoned Melanie Is Horny [v0.05] [TheBardOfAllTales]

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Overview:
This is my very first learning project. I will develop this game while learning how to program.
You play the role of a guy (you can choose the name) and interact with some girls. For some of them you will be able to decide what is your relationship with them (e.g. sister, cousin, friend, mother, stepmother...). My goal is to make a game that will allow me to learn how to program/game-developing while dealing whit all the hassle that comes with maintaining the code and also to make something that you guys will enjoy, that's why I'll need all the feedback you can give (seriously, every suggestion or critique is more than welcome)!!!
I just started this project (November 18 2018) and I'd like to see how much I'll accomplish in the next months and how much I will grow as a developer.

Some thoughts (update 0.05 on 14-10-2019):
Well guys, it's been really a while since the previous version. The game has been completely rewritten and now the gameplay is what I always wanted it to be. At the moment you have an invetory (that won't be used in this version) with a machine gun and some flowers, I put those there as a test and thought to leave them just for fun (so don't worry if you can't figure out if they are meant for something or not, they aren't!).
I really hope you can enjoy it, if you read all the text it should give you about an hour of game.
As always, if you don't mind, please report any bugs that you find, I will try to fix them as soon as possible.
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Thread Update: 2019-10-14
Release Date: 2019-10-14
Developer: TheBardOfAllTales
Censored: No
Version: 0.05
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[Bagley]

Thank you for this, it was an enjoyable 5 minutes. The english was almost spot on (only 1 or 2 typos but I'm not complaining!) RenPy worked perfectly so well done on your first attempt, and good luck for your next project!

 

[DrackDrap]

Melanie Rios

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

Thank you for this, it was an enjoyable 5 minutes. The english was almost spot on (only 1 or 2 typos but I'm not complaining!) RenPy worked perfectly so well done on your first attempt, and good luck for your next project!

Glad to hear that things went well

Melanie Rios

I know man... I know...


Anyway. Thanks for playing it guys

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

Thank you for this, it was an enjoyable 5 minutes. The english was almost spot on (only 1 or 2 typos but I'm not complaining!) RenPy worked perfectly so well done on your first attempt, and good luck for your next project!

Melanie Rios

Hi guys,
I've made the first update to the game!
If you are interested here's the link:
Look origianl post
Hope you enjoy!

 

[Bagley]

Hi guys,
I've made the first update to the game!
If you are interested here's the link:

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Hope you enjoy!

Hi,

Thanks for the update. I've responded in this thread rather than the new one as this is where the original version was posted.

The encounter with Victoria Rae was good, if anything it was better than with Melanie.

Are you going to continue with updates to this and add more choices or gameplay options, possibly turning it in to a visual novel similar to Bad Life Choices that also uses real porn? If so, it would be worth contacting the mods to see if this can be moved over to the main Games forum to get you more visibility and feedback, and maybe some ideas and help from other devs.

Good luck!

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

Hi,

Thanks for the update. I've responded in this thread rather than the new one as this is where the original version was posted.

The encounter with Victoria Rae was good, if anything it was better than with Melanie.

Are you going to continue with updates to this and add more choices or gameplay options, possibly turning it in to a visual novel similar to Bad Life Choices that also uses real porn? If so, it would be worth contacting the mods to see if this can be moved over to the main Games forum to get you more visibility and feedback, and maybe some ideas and help from other devs.

Good luck!

Hi Shyg6,
thanks for the feedback
Yes, I'm going to keep updating the game for a while and I plan to implement various game mechanics (I just learned 2 minutes ago how to use status bars. This way some new girls will have love points that will be visible and based on their amount there will be locked/unlocked sex scenes...).
Also, I will use real porn. I'm planning to buy a pc capable to do rendering in the future (6 months probably), but at the same time I want to improve a lot with my programming skills, so I will keep updating the game...

After (probably) two more updates I'm going to ask to mods to move the thread (or to allow me to post on the Games Section). I'm not going to do it yet since I don't feel comfortable with the quality/level of the work yet.

Thanks again buddy!

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

New update guys,
please have a look at the first post and tell me what you think

 

[JG07]

Always glad to see stuff with the "real porn" tag, especially when it's not the latest TF/Sissification rape-victim simulator .0001b alpha.

As a proof of concept, this game seems promising. I see your future plans include (maybe) adding videos, and I would say you should definitely do that. Still images are cool, but something seems to be missing. Doesn't have to be massive cuts, short clips here and there (30 seconds to a minute or two) although I admit I have no idea how much work that is, or how much it would increase the size. Good luck, I will definitely be keeping an eye on this one.

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

As a proof of concept, this game seems promising. I see your future plans include (maybe) adding videos, and I would say you should definitely do that. Still images are cool, but something seems to be missing. Doesn't have to be massive cuts, short clips here and there (30 seconds to a minute or two) although I admit I have no idea how much work that is, or how much it would increase the size. Good luck, I will definitely be keeping an eye on this one.

Hi JG07!
First of all, thanks for playing and leaving a feedback
I've just finished a new scene and I was about to have a look on how to cut a video (it shouldn't be hard), I too have the feeling that adding videos will be better.
I'm also planning to add 2 more (maybe 3) new scenes before Chrismas since there will be some scenes related to that, so come and have a look in the next days

 

[Bagley]

Hi JG07!
First of all, thanks for playing and leaving a feedback
I've just finished a new scene and I was about to have a look on how to cut a video (it shouldn't be hard), I too have the feeling that adding videos will be better.
I'm also planning to add 2 more (maybe 3) new scenes before Chrismas since there will be some scenes related to that, so come and have a look in the next days

That would be great if you could, even if it isn't possible you are doing really well!

 

[elmandor]

Really early to judge but like as @JG07 said its hard to find decent ''real porn'' tag games these days.So I hope you continue. I'll keep an eye on this one

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

Hi guys!
I'm sorry if I haven't updated you in the last days, the previous weeks have been crazy and I've been very busy.
By the way, I'm going to pull an allnighter and I should deliver an update by tomorrow.
I hope that you all are having good holidays
See you tomorrow!

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

New Update guys!!
Sorry if I couldn't do sooner as promised
Tomorrow I'll post few more thoughts since now I really need to sleep...
Have a good day

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

Hello everyone!
So, as I said, I have few thoughts. I added them to the "Plans for the future" in the first post.
Basically, I need to rewrite the code because until now I just added new lines each time without thinking about making it easier for "future me" to add new content. I need to learn how to think in a object oriented way (I also hope that what I'm saying has any sense and I'm not just using words that I read ).
But let's jump to the fun stuff. I'd like to add 1 or 2 new sex scenes in the next few days, I'll see what I can do.
What do you think about the new scenes? Did you like the videos? I cut them myself, it's really not that difficult to do it in adobe premiere. Do you think there is something that should be improved about them?

One last thing. What do you think about the game style to be more like "Son of a bitch" where you can choose which path/quest to follow?

 

[elmandor]

You did a good job with videos but game desperately needs a gameplay . Its just click click and get the sex scene as its stands. I understand this a learning project for you. So If you can make something like SOB that would be really great. Good luck

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

You did a good job with videos but game desperately needs a gameplay . Its just click click and get the sex scene as its stands. I understand this a learning project for you. So If you can make something like SOB that would be really great. Good luck

Yeah, that's what I'm going to focus on for the next month at least. Once there will be more freedom of choice/movement the game will start to be enjoyable.

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

Hi guys!!!
I'm working on making the game much better, here is a preview of how the interface should be:



Do you like it?
There are some improvements to do. Mostly, I'd like to make the buttons rounded (sadly, it seems to me, the square button is the only thing that renpy allows...)
As always, any feedback is more than welcome!

Edit:
I was the one putting the frame (square) around the icons...
Anyway, this is how the interface should look like

 

[elmandor]

Looks good. Rounded always better than square lol

 

[TheBardOfAllTales]

Looks good. Rounded always better than square lol

Yeah... squares be damned!!!