I just finished the game... and I gotta say, this is a damned good game.
The only thing that really bothered me was
regarding how Hank Sharp would just suddenly forget how to handle proper security for his own business and just let Beth have the VIP passes and involve her in any way with any of Melody or the MC's paperwork, without her being signed in or any discussion with the MC first. If any company (ESPECIALLY one in a tight lipped community like a recording studio, where they are constantly trying to keep things on the DL until release) were to allow that type of security breach, it would be a legal nightmare for them.
It really strained my suspension of disbelief to the upmost on that...
Otherwise, it really was a wonderful game, with quite good characterizations and story, as well as a good set of ending options based on player choice. 8/10, would highly recommend.