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Overview:
Traveling between dimensions could be dangerous, but if it is for survival, what other choice do we have? After a jump goes wrong, our protagonist tries to uncover what happened, but how?
Follow the adventure of our protagonist in a story full of mysteries.​

Thread Updated: 2025-05-26
Release Date: 2025-05-25
Developer: Lewd Core Games - -
Censored: No
Version: Beta - Part 2
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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notgeilerdude

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Thx for sharing my game. The game is in an important phase, so any feedback is important. I hope to improve with your help.
Feedback: Writing needs a lot of improvement and there are so many grammar mistakes. You would be better off writing in your native language and let AI translate or something like this. And the images seem kinda blurry / low res. Other than that it's a good start.
 
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Dozey

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English could be improved some, but for the phase you're in it's understandable. Just make sure you get some proofreading. periodically.

Ex: "That most be like the last ones" is understandable but incorrect. "That one looks like the others." Would be a more natural natural writing of what you appear to be trying to have the character say. "That looks most like the last ones" restructures the sentence less and is correct but still feels slightly non-english in how the sentence is laid out.

Usually this happens because you're translating from another native language, but it's possible it was just re-written and overlooked.
 

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English could be improved some, but for the phase you're in it's understandable. Just make sure you get some proofreading. periodically.

Ex: "That most be like the last ones" is understandable but incorrect. "That one looks like the others." Would be a more natural natural writing of what you appear to be trying to have the character say. "That looks most like the last ones" restructures the sentence less and is correct but still feels slightly non-english in how the sentence is laid out.

Usually this happens because you're translating from another native language, but it's possible it was just re-written and overlooked.
Got it.
 

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Feedback: Writing needs a lot of improvement and there are so many grammar mistakes. You would be better off writing in your native language and let AI translate or something like this. And the images seem kinda blurry / low res. Other than that it's a good start.
The images, I think, are due to the compression program I use. I will leave the uncompressed version in the next release, and I will try to improve the writing maybe follow ur advice. It was really difficult for me, I have too much of the "street English" in my head. (y)
 
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Bob69

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The images, I think, are due to the compression program I use. I will leave the uncompressed version in the next release, and I will try to improve the writing maybe follow ur advice. It was really difficult for me, I have too much of the "street English" in my head. (y)
i think you can ask help from Bob69 about how to compress images without losing quality...i have seen him explain about it to other new devs
How To Compress Images

You could also upload the original quality for people without Internet/space restrictions. And a compressed version with like 80% image quality for people who can't download the orig size. Can DM me for help with the compression.
 
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