VN Ren'Py Abandoned Midlife Crisis [v0.34 - v0.1 Dark] [Nefastus Games]

[ramvivat]

Christina seems to "go crazy" and becomes malicious in her wishes. it is not enough for her to embarrass the waiter with her actions - she already wanted to throw the visitors out of the restaurant.
this won't end well. this is not good.
I hope the visitors will have something to say to shut up the waiter - they have every right to be in a restaurant, this is a public place.

 

[ramvivat]

I didn't like the one moment.
the fact that the Father has not yet confessed to Rock that he is the father of Sarah's child, that it was he who knocked her up.
a bad moment, I must admit, it leaves an unpleasant aftertaste in my soul.
it means that he is a man to make children, but who will be responsible for man's actions? Pushkin? (ok, the joke about Pushkin will be understood only by Russian speakers, but you probably have a character, an analogue of Pushkin, who does all the work instead of lazy people)
well, the first time in a restaurant when he found out that Sarah was pregnant from him, he became ill - okay, let's write it off as a shock. but at the party, why didn't he tell Michael or Rock anything? suddenly turned into a boy from a man?

Sarah can be a relatively "legal" lover for Father.
I don’t understand what the difficulty is here, if Sarah is “barely legal”, no one will go to jail for having sex with her.
man-boy, that's what he is, this Father. this is not the act of an adult man - this is a boyish thoughtless imprudence.
I repeat, he would not have landed in jail, well, he would have been hit in the face, maybe his legs were broken - they would hardly be killed for this - he is not from poverty, from which there is nothing but a spoonful of blood to take. he is quite capable of securing the future for both Sarah and her (and his) child.

what the f-kin hell is his problem?

Yes. by the maturity of his actions, so far not a single incest father has managed to reach out to the Proud Father.
they are all some cowardly trifle.

*disappointed again*

 

[RR6612]

what the f-kin hell is his problem?

Easy my Russian brother, I don't think that situation has resolved itself yet. I think we can forgive him that he not immediatly told Rock after the news. They will probaly tell them in due time, besides I would not be suprised if our dear old Rock and Micheal where already in the know, they seem the type.

 

[Demonius]

I didn't like the one moment.
the fact that the Father has not yet confessed to Rock that he is the father of Sarah's child, that it was he who knocked her up.
a bad moment, I must admit, it leaves an unpleasant aftertaste in my soul.
it means that he is a man to make children, but who will be responsible for man's actions? Pushkin? (ok, the joke about Pushkin will be understood only by Russian speakers, but you probably have a character, an analogue of Pushkin, who does all the work instead of lazy people)
well, the first time in a restaurant when he found out that Sarah was pregnant from him, he became ill - okay, let's write it off as a shock. but at the party, why didn't he tell Michael or Rock anything? suddenly turned into a boy from a man?

Sarah can be a relatively "legal" lover for Father.
I don’t understand what the difficulty is here, if Sarah is “barely legal”, no one will go to jail for having sex with her.
man-boy, that's what he is, this Father. this is not the act of an adult man - this is a boyish thoughtless imprudence.
I repeat, he would not have landed in jail, well, he would have been hit in the face, maybe his legs were broken - they would hardly be killed for this - he is not from poverty, from which there is nothing but a spoonful of blood to take. he is quite capable of securing the future for both Sarah and her (and his) child.

what the f-kin hell is his problem?

Yes. by the maturity of his actions, so far not a single incest father has managed to reach out to the Proud Father.
they are all some cowardly trifle.

*disappointed again*

your taking this vn way to seriously, mate

 

[Ayhsel]

your taking this vn way to seriously, mate

This.

Like serisouly, this novel is quite explicit in that is taken with a comedy approach.

 

[ramvivat]

Easy my Russian brother, I don't think that situation has resolved itself yet. I think we can forgive him that he not immediatly told Rock after the news. They will probaly tell them in due time, besides I would not be suprised if our dear old Rock and Micheal where already in the know, they seem the type.

damn you right.
*sigh* shit
it seems i'm again overreacted, right?
maybe Father not so boyish at all...

me is a me and F is a F - we live different lives and it is unfair to "cut everyone with the same brush". but frankly - we look at the world and see ourselves without noticing it. what is deep in us, what we see in others - it is most painful to observe in others. yes, I overreacted - because it hurt, I shit bricks.
there is something wrong with me. apparently again I need to delve into my dark closet, talk heart to heart with my monsters that live in the attic of my skull.

and thanks, comrade. thanks again.

 

[ramvivat]

your taking this vn way to seriously, mate

and here you are wrong.
there is nothing more serious than games.
playing, we learn the world.
I have become more honest with myself while playing these 18+ VN games. and this is something. and damn it, how much I miss these games 20+ years ago, while I was still young. I would then they could "brainwash" in the right direction. and then I was a blockhead - I worked at the institute as a laboratory assistant at the department of computer science, girl-students tried to get to know me (so that I would help them do laboratory work along the way), but I was a blockhead. point-blank didn't see the signs that the girls were doing to me (and just doing lab work for them, moron). and I didn't understand anything. funny? and me too (now). And now I remember what it was like. and I *facepalm* - how many opportunities to get to know the girls better, I pissed out of the blue.
yes, every vegetable has its time and place - now these games are useless to me and even probably can be harmful, but I'm already hooked on them, they are my drug. I don’t know, maybe I’ll even end up in a psychiatric hospital when my “roof is completely gone.” but I'm not complaining - enjoy while I can. along the way, shit with bricks from the mistakes made by the heroes.

I don't know, maybe you played "Leisure Suit Larry 7: Love for Sail"? there was a librarian. all so stiff at first. it is about brainwash in right direction =)

 

[Anthony2]

the update is out just need a hero.

 

[HentaiKami]

New version dropped for the highest tier of Patreons, hopefully we'll get to see it soon enough in here.

 

[Cartageno]

and here you are wrong.
there is nothing more serious than games.
playing, we learn the world.
I have become more honest with myself while playing these 18+ VN games. and this is something. and damn it, how much I miss these games 20+ years ago, while I was still young. I would then they could "brainwash" in the right direction. and then I was a blockhead - I worked at the institute as a laboratory assistant at the department of computer science, girl-students tried to get to know me (so that I would help them do laboratory work along the way), but I was a blockhead. point-blank didn't see the signs that the girls were doing to me (and just doing lab work for them, moron). and I didn't understand anything. funny? and me too (now). And now I remember what it was like. and I *facepalm* - how many opportunities to get to know the girls better, I pissed out of the blue.
yes, every vegetable has its time and place - now these games are useless to me and even probably can be harmful, but I'm already hooked on them, they are my drug. I don’t know, maybe I’ll even end up in a psychiatric hospital when my “roof is completely gone.” but I'm not complaining - enjoy while I can. along the way, shit with bricks from the mistakes made by the heroes.

I don't know, maybe you played "Leisure Suit Larry 7: Love for Sail"? there was a librarian. all so stiff at first. it is about brainwash in right direction =)

I get becoming really involved into games and thinking about stuff many others don't, and usually I would argue against sentences like "you take this too seriously" because you can just notice stuff and still be relaxed, or you can notice stuff that won't be talked away too easily - the latter being the general direction of shitty MC behavior and similar. However, this specific vegetable, as you say, does not only have a certain time and place, but also a flavor, and that is indeed comedy. Even comedy should not do anything, but it should be given leeway and not be treated as real life.

And that also is a point about learning: yes, we can learn stuff about the real world by playing, but we cannot take what's in a game at face value. These AVNs do not teach about the real world, they teach about a fantasy world. Where all women love us (and not only some), all are beautiful (and not only some), where all girls are susceptible when in RL we just would get a restraining order or be immediately arrested, and so forth.

 

[ramvivat]

but we cannot take what's in a game at face value

God, of course you're right. err kind of hehe...
just as no one writes serious programs in BASIC, but only learns programming, so the situations in games are often not applicable in real life (to whom comes in head having sex with his own mother?). situations are often inapplicable, but the principles for their solution are quite applicable to themselves. like programs in BASIC - we learn to program, and then we take on more difficult languages for Pascal or assembler. principles matter! inner confidence does not come from nowhere.

it like in mathematics - we memorize formulas into which we then substitute the necessary coefficients to get a real solution in a specific problem, although at the same time we learned the formula using examples taken "from the ceiling", right?
so I think you understand me.

 

[ssj782]

I didn't like the one moment.
the fact that the Father has not yet confessed to Rock that he is the father of Sarah's child, that it was he who knocked her up.
a bad moment, I must admit, it leaves an unpleasant aftertaste in my soul.
it means that he is a man to make children, but who will be responsible for man's actions? Pushkin? (ok, the joke about Pushkin will be understood only by Russian speakers, but you probably have a character, an analogue of Pushkin, who does all the work instead of lazy people)
well, the first time in a restaurant when he found out that Sarah was pregnant from him, he became ill - okay, let's write it off as a shock. but at the party, why didn't he tell Michael or Rock anything? suddenly turned into a boy from a man?

Sarah can be a relatively "legal" lover for Father.
I don’t understand what the difficulty is here, if Sarah is “barely legal”, no one will go to jail for having sex with her.
man-boy, that's what he is, this Father. this is not the act of an adult man - this is a boyish thoughtless imprudence.
I repeat, he would not have landed in jail, well, he would have been hit in the face, maybe his legs were broken - they would hardly be killed for this - he is not from poverty, from which there is nothing but a spoonful of blood to take. he is quite capable of securing the future for both Sarah and her (and his) child.

what the f-kin hell is his problem?

Yes. by the maturity of his actions, so far not a single incest father has managed to reach out to the Proud Father.
they are all some cowardly trifle.

*disappointed again*

Could be worse. I chose the 'tease her along' path and hadn't even slept with her at that point, and my game eventually still told me she was pregnant without the mc ever doing anything more than use fingers.
Now that's a miracle pregnancy.

 

[Cartageno]

Could be worse. I chose the 'tease her along' path and hadn't even slept with her at that point, and my game eventually still told me she was pregnant without the mc ever doing anything more than use fingers.
Now that's a miracle pregnancy.

And thus, the second coming of the Lord came to pass.

 

[kevcolqaz]

And thus, the second coming of the Lord came to pass.

most likely situation taking place is that she cheated.

 

[ramvivat]

Could be worse. I chose the 'tease her along' path and hadn't even slept with her at that point, and my game eventually still told me she was pregnant without the mc ever doing anything more than use fingers.
Now that's a miracle pregnancy.

I can't help but agree.
especially since the restaurant* has a choice in which it may turn out that the pregnancy is false.

but I decided to admit the pregnancy in order to strengthen my authority in the harem. that is, that "my word is iron, my penis is stone, and that you can rely on me" - if I said that I love, I will buy a tram, then so be it.
not that - you give just a little slack and the girls will scatter. I remember in one Russian movie "DMB" there was an officer who said this: "It's impossible for an army without a soldier! Without a soldier in the army there is a mess and corruption!" and in a harem without women, real depravity will begin, when "for lack of a maid, they begin to fuck the coachman".
the fact that Sarah has a false pregnancy is not so scary, but other girls will be much more likely to become pregnant. it's like a flock of sheep dragging a goat provocateur to the slaughterhouse. here Sarah is that goat provocateur. she sets a bad example (which is known to be very contagious) to the rest of the girls. hehe =)
well, I love pregnant girls, I can't help myself.

*the scene in the restaurant when Father finds out about Sarah's pregnancy, and then takes her around the corner to talk for a minute and there appears a menu in which you can make the pregnancy false.

 

[code991]

most likely situation taking place is that she cheated.

Cheated? Why cheated? Since she hasnt slept with the MC how can it be cheating?


Unrelated to the above ... i believe that Rock might have an idea who the father is.

 

[CircaAD]

I agree with the sentiment that MC should be honest with Rock, but I also agree that it hasn't actually been that long since Sarah got pregnant. It just seems longer to us because we had time between updates IRL.

 

[ramvivat]

Rock might have an idea who the father is.

more than sure that he already knows exactly WHO the father of Sarah's child is. just watch the reaction of the Father immediately after the announcement of the news that Sarah is pregnant. the poor Father's eyes dimmed. he apparently had a small stroke (50 years is no joke) from such news, like a sudden blow from around the corner in a dark alley. if Rock isn't completely blind, he definitely put two and two together and got four.

the only thing left to do is to prove to the Father that he has not only a stone penis but also steel balls - that is, to admit to Rock that it was he who knocked Sarah down.

I sincerely hope that in the new update, something will click in Father's head as it should and he will understand that he must confess.

 

[ramvivat]

that it hasn't actually been that long since Sarah got pregnant.

pregnancy is, as one person said, one careless movement, and you are a father. when you're lucky, you hit the bull's-eye with the first bullet without aiming. I hope I was more than transparent =)

and, as I said above, it is "politically advantageous" to recognize Sarah's child as Father's child. The father is still a businessman, which means he must be able to go into politics as part of management. you know, "The father is not the one who gave birth, but the one who raised". and even if Sarah's child is genetically alien to the Father, then there will be nothing terrible in that. he will be brought up in the spirit of the family and he will be no different from the rest of the children of the harem girls.

 

[ssj782]

The update is in the update thread.
https://f95zone.to/threads/mid-life-crisis-version-30.129167/