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I think a typo here or there isn't worth nitpicking - compared to others, Nef shows a solid grasp for grammar and spelling.
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I will disagree slightly. I don't mind the typos as much as in other games with generic writing, since what he writes is amazing, it is funny where it wants to be, sex scenes are actually erotic and well written and not technical instructions, and so forth - but there is indeed a spelling or grammar error in every other line. There are worse offenders out there, but that part really isn't that good. It may add to the charm (also with the less-than-ideal lighting and so forth) of not being a stale overproduced game like, say, Sunshine Love, but I would agree that some proof reading wouldn't hurt.
A suggestion
Label these posts as Bug reports, and drop these images into spoilers, that way if Nef or one his helpers can find them easily without them taking up so much space on the thread, this post for example isn't really a discussion topic, typos happen, there is nothing to talk about unless your intent is to mock him.
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not. i do not intent to mock anyone. although i can slightly giggle about errors which do not very disturb me. sugaring the bitter pill, threat with humour - yes, but not mock.
sorry if i looks mock, because mocking is a evil do.
... or i am self evil by my nature but not know about it and from here i do not see evil which produce. sorry.
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No, you're not evil.
But you're constantly dragging screens into the thread and nitpick about every detail possible etc. is annoying af. There i said it.
If you want to help, then send him a PM with the stuff that puts you off the game, but picking in public. No No No.
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BUGREPORT
party with Angela and Jeremi
//Me: Sex and card machine
Amanda: Someone certainly must have installed an ego upgrade//
W... WAT??? Amanda is home!!! =)
//
a "Someone certainly must have installed an ego upgrade."
d "Since you have such a smart mouth..how about you plant a big one on [bo_name] there."
//
i think this need not a(Amanda) but w(Wife)
need fix!
party with Angela and Jeremi
//Me: Sex and card machine
Amanda: Someone certainly must have installed an ego upgrade//
W... WAT??? Amanda is home!!! =)
//
a "Someone certainly must have installed an ego upgrade."
d "Since you have such a smart mouth..how about you plant a big one on [bo_name] there."
//
i think this need not a(Amanda) but w(Wife)
need fix!
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Just go with the flow... trust me. :>)
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Rock is a good guy to have on your side. He's a sweet teddy bear that's willing to get his hands dirty if the situation demands it.
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Getting his hands dirty in your butt hole.
LOL I'm totally kidding. Rock is great people.
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I thought the same at first, he seemed to be a mobster, and i didn't wanted to go that route, but out of curiosity i did it nevertheless and all i can say is, i was very wrong, he is a good guy and you'll appreciate the help from him and his partner, when it comes to the "Jennifer Situation".
Go with Rock, it's worth it!
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If it wasn't for lemonfreak....Go with Rock, it's worth it!
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I doubt he'd ever stray from his one true love, he's better people than MC
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thanks. so my heart didn't lie.
how good it is that at least in games to follow the path of truth always brings good results.
well, or in most games - it would be more correct to say so. I just remembered about "restore her career" where the main character is an anti-social personality whose lie is like running two fingers on asphalt.
Thanks.
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//"After all, if it weren't for him you aren't sure where you would be with [j_name](=Jennifer?)."//
god i love Father more and more - he is not a hypocrite.
god i love Father more and more - he is not a hypocrite.
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Christina seems to "go crazy" and becomes malicious in her wishes. it is not enough for her to embarrass the waiter with her actions - she already wanted to throw the visitors out of the restaurant.
this won't end well. this is not good.
I hope the visitors will have something to say to shut up the waiter - they have every right to be in a restaurant, this is a public place.
this won't end well. this is not good.
I hope the visitors will have something to say to shut up the waiter - they have every right to be in a restaurant, this is a public place.