A game with potential. The renders are great. I like the style and the music.
The first big problem of this game is that it becomes boring quickly. How often can you apply lotion or sun cream or perform yoga or breast massages until it becomes repetitive work? Especially when you need to progress with all characters and the main storyline it takes ages until anything interesting happens. At some point, I have stopped reading all the dialogue. One way would be to make the romance progression 3 times faster, so that there is stuff that you only get when you have certain fetishes or on repeated playthroughs. Then there are some cheesy things I would simply get rid of.
The second big problem is that something is off with the characters. Most are strange, especially the main character. Storywise, they should involve the use of the drug way earlier to make their strange behavior more believable. I mean they have a great story device at hand that could help them with so much. I don't know, maybe they are affected already and that is the twist but I would gladly sacrifice such a twist for more relatable motivations.
This could also lead to some interesting inner conflict of the characters. They could all wonder why they act so strange and why they have such desires althouth the main character is so creepy and needy.
Storywise, I would let the main character give them a dosis of the drug. Maybe he only wants to have revenge with one character (e.g., his brother), but, by accident, all of them get a dosis of the drug - including himself.
My suggestion: get a script doctor. Someone who is really good at plotting stories. And increase the pace 3x.
The first big problem of this game is that it becomes boring quickly. How often can you apply lotion or sun cream or perform yoga or breast massages until it becomes repetitive work? Especially when you need to progress with all characters and the main storyline it takes ages until anything interesting happens. At some point, I have stopped reading all the dialogue. One way would be to make the romance progression 3 times faster, so that there is stuff that you only get when you have certain fetishes or on repeated playthroughs. Then there are some cheesy things I would simply get rid of.
The second big problem is that something is off with the characters. Most are strange, especially the main character. Storywise, they should involve the use of the drug way earlier to make their strange behavior more believable. I mean they have a great story device at hand that could help them with so much. I don't know, maybe they are affected already and that is the twist but I would gladly sacrifice such a twist for more relatable motivations.
This could also lead to some interesting inner conflict of the characters. They could all wonder why they act so strange and why they have such desires althouth the main character is so creepy and needy.
Storywise, I would let the main character give them a dosis of the drug. Maybe he only wants to have revenge with one character (e.g., his brother), but, by accident, all of them get a dosis of the drug - including himself.
My suggestion: get a script doctor. Someone who is really good at plotting stories. And increase the pace 3x.