- Nov 5, 2018
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This is also a reply to TheBoss3213.Pretty bog-standard stuff here but a well-put-together game that moves quickly. Very much above-average for a first game, but I hope that it becomes more descriptive/meditative as it goes along and the dev finds his/her voice, because right now it is just as straightforward and action-oriented as it could be. No interior voice at all, and so no real character to the main character.
I'm working on getting her internal dialogue "right" and have discarded some passages I felt were not very good. I'm goin to try to get some more of that in the next chapters.