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a lot of weed and whisky or vodka and you will end up saying " a pussy is a pussy " like Derek in BADik xD
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* Some dialogue at the beginning would be a good idea. It doesn't make a good first impression.
* Good to see a bit of meta comedy.
* Well that's a pretty abrupt sex scene. Once again, some sort of dialogue here would have helped.
* Some navigation buttons wuld be good.
I dislike the abruptness of the sex scenes, but this is funny. I'll continue to check it out.
* Good to see a bit of meta comedy.
* Well that's a pretty abrupt sex scene. Once again, some sort of dialogue here would have helped.
* Some navigation buttons wuld be good.
I dislike the abruptness of the sex scenes, but this is funny. I'll continue to check it out.
- Jan 3, 2018
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this is like a tech demo to get feedback for animations etc
so the animations are too fast/loop too soon, it does not look natural because of it, everything else is very good.
and tbh if the plot of a game was with a book telling u how to cheat life especially with that humor it would be a 10/10 for me, enjoyed it very much so far
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Okay, so here are some thoughts. The animations are great. I only noticed a few of the loop restarts, but mostly they flow nicely. The dialogue is funny and I like the since of humor and tongue and cheek nature of the game. The opening pics with the two hotties were in desperate need of a double dildo for when they were ass to ass. If the MC is just going to jerk it over their asses, he might as well give them something to do instead of just twiddling their thumbs and saying 'oh yeah, baby cover me with your cum' in their best porn voice. Anywho, great stuff all around. Also, did the Milfy City guy loose exclusive rights to the mom model? Because she is showing up in several new games lately.
Your 3D renders and animations look great overall. Happy to see Milfy City Mom again and I'm pretty sure the mom from Dual Family is the base for your Cheating Wife model. Here's hoping that your main project keeps the focus on MILFs and adds even more.
LOVED this, by the way. Aside from really enjoying the ladies, it was surprisingly amusing. I played through it multiple times immediately. But, since you did this whole thing for feedback, what follows is mostly my nitpicking.
The 2nd image after your Dev Disclaimer, Samantha is bent in a way that looks unnatural, like she doesn't have a spine or organs. Later, when you fuck Samantha, Riley's left butt cheek gets significantly larger and oddly pointed. I understand that perspective and two meaty body parts folding together would cause changes like this but it doesn't look right. On the "This is Sabrina and she's your [Landlady]" screen, her face is inconsistent with the rest of the game (and she looks a little creepy here). This face is repeated when she later calls for Cathy to come see her boy John. Cathy looks great and has probably the sexiest resting bitch face I've seen in a while, like Natalie Portman's roided up aunt. I have to commend you on your "sleep sex" renderings because they're well-executed, although it pains me since "sleep sex" is really just rape.
Animation Gallery: The MC has dead eyes in the Witch scene and the Witch doesn't look to be enjoying herself. When the camera switches to their backs, it's clear how talented you are at renders and animation because it looks almost like video. The Cheating Wife also doesn't look like she's enjoying herself, plus her ass cheeks are unnaturally sharp at times. Gravity might cause her cheeks to spread outward but what's the opposing force that makes the outer portion bevel upwards as well? In Mother's Pussy Lick scene, she looks like she got bad botox. But I LOVE the glistening skin for most of her scenes - it looks FANTASTIC! For Jessica's blowjob scene, her hands crossed behind her back sometimes look more like she has a weird mutant claw instead, probably because while her whole body is moving, including her arms, her fingers are freakishly immobile. Her right arm in her doggy scene looks like its growing out from the top of her boob (could just be the positioning of the hair coupled with naturally putting her weight on that arm). Her eyes in her ass drilling scene stare unblinking and wide for no reason. Jessica's facial expressions generally reflect enjoyment (and pair nicely with the audio for those scenes that have it) so you might be best served by simply closing her eyes here. Also, note that it's spelled Missionary.
LOVE the Witch - she's ripped from '70s fantasy calendar drawn by horny Europeans with ScarJo's face bolted on for good measure. Her half-smirk expression is great. Later, when she's got wide, empty eyes while the silver and green magic doodad tries to do magic things to you, it feels like she was a robot that's been shutdown. You go back after another night of raping your mother and or your mother's wife, and the Witch's expression is intelligent again, which lasts for a few expressions until silver/green shutdown screen gets reused. Then we get to the good stuff with the Witch, starting with what was already in the Animation Gallery, but continuing onto some of the best face work in the game - the Witch getting fucked doggystyle with her staff held against her throat. Her expressions are really on point - eyes, mouth, everything - dynamic and vibrant. Good quality thereafter, as well.
Back to Cathy, who is smoking in her see-through sleeping bikini(?). Then onto Alexa, the Cheating Wife, as your Side Chick Side Quest. Mostly good to excellent here, although I don't know that the facial expressions convey enjoyment a whole lot. Mostly she looks surprised.
Again, LOVED this project and it has me very excited for your main project. Graphics like this coupled with more in-depth storytelling would be AMAZING. That said, I also wouldn't mind seeing this project come to completion as an enjoyable parody.
LOVED this, by the way. Aside from really enjoying the ladies, it was surprisingly amusing. I played through it multiple times immediately. But, since you did this whole thing for feedback, what follows is mostly my nitpicking.
The 2nd image after your Dev Disclaimer, Samantha is bent in a way that looks unnatural, like she doesn't have a spine or organs. Later, when you fuck Samantha, Riley's left butt cheek gets significantly larger and oddly pointed. I understand that perspective and two meaty body parts folding together would cause changes like this but it doesn't look right. On the "This is Sabrina and she's your [Landlady]" screen, her face is inconsistent with the rest of the game (and she looks a little creepy here). This face is repeated when she later calls for Cathy to come see her boy John. Cathy looks great and has probably the sexiest resting bitch face I've seen in a while, like Natalie Portman's roided up aunt. I have to commend you on your "sleep sex" renderings because they're well-executed, although it pains me since "sleep sex" is really just rape.
Animation Gallery: The MC has dead eyes in the Witch scene and the Witch doesn't look to be enjoying herself. When the camera switches to their backs, it's clear how talented you are at renders and animation because it looks almost like video. The Cheating Wife also doesn't look like she's enjoying herself, plus her ass cheeks are unnaturally sharp at times. Gravity might cause her cheeks to spread outward but what's the opposing force that makes the outer portion bevel upwards as well? In Mother's Pussy Lick scene, she looks like she got bad botox. But I LOVE the glistening skin for most of her scenes - it looks FANTASTIC! For Jessica's blowjob scene, her hands crossed behind her back sometimes look more like she has a weird mutant claw instead, probably because while her whole body is moving, including her arms, her fingers are freakishly immobile. Her right arm in her doggy scene looks like its growing out from the top of her boob (could just be the positioning of the hair coupled with naturally putting her weight on that arm). Her eyes in her ass drilling scene stare unblinking and wide for no reason. Jessica's facial expressions generally reflect enjoyment (and pair nicely with the audio for those scenes that have it) so you might be best served by simply closing her eyes here. Also, note that it's spelled Missionary.
LOVE the Witch - she's ripped from '70s fantasy calendar drawn by horny Europeans with ScarJo's face bolted on for good measure. Her half-smirk expression is great. Later, when she's got wide, empty eyes while the silver and green magic doodad tries to do magic things to you, it feels like she was a robot that's been shutdown. You go back after another night of raping your mother and or your mother's wife, and the Witch's expression is intelligent again, which lasts for a few expressions until silver/green shutdown screen gets reused. Then we get to the good stuff with the Witch, starting with what was already in the Animation Gallery, but continuing onto some of the best face work in the game - the Witch getting fucked doggystyle with her staff held against her throat. Her expressions are really on point - eyes, mouth, everything - dynamic and vibrant. Good quality thereafter, as well.
Back to Cathy, who is smoking in her see-through sleeping bikini(?). Then onto Alexa, the Cheating Wife, as your Side Chick Side Quest. Mostly good to excellent here, although I don't know that the facial expressions convey enjoyment a whole lot. Mostly she looks surprised.
Again, LOVED this project and it has me very excited for your main project. Graphics like this coupled with more in-depth storytelling would be AMAZING. That said, I also wouldn't mind seeing this project come to completion as an enjoyable parody.
- Oct 1, 2018
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gREAT stuff would be great if the breasts were larger thats my only complaint tbh
- Jan 20, 2020
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since you are adding milfs from other games, add the mom milf from Love and Submission
https://f95zone.to/threads/love-and-submission-v0-07-veqvil.6086/
https://f95zone.to/threads/love-and-submission-v0-07-veqvil.6086/
- Jul 28, 2018
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I don't think this can be called a "game" yet, is just a kinetic novel with absurd plot. Great animations and renders, not original but good.
But seriously, as It is right now, It belongs more to the animations//stand still section than the games one.
But seriously, as It is right now, It belongs more to the animations//stand still section than the games one.
- May 10, 2018
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Thanks for putting your game out, I like the renders and the MILFS look great. You said in the demo you want opinions on the animations and scenes etc... I liked the animations, I enjoyed the humor, In general I liked everything except for one thing. Your cumshots look terrible. I don't mean any offense, but even my girl said it looked like she blew her nose on her. Besides that it looks promising.
To me, it's neither a game nor a kinetic novel. It appears to be a testbed by the dev to get feedback.
My feedback? If you're gonna cum, do it in a pussy, or in a mouth, but don't spray it all over the place. If you're gonna have a pussy, put some hair on it - the more the merrier. Lastly, don't make the tits so big that they overflow into an adjacent computer screen.
My feedback? If you're gonna cum, do it in a pussy, or in a mouth, but don't spray it all over the place. If you're gonna have a pussy, put some hair on it - the more the merrier. Lastly, don't make the tits so big that they overflow into an adjacent computer screen.