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I don't know about Delilah's future. I'd intended for her to be a bit of a tragic character.
Delilah's father sets her up in a fancy house that he pays for, but never actually visits. MC becomes a man who gives her attention, but when she wins a bet and has the chance to use him as a sex slave, she doesn't. Instead she brings MC over to her house because she actually wants to show off how she's decorated the place - something she's never been able to show her own dad. Photos on the walls are self-portraits of her because she doesn't actually have anyone she's close enough to that she could actually hang up a picture of.
The group of girls that she hangs out with are elitist and exclusionary. It's a toxic group that bullies people and forces its own members to do things they don't really want to do. e.g. the phone call scene when MC is at Delilah's house. Despite this, the group of girls at the swim team stop Delilah from feeling as isolated as she usually does given how distant her father is. So she relies on them.
At the end of her story Delilah is left with a catch-22 situation. If she chooses to date a "loser" like the MC, she'll lose her social status and the group of toxic friends. But if she chooses her friends, she loses MC. At the end of her story in the locker room she becomes paralysed by indecision because she can't bring herself to give up either. She ends up alone as MC leaves her and realises deep down she probably wanted to choose him.
I have some ideas of a few places she could possibly slot in, in the future. And I'd like to revisit her. But that would be taking time away from actually getting the 3 main girls properly finished. So honestly, I don't know what the future has for her.
I do have plans for Lily.
I haven't focused much of my attention on the harem ending yet. I really want to do it properly and give it the attention it deserves. At the minute, all my efforts are focused on Caroline's pregnancy script.
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