Ren'Py Completed Milfy City [v1.0e] [ICSTOR]

[Squark ⚧❤️]

The twins felt a little too "tacked on" for me, to be honest. Honestly, the main character (on the liar's route) can file for attempted murder - that's still an arrestable offence, right?
If you get Dad/Bob kicked out, who's going to pay the bills? I don't think Caroline makes enough to cover that yet.

Opinions thus far:
+ Pacing
+ Character Interaction
+ Models
++ A semi-believable Mom
++ Super-cute Sister
+++ Caroline's Ass

- The Twins
- Revenge storyline a little thin for my tastes *
I can't quite think of anything else I don't like. I know it's only 0.3 and there's bucketloads more to go in (all those WIP sections) but we're already quite far along with the main character's family.

* Celia could actually get the police involved without the main character's knowledge. She has a wealth of Blackmail evidence by now. As far as I can tell, the main character isn't using an IP Spoofer so they could actually tap the communications (webcams are so unsafe nowadays) and backtrace it. I smell an interesting twist here.
No, all we get is "I'll find you, you fucktard, and when I do yadda yadda yadda". Come on Celia. You're a spiteful little bitch, not gobsmackingly stupid.

 

[monk61]

wait?...she's not gobb smackingly stupid? The timing of all of this is evidence enough to hold a bunson burner to MC 's balls, if not guilty entertaining enough to sing christmas caroles too. I know it sounds crazy, but I see Celia as a would be sacrificial dom, she doesnt care sub, dom, the crazed milf just wants to cum...I picture her after webcamming riding the shit outta the oldman........anyone remember the dog in scrooged....bone for christmas......

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

- The Twins

they were awesome.

+++ Caroline's Ass

that's a 5 star out of 3 ass

* Celia could actually get the police involved without the main character's knowledge. She has a wealth of Blackmail evidence by now. As far as I can tell, the main character isn't using an IP Spoofer so they could actually tap the communications (webcams are so unsafe nowadays) and backtrace it. I smell an interesting twist here.
No, all we get is "I'll find you, you fucktard, and when I do yadda yadda yadda". Come on Celia. You're a spiteful little bitch, not gobsmackingly stupid.

she can't get the police since she would lose her job, finding the blackmailer is her best option. she could still make a deal with violet's brother...

 

[Asphyx]

Well the problem with that is, like me, i have zero interest in sara or the twins. So if the storyline for the twins and sara was fully comkpleted first, id have stopped playing the game after the first relationship point. Also works the other way round. If Mom, Carolines, Violets and Judys story were completed first, then id play them and stop playing the game after completing them.

I kinda get where you are coming from on that regard, id have preferred to see everything done for each relationship point for each character rather than prioritising certain "in demand" characters.

It's a mistake many Patreon developers make in an attempt to offer something (and encouragement) to those who pledge more money each month.

(I have said similar things to the below comments in the MoH thread)
Polls are nice but they do take the Developer out of their story to satisfy some track that they didn't already have planned. And the story is what keeps us interested and playing!

The polls should be used only for short side stories with the main focus of development being moving their main story narrative and characters forward.

In this game the Sisters and Twins won a few polls. In a game titled "MILF CITY" the majority of recent development has been directed at all the women who are NOT MILFS!

Now I get Brother Sister is a very popular incest topic and no one should complain when it is incorporated into am incest story...
But if your game is titled MILF CITY you had best be sure to at least provide one MILF of content in each release no matter what the poll numbers are!

Some Devs (and I'm not accusing this one to be clear) run Polls because they really have no story and no clear narrative they are working on. Big Brother was a prime example of this practice which took that game so far off the beaten track and caused the story to change so drastically from release to release that zero story is actually present in that game whatsoever. Just a bunch of scenes slapped together based on whatever the last poll said.

A Good developer will have the entire story mapped out before they even start. And if it is a good story it will balance the scenes the main characters get each month because those scenes are quests that tell part of the main story and will eventually lead to the scenes of the other main character's story.

i.e. having sex with a sister that the mother finds out about or catches you in and leads to advancing the mother's sexual story. (not in this game just an example!). Then the sister sex is part of the "MILF City" story as it is a leading factor in getting to the MILF.

Polls should be used to add some variety or spice outside of the main story but not be the major focus of that releases development.
I don't mind the Twins or the Sisters in this game but they don't in anyway seem attached to a central story of this game. The Twins served the quest to get rid of the Father but we have not gotten the main story payoff of that quest yet. And if the polling goes the wrong way the next few months we may never see that payoff for half a year.

So my feeling is run a poll to create a short side quest in that release but never let it stop you from moving the planned story forward with the main characters.

If not there will be so many characters to deal with that none of your users will ever be happy because their favorite character only gets a scene once every 6 months!

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

they were awesome.


that's a 5 star out of 3 ass


she can't get the police since she would lose her job, finding the blackmailer is her best option. she could still make a deal with violet's brother...

I just couldn't care less about Tia and Tamara, or whatever they were called.
If I had a +++ and a ++++, I'd have given it five.
Yeah... I'd actually forgotten how he was blackmailing Celia in the first place. But the whorebitch deserves it.

 

[Hadgar]

Bob's Secret Diary #1 Bonus image. Not from the game.
View attachment 122068

How can you vote for someone else when we have Linda? :heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes:

 

[Zovikh]

One of the best games now

 

[Cybernetics]

If you get Dad/Bob kicked out, who's going to pay the bills? I don't think Caroline makes enough to cover that yet.

The MC can by playing games on his computer. :test:XD

 

[Jage214]

help im stuck with sara my relationship with her is 2 i cant make to 3.. i cant go to her room anymore because linda told me not to... how can i advance in sara quest?

 

[Cybernetics]

help im stuck with sara my relationship with her is 2 i cant make to 3.. i cant go to her room anymore because linda told me not to... how can i advance in sara quest?

Look for her during the morning at school in Classroom 2.

 

[Jage214]

Look for her during the morning at school in Classroom 2.

already done... after she goes to my room whats next

 

[Cybernetics]

already done... after she goes to my room whats next

If you read the conversations, it should be obvious. I'm pretty sure you need to buy her a toy from the adult store and visit her at school again. Or, you might need to use your computer to video call her. You'll need the webcam software for that.

Either way, the conversations you have with people will hint you in directly what you need to do.

 

[ltpika]

Isn't booting out Dad harsh? Maybe you can find out he thinks of men to get hard and you can encourage him to go live it up at the gay bar. Then he'll be out of your hair but everyone's happy.

 

[juneba]

Is the port shorter than PC version? I don't have the time to scroll through 400 pages and wouldnt even know where to begin tbh. But i don't see any twins and every storyline so far has just stopped and says Work In Production.

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

@lidojuke
The Android port is unofficial. Direct questions about it to @booom313.

 

[Riski23]

Can i play on my android mobile??

 

[rogii]

last week of july or first week of aug probably.

 

[Harel]

In 0.3b, trying to open or close Bob's Car door gives an exception: 'Audio Channel "audio 0" not found'. This appears to be because the 'activate_sound' command is used, rather than placing the 'Play ("sound", "sfx/car_close.wav")' command in the action segment. Doing that fixes the scene for my game. (These are the only instances of 'activate_sound' I find, and I presume that it's a bug/error)

 

[Anuja Agarwal]

It's a mistake many Patreon developers make in an attempt to offer something (and encouragement) to those who pledge more money each month.

(I have said similar things to the below comments in the MoH thread)
Polls are nice but they do take the Developer out of their story to satisfy some track that they didn't already have planned. And the story is what keeps us interested and playing!

The polls should be used only for short side stories with the main focus of development being moving their main story narrative and characters forward.

In this game the Sisters and Twins won a few polls. In a game titled "MILF CITY" the majority of recent development has been directed at all the women who are NOT MILFS!

Now I get Brother Sister is a very popular incest topic and no one should complain when it is incorporated into am incest story...
But if your game is titled MILF CITY you had best be sure to at least provide one MILF of content in each release no matter what the poll numbers are!

Some Devs (and I'm not accusing this one to be clear) run Polls because they really have no story and no clear narrative they are working on. Big Brother was a prime example of this practice which took that game so far off the beaten track and caused the story to change so drastically from release to release that zero story is actually present in that game whatsoever. Just a bunch of scenes slapped together based on whatever the last poll said.

A Good developer will have the entire story mapped out before they even start. And if it is a good story it will balance the scenes the main characters get each month because those scenes are quests that tell part of the main story and will eventually lead to the scenes of the other main character's story.

i.e. having sex with a sister that the mother finds out about or catches you in and leads to advancing the mother's sexual story. (not in this game just an example!). Then the sister sex is part of the "MILF City" story as it is a leading factor in getting to the MILF.

Polls should be used to add some variety or spice outside of the main story but not be the major focus of that releases development.
I don't mind the Twins or the Sisters in this game but they don't in anyway seem attached to a central story of this game. The Twins served the quest to get rid of the Father but we have not gotten the main story payoff of that quest yet. And if the polling goes the wrong way the next few months we may never see that payoff for half a year.

So my feeling is run a poll to create a short side quest in that release but never let it stop you from moving the planned story forward with the main characters.

If not there will be so many characters to deal with that none of your users will ever be happy because their favorite character only gets a scene once every 6 months!

That was very well written and very useful for all developers. The thing with most of the developers is that either they are coders or they can draw nice renders or both, but they are not good with erotica. Which is the most essential part. Some others will put in just quests for the user to do (in the name of the story). Which is exactly what I felt like when I played "Farmer's Dream". He had a nice story to work on and could have made it great but it took hours to complete the quests which gave nothing in return.

I think in these games, the images of them having sex is not important (I'd just watch porn for that). But the buildup, the sexual tension and the tease is what does it for me. I have not played many games (only 15 to 20 so far, so there may be many good games out there that I don't know about), but I liked "Finding Miranda" by Mortzeart best yet.

 

[Malamadre]

thanks