Ren'Py Completed Milfy City [v1.0e] [ICSTOR]

[Deleted member 612615]

It´s not about the clickbait :coldsweat::coldsweat::coldsweat: I like the game, but I´m starting to feel a bit angry at ICSTOR for not making one whole story first and then getting to make others :coldsweat::coldsweat::coldsweat:

Well the problem with that is, like me, i have zero interest in sara or the twins. So if the storyline for the twins and sara was fully comkpleted first, id have stopped playing the game after the first relationship point. Also works the other way round. If Mom, Carolines, Violets and Judys story were completed first, then id play them and stop playing the game after completing them.

I kinda get where you are coming from on that regard, id have preferred to see everything done for each relationship point for each character rather than prioritising certain "in demand" characters.

 

[sakuyas_mmaster]

Well the problem with that is, like me, i have zero interest in sara or the twins.

That's always the problem if a game like this gives you a choice whose tail you want to chase. Try to please everyone and you end up disappointing most, because you spend so much time on content for paths only a few really care about. We have seen that for many, many games linked on this forum.

 

[Deleted member 612615]

That's always the problem if a game like this gives you a choice whose tail you want to chase. Try to please everyone and you end up disappointing most, because you spend so much time on content for paths only a few really care about. We have seen that for many, many games linked on this forum.

Yes because nearly all of the devs of these games use Patreon to fund making these games and they inadvertantly give "power" to their Patreons who all dont have the same taste.

I bet if theres no money involved and someone made a game like this for fun, there would be little debate on how character development would go because it would be down to the dev themselves.

But thats the way of things...cant please everyone. Probably gonna be a few annoyed people who cant get further with Celia yet given she had the biggest storyline arc in v0.1

 

[sakuyas_mmaster]

I bet if theres no money involved and someone made a game like this for fun, there would be little debate on how character development would go because it would be down to the dev themselves.

You'd think so but that's not the case. You still have people with strong opinions trying to push the devs in a direction to satisfy them. It's not a money issue.

 

[Unyversu]

Can't wait for 0.4 :eazyHype::heartcoveredeyes:

 

[muttdoggy]

Added filebox link

 

[dejan07]

Is Celia story's ark finished? She was my favorite character.

 

[N1K17Y]

you should really find another game to discuss because this argument is retarded. there is only so much you can do with the time the dev has. of course someone will be dissapointed, he cant focus on 2 characters entirely and MC fucked them in all sorts of ways while others you havent even seen their boobs. its better to be focused on 1-2 characters per update and actually progress with them rather than focus on everyone and exchange 10 sentences with them.
its known weeks and even months before the update drops, who's character's story will be developed. if you dont like that character, skip the update (like i did with 0.3) and come back in few months when its time for someone you like. its not like there isnt dozen of other good games out to play. its pretty simple, dont see what the whole discussion is about.
next update is few weeks away so i dont even want to think what stupid reason you will guys come up with to discuss next

 

[Fenarius]

Have you show in the Walkthrough Thread ?

Use this File

You must be registered to see the links

For example: The scene Nr. 23 must be in the Dark Alley on a wall right or behind / background

I already had that one. For some reason, when I saved and reopened the game it appeared, so it's fixed I guess.

the twins threaten to kill you? damn that didnt happen to me XD

I lied to them.

 

[ABDSingh]

wow, nice renders!

totally lovin this game
how often do we get updates?

 

[Shane498]

wow, nice renders!

totally lovin this game
how often do we get updates?

when it's ready

 

[sogaylol]

why can't i start the game???

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
ScriptError: Name (u'D:\\Private\\Milfy_City-0.3-pc\\Milfy_City-0.3-pc/game/splash_screen.rpy', 1531289481, 1) is defined twice, at game/splash_screen.rpy:1 and game/splash_screen.rpy:2.

 

[papsuken]

why can't i start the game???

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
ScriptError: Name (u'D:\\Private\\Milfy_City-0.3-pc\\Milfy_City-0.3-pc/game/splash_screen.rpy', 1531289481, 1) is defined twice, at game/splash_screen.rpy:1 and game/splash_screen.rpy:2.

Check in that directory --- D:\\Private\\Milfy_City-0.3-pc\\Milfy_City-0.3-pc/game/ --- if you have 2 files named splash_screen.rpy.
move one of them out of the folder anywhere and try again. (do not delete it, it's just a test)

 

[monk61]

Since we're on the topic, does anyone actually like the twins ? I don't know why but it feels "cheap" the way that it was done..

yeah the twins wer lame, I get milking patreon, hey its revenue, no fault no foul, the mans making money, good for him, but unless he plans to make this a huge relevant factor in later chapters, its a complete waste of time, ok ok, we all know this, we all wanna see caroline bent over a table or linda perfecting toncil yoddeling, those 12 guys hiding under sara's bed waiting for her faucet to set to full open, but hey, im one of those wierdos waiting for the teacher to install a chalkboard over the MC's bed, and in intrest of trying to remain quiet, desperately writing on said board "moan" yeeeeee" "ohmygod", but hell, its a game, icstor is doing awesome work....I get board with it....I wait 3 or 5 updates

 

[Dasati]

I'm not really looking for more animation. For me icstor has always been 100 years beyond all competition by the content his/her games have. And the recent quality of images is outstanding. Therefore I just like to see more content, especially as the 0.3 update was.... a disaster. I just need more content of all the main character (no more focus on just a single character per update), that's all.

I feel like he/she recently hasn't that much time, no idea where it comes from. Maybe rendering this high quality images are taking too much? Maybe free time? Idk. But if he /she just does the same as usual (not the 0.3 joke update) then I'm more than happy.

Tbf 0.3 was an experiment in delivering monthly updates (mucked up a bit coz he fell ill, but overall dev time was still about a month) because thats what some people were asking for. Icstor tried it, found majority weren't happy with that amount of content and now he's learned from that. Some perspective on what we already know about 0.4. Update 0.3 was about 320+ new images, Icstor has said already on discord 600 images done for 0.4. Also bear in mind those 600 images and the status is only 50%. Which suggests that's 600 images involving kitchen guest, hes only just started working on Caroline's content.

@monk61 Tbf the twin's were just bonus char's, the lion's share of content in that update went to Linda and Caroline. Twin's story for now is finished, we'll only get more with them if the patron's ask for it. Introducing minor char's with a subplot isn't "milking" patreon.

For those complaining about the order of char updates/way story is unfolding I think there's a bit of misunderstanding. Patron's decide who an update will focus on, that's it. Everything else about their story is decided by Icstor and his writer. No char is going to be neglected or sidelined, if your fav char isn't chosen as update focus just be patient, they'll get to her eventually. My god people we're only at 0.3 currently.

 

[monk61]

Dasati, you seem a tad defensive and not taking my post as the intended humor it was posted as, bonus material in a completely unfleshed product can be definded quite honestly in a variety of different ways, myself I see it as a waste of time if not later relavent, those images and time could have done any number of things...dare I say slowly describing the creation of coffee, if you see it different, fine. If you are ics, I stand correcdted, if not no point is valid, and I'll stand with comedic intent

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

The twins felt a little too "tacked on" for me, to be honest. Honestly, the main character (on the liar's route) can file for attempted murder - that's still an arrestable offence, right?
If you get Dad/Bob kicked out, who's going to pay the bills? I don't think Caroline makes enough to cover that yet.

Opinions thus far:
+ Pacing
+ Character Interaction
+ Models
++ A semi-believable Mom
++ Super-cute Sister
+++ Caroline's Ass

- The Twins
- Revenge storyline a little thin for my tastes *
I can't quite think of anything else I don't like. I know it's only 0.3 and there's bucketloads more to go in (all those WIP sections) but we're already quite far along with the main character's family.

* Celia could actually get the police involved without the main character's knowledge. She has a wealth of Blackmail evidence by now. As far as I can tell, the main character isn't using an IP Spoofer so they could actually tap the communications (webcams are so unsafe nowadays) and backtrace it. I smell an interesting twist here.
No, all we get is "I'll find you, you fucktard, and when I do yadda yadda yadda". Come on Celia. You're a spiteful little bitch, not gobsmackingly stupid.

 

[monk61]

wait?...she's not gobb smackingly stupid? The timing of all of this is evidence enough to hold a bunson burner to MC 's balls, if not guilty entertaining enough to sing christmas caroles too. I know it sounds crazy, but I see Celia as a would be sacrificial dom, she doesnt care sub, dom, the crazed milf just wants to cum...I picture her after webcamming riding the shit outta the oldman........anyone remember the dog in scrooged....bone for christmas......

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

- The Twins

they were awesome.

+++ Caroline's Ass

that's a 5 star out of 3 ass

* Celia could actually get the police involved without the main character's knowledge. She has a wealth of Blackmail evidence by now. As far as I can tell, the main character isn't using an IP Spoofer so they could actually tap the communications (webcams are so unsafe nowadays) and backtrace it. I smell an interesting twist here.
No, all we get is "I'll find you, you fucktard, and when I do yadda yadda yadda". Come on Celia. You're a spiteful little bitch, not gobsmackingly stupid.

she can't get the police since she would lose her job, finding the blackmailer is her best option. she could still make a deal with violet's brother...

 

[Asphyx]

Well the problem with that is, like me, i have zero interest in sara or the twins. So if the storyline for the twins and sara was fully comkpleted first, id have stopped playing the game after the first relationship point. Also works the other way round. If Mom, Carolines, Violets and Judys story were completed first, then id play them and stop playing the game after completing them.

I kinda get where you are coming from on that regard, id have preferred to see everything done for each relationship point for each character rather than prioritising certain "in demand" characters.

It's a mistake many Patreon developers make in an attempt to offer something (and encouragement) to those who pledge more money each month.

(I have said similar things to the below comments in the MoH thread)
Polls are nice but they do take the Developer out of their story to satisfy some track that they didn't already have planned. And the story is what keeps us interested and playing!

The polls should be used only for short side stories with the main focus of development being moving their main story narrative and characters forward.

In this game the Sisters and Twins won a few polls. In a game titled "MILF CITY" the majority of recent development has been directed at all the women who are NOT MILFS!

Now I get Brother Sister is a very popular incest topic and no one should complain when it is incorporated into am incest story...
But if your game is titled MILF CITY you had best be sure to at least provide one MILF of content in each release no matter what the poll numbers are!

Some Devs (and I'm not accusing this one to be clear) run Polls because they really have no story and no clear narrative they are working on. Big Brother was a prime example of this practice which took that game so far off the beaten track and caused the story to change so drastically from release to release that zero story is actually present in that game whatsoever. Just a bunch of scenes slapped together based on whatever the last poll said.

A Good developer will have the entire story mapped out before they even start. And if it is a good story it will balance the scenes the main characters get each month because those scenes are quests that tell part of the main story and will eventually lead to the scenes of the other main character's story.

i.e. having sex with a sister that the mother finds out about or catches you in and leads to advancing the mother's sexual story. (not in this game just an example!). Then the sister sex is part of the "MILF City" story as it is a leading factor in getting to the MILF.

Polls should be used to add some variety or spice outside of the main story but not be the major focus of that releases development.
I don't mind the Twins or the Sisters in this game but they don't in anyway seem attached to a central story of this game. The Twins served the quest to get rid of the Father but we have not gotten the main story payoff of that quest yet. And if the polling goes the wrong way the next few months we may never see that payoff for half a year.

So my feeling is run a poll to create a short side quest in that release but never let it stop you from moving the planned story forward with the main characters.

If not there will be so many characters to deal with that none of your users will ever be happy because their favorite character only gets a scene once every 6 months!