I think could be a solid 4 even 4.5.
Great things about the game:
- Art, uncommon for me, but incredibly well made backgrounds, characters and H-scenes. Honestly the H scenes are nearly without comparison in the genre! You can tell it was a labor of love.
- Music, incredibly well crafted soundtrack that really add to the atmosphere. I found myself not changing frames at times to enjoy the gloomy eeriness of the atmosphere. Kudos!
- Story, this is a story that is amongst the best in the genre. It is compelling and "scary", actually made me want to hear more about the world and how our heroes fit in this world. Finally, even though the ending was a little bit out of "tone" with the rest of the story, it was incredibly endearing and sweet.
Bad things about the game:
- MC's narration: this game could have 30% of it's text removed and it would actually improve the end product without impacting the game at all. "Show it don't say it". The art is so fantastically good that there is really no good reason for MC to describe absolutely everything, twice over most times, in painstaking details.
- Dialogues: particularly during the H scenes, the dialogue is essentially the same for every single scene. Worse, most of these read like weird Japanese manga translation.... Honestly the world building is so good and the characters (for the most part) are so well fleshed-out and then during H scene they devolve to manga-tier retardation. Also incredibly repetitive, the author shouldn't be afraid to push the envelope on dialogue and kinks IMO. Again "Show it, don't say it".
- Weird relationship dynamics. Another user mentioned the lack of human contact between characters and he was right. However, my biggest peeve is how MC is supposedly "owning" these girls that discover their own submissiveness (hot), but then they proceed to walk all over him and humiliate him without any coherent reaction (cringe)...
- MC is an autistic retard with no ability to react appropriately to situations or infer about other characters mood/desire even when they ham-fistedly telegraph their feelings to him. In an other review I read was the best description: "retarded doormat".
- Mia is annoying as shit. Still, I get it's part of her character and I think that without the other issue with narration/dialogue it would actually be bearable and possible even enjoyable.
- Playing without the taboo patch makes the Lily story arc absolutely head-through-the-wall frustrating (see MC being a retard point). With the appropriate relationships however, it makes a lot more sense (still a bit frustrating though).
While there seems to be a lot more bad then good, it's not actually the case. The good parts of this game outweigh the negatives for sure. And I think the tweaks to make the experience better on all levels would be fairly simple to implement. Which won't happen because the game is completed. Ultimately, if the game ever makes it on Steam, I'll buy it because I want to support the developer. Looking forward to see what they plan to do next.
P.S.: Dev, if you read this, I really enjoyed your game, but you can definitely do much better dialogue-wise.
Great things about the game:
- Art, uncommon for me, but incredibly well made backgrounds, characters and H-scenes. Honestly the H scenes are nearly without comparison in the genre! You can tell it was a labor of love.
- Music, incredibly well crafted soundtrack that really add to the atmosphere. I found myself not changing frames at times to enjoy the gloomy eeriness of the atmosphere. Kudos!
- Story, this is a story that is amongst the best in the genre. It is compelling and "scary", actually made me want to hear more about the world and how our heroes fit in this world. Finally, even though the ending was a little bit out of "tone" with the rest of the story, it was incredibly endearing and sweet.
Bad things about the game:
- MC's narration: this game could have 30% of it's text removed and it would actually improve the end product without impacting the game at all. "Show it don't say it". The art is so fantastically good that there is really no good reason for MC to describe absolutely everything, twice over most times, in painstaking details.
- Dialogues: particularly during the H scenes, the dialogue is essentially the same for every single scene. Worse, most of these read like weird Japanese manga translation.... Honestly the world building is so good and the characters (for the most part) are so well fleshed-out and then during H scene they devolve to manga-tier retardation. Also incredibly repetitive, the author shouldn't be afraid to push the envelope on dialogue and kinks IMO. Again "Show it, don't say it".
- Weird relationship dynamics. Another user mentioned the lack of human contact between characters and he was right. However, my biggest peeve is how MC is supposedly "owning" these girls that discover their own submissiveness (hot), but then they proceed to walk all over him and humiliate him without any coherent reaction (cringe)...
- MC is an autistic retard with no ability to react appropriately to situations or infer about other characters mood/desire even when they ham-fistedly telegraph their feelings to him. In an other review I read was the best description: "retarded doormat".
- Mia is annoying as shit. Still, I get it's part of her character and I think that without the other issue with narration/dialogue it would actually be bearable and possible even enjoyable.
- Playing without the taboo patch makes the Lily story arc absolutely head-through-the-wall frustrating (see MC being a retard point). With the appropriate relationships however, it makes a lot more sense (still a bit frustrating though).
While there seems to be a lot more bad then good, it's not actually the case. The good parts of this game outweigh the negatives for sure. And I think the tweaks to make the experience better on all levels would be fairly simple to implement. Which won't happen because the game is completed. Ultimately, if the game ever makes it on Steam, I'll buy it because I want to support the developer. Looking forward to see what they plan to do next.
P.S.: Dev, if you read this, I really enjoyed your game, but you can definitely do much better dialogue-wise.