- Sep 7, 2017
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Would of been nice to know that this had rape in it before playing it. Was excited for a new femprotag
I 100% agree that choosing who you are fucking is a lot better that not choosing. But I was talking about people complaing about ntr on a ntr gameGood question. When you have a character cheat it's usually better to have it so you can choose who and when she cheats. Maybe you want her to not cheat with all possible people to cheat. Even if the game is relatively empty if all NTR is avoided such as Elena's Life.
For now it is. If ther you don't see any choise to make, it mean rape.What type of story? Is it rape?
Yea and some people prefer blackmail/rape, if you don't like it than find a game that has what you do like.agreed on that, rather to choose to with whom i cheat with, than this blackmail/rape
That's why we have this thing called comments.Would of been nice to know that this had rape in it before playing it. Was excited for a new femprotag
Shhh, don't tell the that, they'll tell Japan that it is wrong.Really?
Because in Japan, where NTR originated, it's mainly told from the woman's perspective.
Humor is very tricky. Issues with translation, that what is funny in some cultures is not in others, just the differences in what individuals in the same culture find to be funny varies greatly. You can try but it might just fall flat. Try to tighten up your story telling/dialog before going for the jokes.We are now preparing a new version. In it, the family only moves to a new city. Exit should be at the end of next week. We will try to write everything smoothly and in detail. We also found a translator who could bring the script to a decent appearance. I also want to ask you if it's worth adding jokes? I mean, will this break your erection?
Thank you so much for your feedback. This version is a bit of a prototype. The full version (1.01) is due out on November 24th. It will have more than 100 pictures, as well as a full-fledged beginning of the plot. We released a prototype to receive feedback, as well as wishes, and it really helped us. We were taught to optimize the render with minimal loss of quality. We are also going to start keeping a development diary. So that the community can express their opinions in different parts of the game.Alright, I'm going to give an actual analysis of this "game." in a point by point break down on where it can be improved.
The renders: mostly decent but somewhat misused. For instance, her make up gets really fucked up right away before a finger has been put on her. The house is rendered by itself in a black background it needs a neighborhood. Occasionally an image gets an odd black squiggly line on it that needs to be photoshopped out. One image is just a close up of the principles shirt to show it's texture? Other than that the models are not bad, and the cum on body stuff worked out well along with the poses. Not bad, but room for improvement.
The Engrish: Ya, there is definite Engrish there. Some folks don't speak English well so I don't really care much about that if there is an occasional fuck up.
The Characters: Not significantly developed. Little is known. Sarah moved to a new town, has a son she wants to get into a school, and her husband works at the gas station. That's pretty much all we know about the entire family. This is bad. Characters need more development.
The pacing: Things progress far too quickly given the circumstances. People are not acting in a way that people would act reasonably. The breaks need to be put on this thing and slowed down so that we can get more of a feel of who the characters are before sex scenes are thrown in.
Plot: It's a very weak plot. The plot as far as I can tell is; A family moves to a new town. The husband works at a gas station. The wife wants the son to go to a certain school. She must suck the principles cock before he fucks her in the ass to get him into the school. It's too weak of blackmail to get her into this position. Here is some possible alternative blackmails that may be buyable in terms of the required "urgency" at the current pacing although not recommended in the first place.
-Her son needs a heart transplant. This guy writes the donor list. He normally takes money as a bribe. She has no money to offer.
-Her son is going to be put in the electric chair. This is the governor. He can pardon her son. She must convince the governor.
-Her son has been kidnapped by human traffickers. This guy knows how to save her son, but again he wants money but she does not have money to offer.
To just attend a public school she lets the principal fuck her in the ass? There are other schools or homeschooling. She has many ways out of this, or he could just drop out for now. She could call the police or the news. There are just too many outs in this situation.
It's unclear to me if this is an attempt at making a game or if it is simply a parody of a game made for jokes. Keep working at it, I'll check it out later.
If there was presnet choises to make I prefer hit the principal in the balls with a punch or hit them with full harm in the balls. or make a choise to go out for another school and mabey last step whoring hersalf for her own choise don't from others. I wish this will a joke. If I was borne female I gone kill him or call the police to send this buastrd in jail.Thank you so much for your feedback. This version is a bit of a prototype. The full version (1.01) is due out on November 24th. It will have more than 100 pictures, as well as a full-fledged beginning of the plot. We released a prototype to receive feedback, as well as wishes, and it really helped us. We were taught to optimize the render with minimal loss of quality. We are also going to start keeping a development diary. So that the community can express their opinions in different parts of the game.