VN Ren'Py Abandoned Modern Family [v0.2] [CuckoldBoys]

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OneWayMissile

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Good question. When you have a character cheat it's usually better to have it so you can choose who and when she cheats. Maybe you want her to not cheat with all possible people to cheat. Even if the game is relatively empty if all NTR is avoided such as Elena's Life.
I 100% agree that choosing who you are fucking is a lot better that not choosing. But I was talking about people complaing about ntr on a ntr game
 

CuckoldBoys

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You are all right. I screwed up. I will try to fix everything in the near future. I also ask those people who liked the idea of the game to join the discord channel. So it will be easier for me to receive feedback.
 
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Watcher X

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The only positive thing I can say about this...game...is it was over in less than 2 minutes.
 

Eldar

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So why does it look like she's bleeding out of her eyes? Did she just awaken the Mangekyo Sharingan by killing her husbannd's hopes and dreams?
 

Crimx42

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Modern problems require Modern Families


but really... I would love to see more games using A girl with thighs as thick as this, maybe with a 3some with the ultra thin "totally not a loli" girl most games have as well
 

The_fallen_dragon

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agreed on that, rather to choose to with whom i cheat with, than this blackmail/rape
Yea and some people prefer blackmail/rape, if you don't like it than find a game that has what you do like.



Would of been nice to know that this had rape in it before playing it. Was excited for a new femprotag
That's why we have this thing called comments.

Really?

Because in Japan, where NTR originated, it's mainly told from the woman's perspective.
Shhh, don't tell the that, they'll tell Japan that it is wrong.
 
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meigame

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oh good. The same old NTR/cuck debate that shows up in every discussion about any game that approaches that type of story.

Don't care. waste of time.

This is way short and poorly written. It appears to be a story about a woman who will be abused and treated like shit. ok. I can deal with that. But please put a little effort into it. All we have here is whiny bitch cries, sucks stinky cock and gets fucked in the ass. And that is fine. But fill out the story a little, polish up the dialog. Give us a few better images. Let us see her asshole being violated. I think you could have put a little more into this before it was released here. Good luck in the future.
 
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Yotsuyu

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Checked it out. Not bad for a 0.1 imo. People here have to understand that this is basically just a teaser at best. It's one singular scene with little build up and goes from 0-100 rather fast. That said, it does it's job well by displaying just what type of setting/themes you will be getting into here from the start. Something I appreciate far more than those devs that try to please everyone while riding the fence. Is it perfect, no, far from it. But, as a .1 it's enough to make me keep my eye on future releases.
 

CuckoldBoys

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We are now preparing a new version. In it, the family only moves to a new city. Exit should be at the end of next week. We will try to write everything smoothly and in detail. We also found a translator who could bring the script to a decent appearance. I also want to ask you if it's worth adding jokes? I mean, will this break your erection?
 

meigame

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We are now preparing a new version. In it, the family only moves to a new city. Exit should be at the end of next week. We will try to write everything smoothly and in detail. We also found a translator who could bring the script to a decent appearance. I also want to ask you if it's worth adding jokes? I mean, will this break your erection?
Humor is very tricky. Issues with translation, that what is funny in some cultures is not in others, just the differences in what individuals in the same culture find to be funny varies greatly. You can try but it might just fall flat. Try to tighten up your story telling/dialog before going for the jokes.
 

yihman1

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Alright, I'm going to give an actual analysis of this "game." in a point by point break down on where it can be improved.

The renders: mostly decent but somewhat misused. For instance, her make up gets really fucked up right away before a finger has been put on her. The house is rendered by itself in a black background it needs a neighborhood. Occasionally an image gets an odd black squiggly line on it that needs to be photoshopped out. One image is just a close up of the principles shirt to show it's texture? Other than that the models are not bad, and the cum on body stuff worked out well along with the poses. Not bad, but room for improvement.

The Engrish: Ya, there is definite Engrish there. Some folks don't speak English well so I don't really care much about that if there is an occasional fuck up.

The Characters: Not significantly developed. Little is known. Sarah moved to a new town, has a son she wants to get into a school, and her husband works at the gas station. That's pretty much all we know about the entire family. This is bad. Characters need more development.

The pacing: Things progress far too quickly given the circumstances. People are not acting in a way that people would act reasonably. The breaks need to be put on this thing and slowed down so that we can get more of a feel of who the characters are before sex scenes are thrown in.

Plot: It's a very weak plot. The plot as far as I can tell is; A family moves to a new town. The husband works at a gas station. The wife wants the son to go to a certain school. She must suck the principles cock before he fucks her in the ass to get him into the school. It's too weak of blackmail to get her into this position. Here is some possible alternative blackmails that may be buyable in terms of the required "urgency" at the current pacing although not recommended in the first place.

-Her son needs a heart transplant. This guy writes the donor list. He normally takes money as a bribe. She has no money to offer.

-Her son is going to be put in the electric chair. This is the governor. He can pardon her son. She must convince the governor.

-Her son has been kidnapped by human traffickers. This guy knows how to save her son, but again he wants money but she does not have money to offer.

To just attend a public school she lets the principal fuck her in the ass? There are other schools or homeschooling. She has many ways out of this, or he could just drop out for now. She could call the police or the news. There are just too many outs in this situation.

It's unclear to me if this is an attempt at making a game or if it is simply a parody of a game made for jokes. Keep working at it, I'll check it out later.
 

CuckoldBoys

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Alright, I'm going to give an actual analysis of this "game." in a point by point break down on where it can be improved.

The renders: mostly decent but somewhat misused. For instance, her make up gets really fucked up right away before a finger has been put on her. The house is rendered by itself in a black background it needs a neighborhood. Occasionally an image gets an odd black squiggly line on it that needs to be photoshopped out. One image is just a close up of the principles shirt to show it's texture? Other than that the models are not bad, and the cum on body stuff worked out well along with the poses. Not bad, but room for improvement.

The Engrish: Ya, there is definite Engrish there. Some folks don't speak English well so I don't really care much about that if there is an occasional fuck up.

The Characters: Not significantly developed. Little is known. Sarah moved to a new town, has a son she wants to get into a school, and her husband works at the gas station. That's pretty much all we know about the entire family. This is bad. Characters need more development.

The pacing: Things progress far too quickly given the circumstances. People are not acting in a way that people would act reasonably. The breaks need to be put on this thing and slowed down so that we can get more of a feel of who the characters are before sex scenes are thrown in.

Plot: It's a very weak plot. The plot as far as I can tell is; A family moves to a new town. The husband works at a gas station. The wife wants the son to go to a certain school. She must suck the principles cock before he fucks her in the ass to get him into the school. It's too weak of blackmail to get her into this position. Here is some possible alternative blackmails that may be buyable in terms of the required "urgency" at the current pacing although not recommended in the first place.

-Her son needs a heart transplant. This guy writes the donor list. He normally takes money as a bribe. She has no money to offer.

-Her son is going to be put in the electric chair. This is the governor. He can pardon her son. She must convince the governor.

-Her son has been kidnapped by human traffickers. This guy knows how to save her son, but again he wants money but she does not have money to offer.

To just attend a public school she lets the principal fuck her in the ass? There are other schools or homeschooling. She has many ways out of this, or he could just drop out for now. She could call the police or the news. There are just too many outs in this situation.

It's unclear to me if this is an attempt at making a game or if it is simply a parody of a game made for jokes. Keep working at it, I'll check it out later.
Thank you so much for your feedback. This version is a bit of a prototype. The full version (1.01) is due out on November 24th. It will have more than 100 pictures, as well as a full-fledged beginning of the plot. We released a prototype to receive feedback, as well as wishes, and it really helped us. We were taught to optimize the render with minimal loss of quality. We are also going to start keeping a development diary. So that the community can express their opinions in different parts of the game.
 
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88Michele88

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Thank you so much for your feedback. This version is a bit of a prototype. The full version (1.01) is due out on November 24th. It will have more than 100 pictures, as well as a full-fledged beginning of the plot. We released a prototype to receive feedback, as well as wishes, and it really helped us. We were taught to optimize the render with minimal loss of quality. We are also going to start keeping a development diary. So that the community can express their opinions in different parts of the game.
If there was presnet choises to make I prefer hit the principal in the balls with a punch or hit them with full harm in the balls. or make a choise to go out for another school and mabey last step whoring hersalf for her own choise don't from others. I wish this will a joke. If I was borne female I gone kill him or call the police to send this buastrd in jail.
 
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