don't know why people complaining anyways, both links won't download cause my comp says they contain a virus. plus if people don't like it, then don't play it. who woulda thunk it was so simple.....
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Cool update. Not a lot of spicy content but a lot of good setup for the future. Also I feel like the English has gotten a bit more clean compared to earlier updates which might seem like a tiny thing but it does make the experience a bit more enjoyable in my opinion.
I am quite excited to see what options open up after the “big reveal” that’s coming.
I am quite excited to see what options open up after the “big reveal” that’s coming.
The Ronovan I appreciate the effort you put into the transitions in the game!
I have a suggestion for further improvement:
I found myself losing focus on the dialogue due to the pauses between speakers. The constant duration was uncanny, I think, as was the fact that the characters seemed to always have to complete their movement before they could speak.
After a quick-and-dirty find-and-replace of " with dissolve" with " with dis" (using the declaration from the RenPy documentation I linked, above) I found myself dramatically more engaged. Indeed, I stopped double-clicking to skip the transitions to get to the next line of dialogue.
Just a humble suggestion for you to consider, if you haven't already, and my apologies if you're already aware of the technique and decided against it.
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.I found myself losing focus on the dialogue due to the pauses between speakers. The constant duration was uncanny, I think, as was the fact that the characters seemed to always have to complete their movement before they could speak.
After a quick-and-dirty find-and-replace of " with dissolve" with " with dis" (using the declaration from the RenPy documentation I linked, above) I found myself dramatically more engaged. Indeed, I stopped double-clicking to skip the transitions to get to the next line of dialogue.
Just a humble suggestion for you to consider, if you haven't already, and my apologies if you're already aware of the technique and decided against it.
I have not looked into this actually so thanks for bringing it up!
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Holy shit,
What a gem I found.
Can't believe I missed this many months back.
Keep'em coming!
What a gem I found.
Can't believe I missed this many months back.
Keep'em coming!
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Not a huge fan of honey select games usually but these models are better than most and the loli content is extraordinary!
Tried it out of boredom due to the good reviews and so glad I did! Might become a favorite!
Tried it out of boredom due to the good reviews and so glad I did! Might become a favorite!
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Hey Ron, use native speakers for proofreading grammar, sentence structure (and occasional spelling). I took a brief conversational Japanese course, but the various picto letters and more phrases would make me a poor choice for releases there. A native English speaker could work with what you have intent is obvious most of the time. Terms like "bakery" are not used in common discourse. The formal vs, familiar conjugations seem mostly good though. The hints on Luna and observations create an expectation of an early age trauma. Not nitpicking, just I cannot help observe many things at once, such as why would a "President" Principal in a nice office with genuine wood and tasteful decor use a paper cup coffee. Porcelain is the ticket. I personally use double glass walled coffee mugs of sizes, if I plan on finishing soon, or a special self shutting off regulating coffee warmer for porcelain or ceramic mugs. It actually shuts off as you lift off its spring switch platform (rare, also have one for soup sizes).
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Hello,
Just wanna say, i'm really enjoying the game so far. A shame i haven't seen it earlier.
I have seen someone talking about a girl being too reddish, i concur, at times some skin appear to be extra reddish or a slight tint of orange. Or it's possibly a problem on my end, since well my screen is old and i always have night mod on, so yeah, it may be just a me problem.
As for the girls.... Morrigan & Gabby have me in a chokehold, they're just so....
Can't wait to steal Morrigan from her husband and some Gabby's sweet time, as for the others i appreciate the fact we aren't forced to do anything with them.
Congrats to you dev, for making this gem, keep up the good work and take care.
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Just wanna say, i'm really enjoying the game so far. A shame i haven't seen it earlier.
I have seen someone talking about a girl being too reddish, i concur, at times some skin appear to be extra reddish or a slight tint of orange. Or it's possibly a problem on my end, since well my screen is old and i always have night mod on, so yeah, it may be just a me problem.
As for the girls.... Morrigan & Gabby have me in a chokehold, they're just so....
Can't wait to steal Morrigan from her husband and some Gabby's sweet time, as for the others i appreciate the fact we aren't forced to do anything with them.
Congrats to you dev, for making this gem, keep up the good work and take care.
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Great game. Some people should remember this is fiction, when I'm mass murdering people in GTA I obviously don't feel like doing it IRL right, there's a huge difference when you're hurting real people.
Anyway, hope you keep it up dev you're doing great
Anyway, hope you keep it up dev you're doing great
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why is it the protagonist makes the dumbest fucking decisions at the most critical junctures? oh yeah porn protag disease is a thing....
seriously hate the lack of choice at important plot points.
seriously hate the lack of choice at important plot points.
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Good to have you back Ronovan! Can't wait to see next update.
This is a limitation of my current writing skill. I'm just not confident in writing a decent story if I start adding multiple branching story choices :/ Trying my best to still make it interresting though.
You're good, no one expects you to have years of Experience in writing a Story let alone creating Branches right away, it takes time but it shows you're trying and even improving. Keep it up