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Work in progress, I had a quick play through. So the relationships not great, boys nights roll around, the ntr consequence comes from you neglecting the missus and piling evidence of cheating against yourself with a phone number, your dumb friend (We all have one) that has to post online that your in a strip club etc. whilst basically choosing to party with them rather than going home. Could introduce john a little in the story even if it's just the missus dropping his name in conversation. i'll be keeping an eye on it.
So with John, he is mentioned in the first night when the Wife cook for the MC but much like with a lot of what you've mentioned I'll be working on a little rework of Chapter 1 once I complete it so that the NTR and other things feel a bit more in place with some added scenes and what not to make it a bit fuller yk And hey if you wanna join the Discord please feel free to do so, there's more about the game there if you're intersted!
 
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Just a little suggestion for something different, since you went and added a ntr option to make the player a cuck, why not add one to make the wife a cuckqueen? Could be a fun little turn and also add some plot, but dunno just a suggestion keep up the good work author (y)
Hey, hey, hey now... Don't go spoiling the game! Don't worry that's incoming, I love me some cuckqueen, it was from that that I started the NTR. Ofc now I've added a sort of cuck MC but I'll be sure to make the wife watch as you fuck another girl into submission, wink, wink
 

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Is Jay a guy or a girl? I can't tell with you switching the he's and she's around
Ay, so Jay is an in-transition Trans (M2F). I wanted to do a sort of MC who doesn't really know but is getting the hots for Jay even tho his unsure whether it's a guy or not. Be sure to stay tuned as you'll be meeting Jay on the weekend and further their relationship
 

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Hey! In the new update, I've added a gay blowjob between the MC and another male character, enjoy!
Hey! Is this the only gay scene? I ask as someone who's gay and only interested in M/M. If this is the only scene that's fine, I'll just prob wait till there's some more cause I get tired of playing through tons of M/F content for one M/M scene, etc. But if there's more than i'm always down to check it out

Either way congrats on the game! Seems like you got a good thing goin :)
 

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... Many porn videos are free on those sites because they're pirated copies uploaded by users. It's like saying the games on F95 are all free because we can download it here freely so the devs clearly don't intend on making money from them. It's not true in the slightest.

Further more, even if a company releases a porn video for free as a promotion for their site, it does NOT give anyone else rights to creative derivative works. That's not how IP and copyright works, they still own all of the rights to the video. The only reason game devs who use real porn can get away with it is simple, they're too small for porn companies to bother going after.
You are also on a pirate site f95zone :unsure:
 

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I loved this game, I want more from Tom and Em. Especially with Tom filming her and you advising her to leave that would be interesting.
 

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Hey! Is this the only gay scene? I ask as someone who's gay and only interested in M/M. If this is the only scene that's fine, I'll just prob wait till there's some more cause I get tired of playing through tons of M/F content for one M/M scene, etc. But if there's more than i'm always down to check it out

Either way congrats on the game! Seems like you got a good thing goin :)
Thank you for that, I can't believe the game is getting this much traction!

In regards to M/M I can't promise you anything but it's quite unlikely as I myself am not gay or bi... I added this one in particular as it'll work in the context of the game (especially later on) and there could be another one so as to solidify the character in question but again I can't promise anything, unfortunately... However, if I do end up adding another I'll let you know but mostly it'll be M/F and M/T so idk if it's worth going through that just for one other scene if you're not into the rest of the M/F yk
 
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I loved this game, I want more from Tom and Em. Especially with Tom filming her and you advising her to leave that would be interesting.
Thank YOU! and SHHhhhh don't spoil the game! At the moment MC (if you choose to help Tom) won't be telling her to leave just yet ofc however if you choose to get Em with the ex then there could be more of that also (so basically you could have Em with two jerks at once ;) who'll definitely be filming for you)
 
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Thank you for that, I can't believe the game is getting this much traction!

In regards to M/M I can't promise you anything but it's quite unlikely as I myself am not gay or bi... I added this one in particular as it'll work in the context of the game (especially later on) and there could be another one so as to solidify the character in question but again I can't promise anything, unfortunately... However, if I do end up adding another I'll let you know but mostly it'll be M/F and M/T so idk if it's worth going through that just for one other scene if you're not into the rest of the M/F yk
Thanks for the info! I appreciate it. i've gone through tons of games in hope for m/m content that wasnt there so i appreciate it. If that ever changes lemme know ;)
 

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Hello.

This game seems promising.

The worldbuilding is similar to other games with that kind of content.
The characters are already plenty but not all described enough.
The story is easy to follow.
The images and videos selection is good.

First, they seem so in love with each other that I had a hard time imagining that pact being made. If there really was a routine happening, they would have realized it themselves, talked about it and maybe decided to spice up their sex life. It's also strange that the MC needed his old friends to talk about his sex life (like he had nobody else to confide since it started?). The discussion between them after you decided to man up and reveal everything was strange for me too (does that mean you want to include some swinging or simple cheating outside NTR?). Plus, I think there should be an option before (something like "Do you want to reveal everything?" or "Keep it for yourself"). The idea of "I want to fuck other girls" shouldn't be that easy to say. Also, the contradiction between his feelings and what he thinks/how he acts made it hard to indentify with him.

The choices really matters here. That's a good point.

I didn't like the scene with the blond girl that broke down her car. You just propose to give her a ride and she immediately starts stripping... And you let it going on without thinking about it that much (plus it's dangerous : it could have been another end game). I would have liked a choice to continue after seing her boobs (or at least going to a parking lots to avoid any accident).

The gay content consist only of a blowjob. I hope it won't be only a submissive path. I like when the characters are versatile in a gay relationship. His reaction after he did it is done the right way. I also hope this path won't be exclusive either since I would like a possible bi path.

These are just my thoughts and what I felt, so don't bother too much with them. I just hope to help even a little.

The ripping of his pants was fun.

So I had those tags on but had to remove them as they weren't implemented in the game just yet. This refers to 2 choices that you will have throughout the game. One, whether you want to see trans in the game (there is a character in transition in this chapter which you can ignore or take their number for later chapters) and the second being I might have MC also be trans/sissy depending on your choices (this last one is still a thought tho and will depend on if people want to see it ofc)
If you do a sissification path, I would prefer if it's his choice and not something imposed or forced on him.

I found a $ before Frank once at the party and one during the sex scene between John and the wife (cf files). And a sentence in the wrong color when we go to bed after the cheating scene with John (cf files). Maybe there are others, so try to check again if you still have some time left. Speaking of that character, is it Jon or John? Because the 2 are present in the game.

Also, be careful with your abbreviations
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Since you have a character by the name of Em, it can be confusing.

You missed some speeling errors, be careful.

And last question, what does MOns mean? I thought it was for monster the first time.

Good continuation.
 
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Thank YOU! and SHHhhhh don't spoil the game! At the moment MC (if you choose to help Tom) won't be telling her to leave just yet ofc however if you choose to get Em with the ex then there could be more of that also (so basically you could have Em with two jerks at once ;) who'll definitely be filming for you)
I have another question, to have and in is it necessary to reject her boyfriend? What if accepting her boyfriend can make her accept a controlling obsession with him? And as for Tom, can he help with other women in the company?
 

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Thank YOU! and SHHhhhh don't spoil the game! At the moment MC (if you choose to help Tom) won't be telling her to leave just yet ofc however if you choose to get Em with the ex then there could be more of that also (so basically you could have Em with two jerks at once ;) who'll definitely be filming for you)
I just wanted to say that I made a mistake there in "leave" I was supposed to write "allow"
 
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Hello.

This game seems promising.

The worldbuilding is similar to other games with that kind of content.
The characters are already plenty but not all described enough.
The story is easy to follow.
The images and videos selection is good.

First, they seem so in love with each other that I had a hard time imagining that pact being made. If there really was a routine happening, they would have realized it themselves, talked about it and maybe decided to spice up their sex life. It's also strange that the MC needed his old friends to talk about his sex life (like he had nobody else to confide since it started?). The discussion between them after you decided to man up and reveal everything was strange for me too (does that mean you want to include some swinging or simple cheating outside NTR?). Plus, I think there should be an option before (something like "Do you want to reveal everything?" or "Keep it for yourself"). The idea of "I want to fuck other girls" shouldn't be that easy to say. Also, the contradiction between his feelings and what he thinks/how he acts made it hard to indentify with him.

The choices really matters here. That's a good point.

I didn't like the scene with the blond girl that broke down her car. You just propose to give her a ride and she immediately starts stripping... And you let it going on without thinking about it that much (plus it's dangerous : it could have been another end game). I would have liked a choice to continue after seing her boobs (or at least going to a parking lots to avoid any accident).

The gay content consist only of a blowjob. I hope it won't be only a submissive path. I like when the characters are versatile in a gay relationship. His reaction after he did it is done the right way. I also hope this path won't be exclusive either since I would like a possible bi path.

These are just my thoughts and what I felt, so don't bother too much with them. I just hope to help even a little.

The ripping of his pants was fun.


If you do a sissification path, I would prefer if it's his choice and not something imposed or forced on him.

I found a $ before Frank once at the party and one during the sex scene between John and the wife (cf files). And a sentence in the wrong color when we go to bed after the cheating scene with John (cf files). Maybe there are others, so try to check again if you still have some time left. Speaking of that character, is it Jon or John? Because the 2 are present in the game.

Also, be careful with your abbreviations
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Since you have a character by the name of Em, it can be confusing.

You missed some speeling errors, be careful.

And last question, what does MOns mean? I thought it was for monster the first time.

Good continuation.
Thanks for the feedback! That's a lot I need to fix.

Ay so first before anything I want to say that I have used lots of different sources to base the game on (mostly my experiences, some char are based on certain traits of me, ofc the MC being the most influenced).
With that, the pact is based on Druk with Mads Mikkelsen and how his unhappy with his life and they make a sort of pact to change their lives. The approach to the MC inability to move is from the film where it's that push from the friends that kick the MC to change. With that boost, the MC is finally able to discuss things of how he feels than just "what's best to keep things as they are" (that's also from my own experiences) as in being afraid of what would happen if one was truly honest even it can be really bad for the relationship. And yes, this will be so that there's some sort of swinging and eventually cuckqueening also.
I might add the "keep to yourself" option later on and that's the thing, its the pact that makes MC finally say what he wants (deffo not based on rl).

Can you gimme an example of that contradiction, I'm drawing a blank here, might be something I fucked up.

Eventually, choices will really matter (especially once I finish chapter one redo, and add all the variables).

The car ride girl was an homage to That Girl, almost word by word that's why.

The gay scene (once I add the variables for everything) will matter later on in how quick either you or --- get subbed/sissy (don't wanna spoil anything yet) but I get what you mean, I want to break some stigmas in here (?) of how things would be like irl and how just because A or B that doesn't mean it's how it would play out, trying to be a little more real even with how ppl act against their own interests.

And yes, much like with a lot of things here, sissy will be completely optional and not forced on you or other char.

Yeah... the ripping off the pants gif was too good not to add to the game!

Fixed the $ and the colour error, thank you! And about the Jons, that's on me, always get confused with which is the way to spell it... I think I'll stick with Jon so I don't fuck up again.

Good spot on Em em, I'll keep an eye on that from now on, I can see how that can be confusing, especially for those that don't get English right (like me!)

I was hoping Grammarly would have gotten most of them, legit I copy-paste each passage onto wordcounter to check the errors :ROFLMAO:

MOns means, MOns. I don't know, the idea came from MOaning, I'm terrible with making up names so ye.
 

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I have another question, to have and in is it necessary to reject her boyfriend? What if accepting her boyfriend can make her accept a controlling obsession with him? And as for Tom, can he help with other women in the company?
Nah you can either tell her to reject him (and keep her to yourself) or tell her to give it a try which will result in her going back to a bad relationship which you will have the front row of and as for Tom, what do you mean exactly?
 
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Nah you can either tell her to reject him (and keep her to yourself) or tell her to give it a try which will result in her going back to a bad relationship which you will have the front row of and as for Tom, what do you mean exactly?
Got it, thanks for responding. The Tom part is not very important so you can ignore the question. But I was wondering if I could help Tom with other women in the company including the boss.
 

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Hello.

Thanks for the explainations.

Can you gimme an example of that contradiction, I'm drawing a blank here, might be something I fucked up.
He loves her so much that he doesn't want to hurt her (well, that's how I understood it).

His conversation with Emily about Jay : he doesn't want to cheat
When he goes to the bar with Frank/when he goes to Kyle and Cindy's house : he doesn't bother anymore neither he even thinks about his wife

While waiting for her answer, he still lets the car ride blond girl try something (meaning he doesn't even care of his wife's answer).
When he found out his wife was cheating, he was angry and jealous though he didn't even think about it while doing the same.

Well, it depends on the path you chose. Maybe the pact has also something to do with it. And it can also be myself overthinking (I'm always analyzing things too much, sorry).

Hope it can help.

Good continuation.
 
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