MC's 22 at the start of book 1 (it's his birthday a couple of days before the book starts)
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It's your book man. What you say goes but look man just because MC is 22 in a miracle doesn't necessarily means all postgraduates are under 22 or 20/21 in that guys opinion. It's simply isn't possible. Whatever, this is not my main point.
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Yeah, I normally prefer C's myself, but for some reason the new Asian girls (Lin, Saffron and Mu Lau, ended up on larger side of the scale). They look proportional though, so I don't mind.
Interestingly enough, Mu Lau was originally supposed to be a more antagonistic character, and Lin wasn't supposed to have a speaking role. One you start writing/rendering them, they take on their own life.
About your loving real(mostly ugly or average) looking girl, you should
say average looking girl rather real looking girl. There are plenty beautiful girls out there and even around me there are at least
2-3 women whom I consider top looking.
Just because someone looks average doesn't necessarily mean she is real and the beautiful one is unreal.
Besides I didn't ask not to include
real looking or more accurately average looking girl, I just said include some gorgeous and flawless looking girl too.
Everyone has their own taste which heavily depends on their own physicality and mentality. The guy who sits top for his look simply will not be aroused by
someone who looks worse. What I asked for
was variation as Love of Magic simply had almost
the same type. I
never said to exclude average ones.
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BTW I have one request. As you have been using same models for Morningstar. I hope you will use the model named
Kathleen Kerr(Were lynx) specially with the measurements of of her modeling career (DxP amd Demonfox). She was great looking with good shape and as usual you skipped her mostly. Probably had only one proper scene if not any at all that's why I can't remember as I am playing the book three I hope I will be able to resurface the memory.
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Man I have said it before and saying it again from my heart, as your writing is great if you had mixed your models like other famous devs, you would already gained at least 2-3k patrons in Patreon. I'm not saying this for my own gain. I love uour story and It's certainly the best out there, your remders are high quality too but still not enough fans. With some research you will see that all high earning DEVs have a few unique gorgeous looking models.
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Anyway I don't wanna elaborate any further. I hope I was able to clarify.
Ow another matter I wanted to tell you that, You could try to actually
publish the story as an actual novel. As a literature student I can confidently say that the novel will do great but it need some tweaks and rewriting as you know VN writing and actual novel writing ain't same as the novel needs setting, surroundings, emotion etc additional description.
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Anyway all the best for your VN. As I said I'm a student, so cannot support in Patreon regularly but I will definitely buy it from steam if it is as good as LOM.
Another thing I missed, Your
C's are more on the B's side. Chloe is more like a C not the other girls. I love higher C's and D.
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Have a nice day and all the best with your work. And don't forget Kathleen the Werelynx.