I was a little disappointed there wasn't more with the daughter visiting her mother when she sleeping and how quickly the mother woke up. was a nice change seeing a woman doing that instead of a guy playing with a sleeping mother.
VN is a little buggy, sometimes instead of a view outside a window, you would see a previous image, not sure if it was meant but was very offputting. Also, when novel transitioned from one image to the next, sometimes you would see a previous image of the daughter between.
so it was like image > daughter image > next image > daughter image > next image.
Seem to start happening after the daughter visiting mother when she is sleeping scene.
Besides all that, the novel has a lot of potential. the angry son who can't stand his mother is an interesting choice, something different from the norm.
