- Nov 9, 2020
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Couldn't agree any more with this, I'm someone who likes a variety of VN's anywhere between slow burn and something more rapid, as long as the story has something about it that makes it worth reading. This one I kinda feel is starting to getting to push the boundaries of just not worth it any more, it's been 18 months and the most we have so far is as you say a drunk makeout session that Jennifer probably won't even remember in the morning.After I read a few post here, I don't understand how getting along with Alan makes him fuck Jennifer, but if you don't get along with him makes both of them just go to sleep, I'm glad I didn't get along with him.
Also, I don't mind slow burn games, the writing isn't good enough to keep people hooked for long enough to wait for anything to happen, he's been there for a week already, and if it continues at this pace, nothing will ever happen, the best we got was a drunk makeout session, where Jennifer was so drunk she probably thought MC was Alan, as she was saying he should join her in the bedroom because she wants it.
Aside from that so far all we really have is a couple of voyeur scenes that I'm pretty sure the majority of the target audience of this VN have absolutely no interest in seeing, yeah you don't have to see them but why even waste the time on them, the story is about banging your brothers wife, progress that instead of pointless scenes.