VN Ren'Py My Bully Is My Lover [Ch.1 Ep.4 - CV] [NiiChan]

[NiiChan]

That's a shame because Naomi is one of my favorite characters, only behind Gwen and Moon.

Welp... It's never gonna happen anyway. We've established more than enough to go back. Let's just keep moving forward.

 

[TigerWolfe]

Apparently, trying to improve anything is now considered a crime. Self-betterment officially joined the list of things people can't stand.

-looks at country of residence- we're probably not far off honestly.

 

[Stardust435]

Please don't drop this. And is story changing now? Please dev. Please don't remove the love interests.

 

[Reniere]

Plummer chick getting the boot ?

 

[Ozzfest]

IF I could do the game all over again, from scratch, a lot would change, especially how I set things up during the premise. Everyone will no longer stay with you in the same house, only Klara and Sky (I'd still keep the childhood friend and guardian thing because that's the most essential part of the main story).

Aine will come looking for you herself through Emma. She'll try to make peace with you, and we'll take things slow from there. Instead of entirely moving on from the past, she'll redeem herself through your character dynamics and such.

Emma and Gwen will come follow in the middle of it.

Introducing Moon and Freya to the story later on.

Chapter 1 - Episode 1 will be moved to Prologue.

After that, I'm satisfied with what happens further into the game.

Remove Lily and Naomi from the story. They were unnecessary characters added on impulse.

This is a fantastic perspective. It makes me wonder, with this clearer vision in mind now, what was the main thing that prevented you from starting with this tighter structure? Was it the initial scope of the project, or did the core relationships simply reveal themselves to be stronger than you initially expected as you wrote?

 

[Meiri]

Please don't drop this. And is story changing now? Please dev. Please don't remove the love interests.

Did you guys even read what he said? He's not removing anyone.

 

[1tomadeira]

Regardless, Lily and Sky are side dishes; don't expect too much.

On my heart they aren't. Klara and Sky specially are some of my favorites.

 

[Reniere]

I'm a dumbass didnt see Niichan said "Sarcasm" so we good

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

I was adding to your sarcasm, not trying to hit back.

Fair enough lol.
Well for what it's worth I do actually think the way you did it is better just from my opinion.
Naomi and Lily despite not really fitting in the best have a kind of important role of just being regular people. Keeps the rest of the cast more grounded to have connections outside of the whole international assassin and human modification ring the core cast is caught up in.
As for the cohabitation it really adds to the close knit family vibe you've got going with the harem. We'd have also missed a lot of good slice of life scenes without it.

 

[DarkOs31]

Apparently, trying to improve anything is now considered a crime. Self-betterment officially joined the list of things people can't stand.

Like someone posted before,it's YOUR game,YOUR vision where YOUR game should going to!
What's the point in making a game you don't have any feelings for?
I know many devs who are on Patreon and are influenced and to some point bound by their patrons.
I don't know you,but i loved Sicae and MBimL,and i just wish you make your games like you envisioned them .
If my link from city devil restart offended you,i'm sorry.Really!It was just a joke.
This game (C.D.R.) just shows how far you can stretch the limits of HS games and maybe it motivates you
Also another game like yours (Ripple) made a big step lately,(Eternum) is on the right track too,so i just wish your games will go in a direction you love!
cheers