Horny Toad

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Nope. Spaniard here. My proofreaders wouldn't agree about the perfectness of my English :ROFLMAO: . 238 corrections in the last update (over 29,123 words).
But your messages here and your Patreon posts and basically everything I read has been great, wouldn't think your first language wasn't English. And I would assume it's improved since you would look at the corrections on proofreading. Put's my English to shame plenty of times, and it's the only language I know nowadays. Learnt and forgot Hebrew before the age of 14, and French was done after grade 9 (only successfully order un pain au chocolat at a bakery at a French ski resort).

Just saying, your English is probably better than most English speakers.
 

Horny Toad

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Obviously, the comparison with The Witcher 3 was made as a joke. They can't compare. My Dorm is better. :ROFLMAO:
Even if I love Triss and Yen, The Witcher doesn't have a Martha, a Norah, or an Erika. ;)
Talking seriously, I wouldn't pay the same price for My Dorm that I paid for The Witcher if I were the average Steam player. Not because of the quality or quantity of the content each provides in their genre, but because I knew The Witcher was developed by a serious studio and not a guy in his parent's basement who I never heard anything about. I would be more inclined to trust the big studio than the small developer. And I heard about The Witcher years before its release, while my reaction to My Dorm would be, "What's this Steam is recommending me?".
Again I'm catching up, but I think what makes My Dorm better than Witcher 3 is that the threesomes (or manysomes) end up successful for the MC whereas it blows up in Geralt's face (game is in my backlog, my son is happy that I've gone back to GTA V just now).
 
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johnpouljones

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Again I'm catching up, but I think what makes My Dorm better than Witcher 3 is that the threesomes (or manysomes) end up successful for the MC whereas it blows up in Geralt's face (game is in my backlog, my son is happy that I've gone back to GTA V just now).
I've never played GTA. I have never played Witcher either. I didn't watch the series either. Nothing will pierce books. So I have no comparison. However, I think My Dorm is one of a kind. AVN is a completely separate type of entertainment and My Dorm is undoubtedly on top.
 
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Trope95

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Special render 53 - Meemaw - Free edition
Continuing with the Girls with Guns topic, we are traveling to the future this time.
While doing an interstellar trip to the annual Galactic Interspecies Leisure Foundation (GILF) shareholders meeting, Meemaw is kidnapped by a sushi lover alien race to be used as a human tray (they heard of nyotaimori).
The poor guys didn't know Meemaw was trained by Eva a lot of centuries ago.
Enjoy the Full HD render (4K for subscribers).
The update arrives at Emma's tier tomorrow!
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Special render 53 - Meemaw - Free edition
Continuing with the Girls with Guns topic, we are traveling to the future this time.
While doing an interstellar trip to the annual Galactic Interspecies Leisure Foundation (GILF) shareholders meeting, Meemaw is kidnapped by a sushi lover alien race to be used as a human tray (they heard of nyotaimori).
The poor guys didn't know Meemaw was trained by Eva a lot of centuries ago.
Enjoy the Full HD render (4K for subscribers).
The update arrives at Emma's tier tomorrow!
View attachment 4737196
I like the dish that is on the table. Although I don't know who it is. :LOL:
 
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Trope95

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I like the dish that is on the table. Although I don't know who it is. :LOL:
It's not a girl from My Dorm. She's a standard model with an alien-ish texture (can be seen in her hands).
The idea of putting her there is that she's another kidnapped lady to be used as a sushi tray.
 

xapican

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Of course, my situation is a bit unfortunate that your VN is originally in Spanish and has already been translated into English, and then I create another translation based on it. This does not detract from the quality of your VN!
Do not fret, the English is quite acurate and it can be translated into German.
I had to switch to spanish only 2 times to get the implyed meaning, in 3 seasons.
but it was only because Tropes Spanish differs slightly from mine using certain times, even when I am in neutral spanish.
 
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Do not fret, the English is quite acurate and it can be translated into German.
I had to switch to spanish only 2 times to get the implyed meaning, in 3 seasons.
but it was only because Tropes Spanish differs slightly from mine using certain times, even when I am in neutral spanish.
Yeah, that's always the fun part. Trying to get what Trop is trying to get across but have it in English. Somethings just don't translate well.
 
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