VN Ren'Py Abandoned My First Time [v3.0] [ItalianLover3D]

[skiccione]

How much "zozza" (nasty)?

More than enough for one "side" charachter (as I supposed she was after playing the 1st ep)...imho she will appear again in the game for sure (maybe also in even dirtier scenes but she already make dirty things and talking in this ep)...that's what I figured out after playing the second episode.

 

[ThunderRob]

forgotten i had tried v1 because i didnt see the Vespa..lol..so trying it again hoping it improved..and..wow..the MC is ALL the douche..i mean..no REAL man would ever think immediately "who is that whore" only douches who ya wanna punch in the face are like that..so immersion into being the MC is killed fast as he is just a little piece of shit...no wonder he is an 18 yr old virgin..no woman short of drugged would go near that twat.
that was..bad..the dames are nice..the rest..walks away from this....

 

[snarrff]

is it just me or does it seem like the creator is 16 and has no clue how to interact with women? calling the women in the game bitches? and the story is very lacking with no real direction. this one is going to have to go on my pass list.

 

[Tatittyana Withebutt81]

forgotten i had tried v1 because i didnt see the Vespa..lol..so trying it again hoping it improved..and..wow..the MC is ALL the douche..i mean..no REAL man would ever think immediately "who is that whore" only douches who ya wanna punch in the face are like that..so immersion into being the MC is killed fast as he is just a little piece of shit...no wonder he is an 18 yr old virgin..no woman short of drugged would go near that twat.
that was..bad..the dames are nice..the rest..walks away from this....

That bad eh???.......A pass then~~~~~~

 

[Xyzzy]

Wait.... "boarding college"?? Don't pretty much all colleges offer board of some sort to their student population?

 

[ScottyLQ]

How's the English in this?

 

[Papy.ion6984]

TY for this update

 

[Ursus4321]

I think is nice. simple but nice. The mc is really inmature (very very) but I hope advance with the time. The girls are hot. The story is a little indredible. University only for girls where a lot of them (the principal the first) are looking forward to having a man nearby. But is starting. I´ll see in futures updates

 

[Mytez]

the MC is ALL the douche..i mean..no REAL man would ever think immediately "who is that whore"

calling the women in the game bitches?

I was thinking of trying it because I don't have anything better to do, but seeing this... I think I'll pass. That shit usually pisses me off, even more if he's talking about his relatives (dunno if it's the case here), so thanks for the mini review, Rob and snarrff.

I hope it improves.

 

[ThunderRob]

I was thinking of trying it because I don't have anything better to do, but seeing this... I think I'll pass. That shit usually pisses me off, even more if he's talking about his relatives (dunno if it's the case here), so thanks for the mini review, Rob and snarrff.

I hope it improves.

basically anything remotely female he goes ALL the misogynist ..to the extreme..its quite distasteful to anyone who has even an ounce of respect..lol

 

[BitterFrost]

Yeah, either the maker of the game is an incel, or he's made the character in the game one. Considering the character is a virgin, I guess it could be both. All his classmates are "sluts", and on first meeting a girl in the school, he calls her "whore" in his head. It's everyone's fault but his that he hasn't gotten laid, and the character has zero respect for women. It's a nasty tone to the whole thing and it's enough to make me write this one off.

 

[Chris Greenway]

what is it with scene with his mom and dildo talking about wanting his dick in both holes if there is not going to be any incest makes no sense

 

[Deleted member 997153]

I think we've found the new "The Room" of porn games. This is a singular achievement that will be difficult for anyone to surpass. It was a pleasure leaving a review for this game. Congratulations!

 

[ThunderRob]

I think we've found the new "The Room" of porn games. This is a singular achievement that will be difficult for anyone to surpass. It was a pleasure leaving a review for this game. Congratulations!

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umm..The Room didnt make me feel nauseous and wanting to punch someone afterwards

 

[Deleted member 997153]

umm..The Room didnt make me feel nauseous and wanting to punch someone afterwards

I feel you, but it's just soooo bad that I can't take it seriously. This is how my cousin and I would talk about girls... when we were 10. I'm not convinced that this game isn't someone performing a masterful troll

 

[Deleted member 997153]

umm..The Room didnt make me feel nauseous and wanting to punch someone afterwards

What about after the first sex scene when we're subjected to Tommy's belly button fucking? That would describe my reaction to a T!

 

[oidex]

I can't shake the feeling that the dev is active in the PUA scene

 

[italianlover3d]

Hi folks, thank you for your opinion.

As you might know this is our first game, therefore attempts & errors are normal for us.

This remind us a Jeff Bezos' letter to his shareholders of some years ago... if there is one thing in which we are skilled, well these are the failures!

We'll keep in mind some tips; @Ursus4321 looks like you're the only one who's figured it out: we're starting, it's our first time.

Give us time to try and try again, fail and fail, sooner or later we're sure that something good will come out from this game.

Stay tuned!
Cheers,
ItalianLover3D

 

[skiccione]

Hi, I'm your supporter on Patreon and I hope that 3rd ep will be ready soon .
In one side I "undestand" some criticism but in the other I also understand that's not simple to express our Italian linguistic nuances, slang, dialectal forms in English...sorry but we've lot of words that's not possible to translate in English. Maybe I suggest to change some "strong" expressions with something more "soft" .
I understood that in general judjment are based on expressions of MC and not about the story/graphic/game itself.
@Ursus4321 is not a University for girls...but a female Boading College...and as I have read here the "problem" was about italian "collegio" litterally translated "college" (that's correct for the Italian/English dictionary) but for who's not Italian was impossible to understand and the DEV changed with "Boarding College"...that's not a University.

 

[HorizonD]

Maybe I suggest to change some "strong" expressions with something more "soft" .

That's a good idea! Dev should try some normal Italian. Maybe something like "sexy donna" instead of a whore (puttana or what this is called )

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is a good translator. Might not be perfect but could be of help.