Ah, thank you sir. At least one Dev who sticks to his "gameplan". Whish you the best! The game and especially the graphics look really promising.
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I was gonna praise the dev on the pretty new renders but after reading that stupid shit on the front page, I have nothing but contempt. I absolutely despise censorship and cannot for the life of me understand how people think it's a good idea.
Anyway will the wedding be the "end" of the game or will you get married and have kids. Maybe in a flashback? flashfront? Or is this too soon? What I'm saying is I would like to see Ha-young with a baby bump.
Anyway will the wedding be the "end" of the game or will you get married and have kids. Maybe in a flashback? flashfront? Or is this too soon? What I'm saying is I would like to see Ha-young with a baby bump.
- Jun 23, 2019
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One of the time travel shows 2 days after the wedding. Can't spoil more yet.I was gonna praise the dev on the pretty new renders but after reading that stupid shit on the front page, I have nothing but contempt. I absolutely despise censorship and cannot for the life of me understand how people think it's a good idea.
Anyway will the wedding be the "end" of the game or will you get married and have kids. Maybe in a flashback? flashfront? Or is this too soon? What I'm saying is I would like to see Ha-young with a baby bump.
Just played it for the first time.
My thoughts
1)The game is harsly rated atm. Game is far better than its current 2.5/5 rating.
2)Models are great. Renders are good. Can get better in time. Animations are needed.
3)Game has a solid stucture. Its bugless. No engrish or major spelling mistakes.
4) The initilal posts disclaimer-thread rules about the nature of ntr in the game is total bs.
People have their own understanding about the nature of ntr content, and regardless dev intentions of how ntr is gonna impemented in his game the general rule is that when you play a game from a vanilla fan pov you wonna fuck all the fcs and not watch them get fucked by random dudes.
5) Mc is a third wheel atm. Main Duties are saying goodnights and pussy escorting or guarding.Even when by players options he is polite, protective and respectfull (friendzone material) he isnt even at a friendzone status. Fcs arange their schedule on their own or even togegther with the openly creepy side mcs, he always gets noted afterwards.
6) Due to extreme differencies between the nature of vanilla and ntr content, mcs options range also to the extreme.
Either prude or total perv. Its problematic. Intermidiate options between total perv (destined to get cucked from the other pervs) or total prude (destined to be a dick repelant for the fcs) should be available to the player. Friendly responces or flirty ones.
7) The 30sec ahead mcs time travelling isnt implemented at all atm. For ex. if i knew 30sec before that a random dush is gonna aproach my li cause she is alone, i would jump right next to her.
Already following this and waiting next updates to see how dev is gonna handle the obvious difficulties of combining 2 totally different natures of content into one.
My thoughts
1)The game is harsly rated atm. Game is far better than its current 2.5/5 rating.
2)Models are great. Renders are good. Can get better in time. Animations are needed.
3)Game has a solid stucture. Its bugless. No engrish or major spelling mistakes.
4) The initilal posts disclaimer-thread rules about the nature of ntr in the game is total bs.
People have their own understanding about the nature of ntr content, and regardless dev intentions of how ntr is gonna impemented in his game the general rule is that when you play a game from a vanilla fan pov you wonna fuck all the fcs and not watch them get fucked by random dudes.
5) Mc is a third wheel atm. Main Duties are saying goodnights and pussy escorting or guarding.Even when by players options he is polite, protective and respectfull (friendzone material) he isnt even at a friendzone status. Fcs arange their schedule on their own or even togegther with the openly creepy side mcs, he always gets noted afterwards.
6) Due to extreme differencies between the nature of vanilla and ntr content, mcs options range also to the extreme.
Either prude or total perv. Its problematic. Intermidiate options between total perv (destined to get cucked from the other pervs) or total prude (destined to be a dick repelant for the fcs) should be available to the player. Friendly responces or flirty ones.
7) The 30sec ahead mcs time travelling isnt implemented at all atm. For ex. if i knew 30sec before that a random dush is gonna aproach my li cause she is alone, i would jump right next to her.
Already following this and waiting next updates to see how dev is gonna handle the obvious difficulties of combining 2 totally different natures of content into one.
- Jun 23, 2019
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Animation will be added when there are touching, caressing, sucking... scenes.
The MC hasn't shown his face because it's not the time yet since he has a...
Important choices will only appear in future updates. At the moment, only the choice to open the curtain or not has a big impact.
For other problems: most of them I don't understand because my English is super bad. It was re-checked by my friends and my patrons.
- Aug 11, 2017
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Always nice to see NTR having the spotlight it deserves.
1) , 2), 3) are positive points about your game.
4) ntr disclaimer wasnt needed.
5), 6) same problem
ex.Hui Bing has a scene that her boob or nipple is exposed
You give players 2 options
a. Take a better look ----> perv like an idiot (and dont note her, or speak about it)
b. Pretend i didnt see -----> prude uninterested idiot
dudes that will fuck a girl in real life situations
c. Hui fix your top. You are exposed ------> confident friendly responce
d. Hui nice boob. But cover it cause i see you already getting cold -------> confident flirty responce
Your game has two natures. Vanilla and ntr.
Dont give players only 2 options when questioned in game. One being an idiot perv -----> ntr content -------> other idiot pervs fuck the girls.
Other being an idiot third wheel -----> vanilla content ------> continue being the third wheel while constantly struggle to avoid getting cucked.
- Jan 18, 2018
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Thread rules? What is this shit?
I'm more triggered by that than the NTR content.
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What is wrong with a 2.5/5? Its average. That is a lot for a game without any lewd content (some nudes are no lewd content. I can see more in daily TV here ... naked ppl on an island uncensored ^^).
The characters are plain and have no personality. They are 1 dimensional. The korean girl is shy and the chinese girl has self-doubt and wonders why no one's checking her out. The redhead is the class slut I guess.
And there are sime minor errors. I helped Hui-Boo (or smth like that the korean girl) in the gym and touched her - but later the girls talk like the gym owner touched them both.
Currently it is solid. That is more than a lot of other games can say about them self ^^
So what has been the standard time between updates? I know the dev does this in his spare time, just trying to gauge how he works. No judgement or criticism. This game looks great, and I love being able to play multiple routes.
English is a bit of a problem, but it seems pretty interesting. It surely isn't a game for people who like a confident MC that can seduce girls. The dude is the biggest whiteknight pushover lol. It's still early so there is room for MC to grow I guess.
I don't think this game is for wish fulfilment players or strict NTR lovers. This game is for people who can enjoy or at least tolerate "NTR". Best to be enjoyed with a mix of routes so to speak. The future is always changing based on your actions. You might see the future where she is banging the other dude, but later it might change to be your GF, etc. It has some resemblance to Butterfly Effect.
I can tell already if you turn off NTR and just pick all the beta polite responses, the game will be very boring.
I don't think this game is for wish fulfilment players or strict NTR lovers. This game is for people who can enjoy or at least tolerate "NTR". Best to be enjoyed with a mix of routes so to speak. The future is always changing based on your actions. You might see the future where she is banging the other dude, but later it might change to be your GF, etc. It has some resemblance to Butterfly Effect.
I can tell already if you turn off NTR and just pick all the beta polite responses, the game will be very boring.
- Nov 10, 2017
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First of all, I don't defend any side, I analyze the story by itself and I already read the yellow warning, so I'll call the paths of "Good Ending" and "Bad Ending".
Second and at last, Insane Erotica, my suggestions are just tips and its goal is help at the game's improvement. You decide what you want to do with your game.
The renders, you're using, has a good side and a bad side. The art design is beautiful(places and models), but it has a fatal flaw: The facial expressions are almost null and this breaks the immersion easily, mainly when the text doesn't match them.
So, I suggest you make the character reacts more(happy, angry, doubt, sad, etc) and delivers the intensity necessary the scene demands.
About the story, the premise about the time is really good, the time travel use is very simple and the exploration of its potential is low, but it's too early to judge anything about that. If the MC can travel 30 secs ahead, you can use this element to make him save some girl in the story or he can learn to control his "gift" better, you can rich your script if you use wisely.
The gameplay is ok for me, it's simple and direct at its objective, and the hot scenes fit with the story very well, you can balance them in both routes and make both of them attractive to the reader/player, but I have a warning for you: You can't please everyone.
The game needs improvements (mainly at the facial expression) and I know it's in early development. I'll wait for more four updates and play again to analyze better the story.
Second and at last, Insane Erotica, my suggestions are just tips and its goal is help at the game's improvement. You decide what you want to do with your game.
The renders, you're using, has a good side and a bad side. The art design is beautiful(places and models), but it has a fatal flaw: The facial expressions are almost null and this breaks the immersion easily, mainly when the text doesn't match them.
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About the story, the premise about the time is really good, the time travel use is very simple and the exploration of its potential is low, but it's too early to judge anything about that. If the MC can travel 30 secs ahead, you can use this element to make him save some girl in the story or he can learn to control his "gift" better, you can rich your script if you use wisely.
The gameplay is ok for me, it's simple and direct at its objective, and the hot scenes fit with the story very well, you can balance them in both routes and make both of them attractive to the reader/player, but I have a warning for you: You can't please everyone.
The game needs improvements (mainly at the facial expression) and I know it's in early development. I'll wait for more four updates and play again to analyze better the story.
Hmm I got to thinking a bit about the time travel aspects. I am a bit of a sci fi weeb you see. Am I correct in assuming that you are traveling to alternate timelines here? It's definitely not just a premonition, because you can control your actions in the future. It also doesn't seem like a fixed timeline where everything that happened and will happen is set it stone. So I am just assuming this time travel is using infinite timelines angle.
So now I get into the inconsistencies. Seeing the future is inherently a paradox when it comes to multiverse/multiple timelines universe. If we consider the Butterfly Effect and any small action can produce a rippling effect into the far future, there is no way to know what future you will get at any one time. For example, if you stare at Ha Young's boobs, you see the future where she gets banged by some producer. But that future is 7 years down the line. What if you choose to support her later and turn her away from that path? Why were you shown that scene with the producer? Sure, its a possible future when perving on her, but its a multiverse and there are infinite amounts of scenarios that can pan out based on your actions from that point onwards. Since the future isn't set it stone, its almost entirely meaningless as a source of information.
Now if my first assumption is wrong and we are actually in a fixed timeline, things can get VERY interesting. Fixed timelines make the best time travel stories because there is internal logic and consistency. It's quite hard to write though.
So now I get into the inconsistencies. Seeing the future is inherently a paradox when it comes to multiverse/multiple timelines universe. If we consider the Butterfly Effect and any small action can produce a rippling effect into the far future, there is no way to know what future you will get at any one time. For example, if you stare at Ha Young's boobs, you see the future where she gets banged by some producer. But that future is 7 years down the line. What if you choose to support her later and turn her away from that path? Why were you shown that scene with the producer? Sure, its a possible future when perving on her, but its a multiverse and there are infinite amounts of scenarios that can pan out based on your actions from that point onwards. Since the future isn't set it stone, its almost entirely meaningless as a source of information.
Now if my first assumption is wrong and we are actually in a fixed timeline, things can get VERY interesting. Fixed timelines make the best time travel stories because there is internal logic and consistency. It's quite hard to write though
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