- May 19, 2018
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wouldDude, she looks like a 60years old persona on facebook, sharing a photo made with AI to look younger... like this type of thing if u know what i mean. View attachment 4000614
wouldDude, she looks like a 60years old persona on facebook, sharing a photo made with AI to look younger... like this type of thing if u know what i mean. View attachment 4000614
You have to restart and play from scratchsince 2 updates I don´t have any progress, whats wrong?
Even if you tell her no you like her the other way, she just does her own thing. You have no choice, just an illusion of choice. You tell her no she should go change back, she's supposed to love you right?maybe its just personal bias but i think bella looks a lot better as a brunette. i have a small concern that its just the start of bimbo story, nothing wrong with the but just not my thing. anyways just my 2 cents
Even if you tell her no you like her the other way, she just does her own thing. You have no choice, just an illusion of choice. You tell her no she should go change back, she's supposed to love you right?maybe its just personal bias but i think bella looks a lot better as a brunette. i have a small concern that its just the start of bimbo story, nothing wrong with the but just not my thing. anyways just my 2 cents
There is none, it's all cheating and cucking. Might as well have no choices.So this has the NTR tag, and hotwifing in the title. Which one is it? They are pretty much polar opposites.
Edit: Reading the thread, I've not seen any indication any hotwifing is going on.
completely agree. i was just playing thinking "i've never licked her used pussy after her adventures and here she is telling Martin that i love to do it." i don't know how to make these "games" so i feel bad using phrases like "lazy writing" but this is just that. lazy. the dev obviously seems to want the story to go a predetermined way and your choices don't matter.Even if you tell her no you like her the other way, she just does her own thing. You have no choice, just an illusion of choice. You tell her no she should go change back, she's supposed to love you right?
My opinion/thoughts:
This isn't about becoming a hotwife, this is more about being a cuck. She stops fucking him (cuck) she starts humiliating him even if you chose for her not to unless making videos.
She starts cheating on him, with the massage dude, and then with the dude who contacts them and drives her around.
She cheats on him with the guy in the band...
She goes from fucking Henry to fucking multiple guys like a duck to water. No hesitation on her part.
She goes off with the band member and you say 'Wait for me.' and she doesn't she just goes back there and fucks him (cheating).
She doesn't ask permission or see if you agree and it's ok for her to do it.
A hotwife would make sure you were ok with who she was fucking and asking if it was ok or how far she could go. She's also be fucking you and not telling you you can't anymore. She'd be coming home and telling you about how her 'date' went while fucking your brains out.
No option to avoid the cage, what really?
Nothing you do changes anything, you tell her no I don't think that's a good idea she does it anyway. You tell her not to kiss henry and she does it anyway.
I was interested in this until I saw that there weren't really any choices, they were fake options and you still turn into a cuck.
Even when you do thing to disappoint her nothing comes of it, she just continues on her way.
So the description is misleading, the story is all about her turning you into a cuck and cheating on you behind your back.
The way the description reads there's two paths, hotwife and cuck, well if that's true you need to go back and rework your story because there is only the cuck path. It looks like you have spots to keep her on the hotwife with choices, but they all still just lead to the cuck part, like you completely for got the other path.
This isn't "My Hotwife', this is more 'How to become a cuck'.
So interested in this until I realized it was all about cucking.
It's a KN, why even have choices.
They're VNs, I hear that excuse so much.completely agree. i was just playing thinking "i've never licked her used pussy after her adventures and here she is telling Martin that i love to do it." i don't know how to make these "games" so i feel bad using phrases like "lazy writing" but this is just that. lazy. the dev obviously seems to want the story to go a predetermined way and your choices don't matter.
First of all, holly molly you write a fuck ton.They're VNs, I hear that excuse so much.
When you comment on how a story doesn't make sense or there's holes in the plot. You get it's just a VN reply.
Well great, it's a VN, that still doesn't excuse poor writing. If you don't tell people their writing is poor or lazy then they never learn.
Tons of VNs on this site, only a handful actually have good to great writing.
There is no reason not to improve yourself if you're going to write.
This story claims, hotwife and cuckold, but there is only one path. We have the start of a hotwife path in the beginning but the Dev seems to just drop this in favor of cheating and cuck.
You're forced to not have sex with her even when she asks for it, makes no sense.
You're forced to no follow her even if you say wait up when she's at the band's house and she cheats on you.
She goes from not wanting to do it to gangbang city in no time flat.
It goes from let's make videos to let's see how many people I can fuck and how many I can cheat on you with. All of which has nothing with them making money to pay their bills, I'd been more impressed if the husband would have been recording it.
The wife goes from, I dunno, to hold on honey I'm practicing blowing him even though we're not filming first thing in the morning. You get two replies, and they do not matter. You reply 'What he hell!' (I think that was it, something like that anyway) and she just keeps slurping like nothings wrong.
So she is A. cheating on you at the moment by going behind your back and blowing him and B. cucking you by continuing after you say WTF, like it doesn't matter. So we go from, let's make movies to let me fuck and blow who I want and you get no sex at all.
Just like when the delivery guy shows up and she goes to blow him and you can reply 'I don't think that's a good idea.' and she does it anyway. Then you ask her to blow you and she says no because you can't have sex with her. That is like the third maybe fourth encounter and she's already cucking you and not having sex with you.
None of the choices in this game make any difference in the story, this is a KN in the guise of a VN with choices that don't matter.
It's like the Dev forgot to connect the negative choices to keep the wife on the hotwife path.
It's a train wreck of epic proportions.
This Dev needs to go back and change the description as to not lure in people expecting hotwife content, and the name of the VN should be changed to reflect there is no hotwife content.
The Dev could on the other hand actually take the time to fix it so it has both content available.
It's like seeing a tag that says BDSM, and the story has no BDSM in it.
Yeah I agree with that.Come on guys.... She is not that bad ... I kinda like that she is drawn in a normal lady way.... I am not sure about the blonde hair though ??
Sorry, it's the author/editor in me.First of all, holly molly you write a fuck ton.
Second of all, I don't think he is going to change and improve on a whim. This is his first game, the guy probably not very experienced in developing a game, nor writing a game and honestly with how long this is already in development I do not think he will add the things you are asking him to add in the game.
Nah it's fine. I like it a lot, it's pretty good constructive criticism, but I really doubt he is going to take it and improve it as much as you wanted.Sorry, it's the author/editor in me.
Yup that's exactly what the issues are . See , it's fine if that how dev wants the game . Your game , your themes , your choice , and it's up to the audience to accept it or move on . However , the illusion and the way you're mislead via the initial premise is plain wrong . Don't pretend the husband got a word in , if he does not . The game just goes straight from her doing stuff with the MC's own initiative , and giving consent , to her unilaterally deciding that the MC should no longer be involved , and got no say . And then you got the whole "humiliation option" , when all choices lead to shades of humiliation .Even if you tell her no you like her the other way, she just does her own thing. You have no choice, just an illusion of choice. You tell her no she should go change back, she's supposed to love you right?
My opinion/thoughts:
This isn't about becoming a hotwife, this is more about being a cuck. She stops fucking him (cuck) she starts humiliating him even if you chose for her not to unless making videos.
She starts cheating on him, with the massage dude, and then with the dude who contacts them and drives her around.
She cheats on him with the guy in the band...
She goes from fucking Henry to fucking multiple guys like a duck to water. No hesitation on her part.
She goes off with the band member and you say 'Wait for me.' and she doesn't she just goes back there and fucks him (cheating).
She doesn't ask permission or see if you agree and it's ok for her to do it.
A hotwife would make sure you were ok with who she was fucking and asking if it was ok or how far she could go. She's also be fucking you and not telling you you can't anymore. She'd be coming home and telling you about how her 'date' went while fucking your brains out.
No option to avoid the cage, what really?
Nothing you do changes anything, you tell her no I don't think that's a good idea she does it anyway. You tell her not to kiss henry and she does it anyway.
I was interested in this until I saw that there weren't really any choices, they were fake options and you still turn into a cuck.
Even when you do thing to disappoint her nothing comes of it, she just continues on her way.
So the description is misleading, the story is all about her turning you into a cuck and cheating on you behind your back.
The way the description reads there's two paths, hotwife and cuck, well if that's true you need to go back and rework your story because there is only the cuck path. It looks like you have spots to keep her on the hotwife with choices, but they all still just lead to the cuck part, like you completely for got the other path.
This isn't "My Hotwife', this is more 'How to become a cuck'.
So interested in this until I realized it was all about cucking.
It's a KN, why even have choices.
Also this isnt "My hotwife" cuz she ugly asf ))))Even if you tell her no you like her the other way, she just does her own thing. You have no choice, just an illusion of choice. You tell her no she should go change back, she's supposed to love you right?
My opinion/thoughts:
This isn't about becoming a hotwife, this is more about being a cuck. She stops fucking him (cuck) she starts humiliating him even if you chose for her not to unless making videos.
She starts cheating on him, with the massage dude, and then with the dude who contacts them and drives her around.
She cheats on him with the guy in the band...
She goes from fucking Henry to fucking multiple guys like a duck to water. No hesitation on her part.
She goes off with the band member and you say 'Wait for me.' and she doesn't she just goes back there and fucks him (cheating).
She doesn't ask permission or see if you agree and it's ok for her to do it.
A hotwife would make sure you were ok with who she was fucking and asking if it was ok or how far she could go. She's also be fucking you and not telling you you can't anymore. She'd be coming home and telling you about how her 'date' went while fucking your brains out.
No option to avoid the cage, what really?
Nothing you do changes anything, you tell her no I don't think that's a good idea she does it anyway. You tell her not to kiss henry and she does it anyway.
I was interested in this until I saw that there weren't really any choices, they were fake options and you still turn into a cuck.
Even when you do thing to disappoint her nothing comes of it, she just continues on her way.
So the description is misleading, the story is all about her turning you into a cuck and cheating on you behind your back.
The way the description reads there's two paths, hotwife and cuck, well if that's true you need to go back and rework your story because there is only the cuck path. It looks like you have spots to keep her on the hotwife with choices, but they all still just lead to the cuck part, like you completely for got the other path.
This isn't "My Hotwife', this is more 'How to become a cuck'.
So interested in this until I realized it was all about cucking.
It's a KN, why even have choices.