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Her son finds out—Vivian begs(?) him not to tell his father. This knowledge will kill him.
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It's not Sawyer. It's Hutch in the evening when he returns home after being M.i.A.!

Overall really goos approach!

I think the new pic are of Hutch at high end gentleman club. Hence the shirt and tie and general good dress. Notice also there is 2 glasses on the table . THe second pic he is looking off to the side a someone ?? Also the type of seat changed... Maybe he is getting a private dance.
At the nudie bar, welcome to the No Ma'am club...:ROFLMAO:
 

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I think, going forward, each update will be about 3 days or so.

Like, with the 0.2 version, there were 6 days, and if we split it in half, then it makes it 3 days per 0.1. Oh, and looking at the clothes she wears in the previews, it does seem like events span about 3 days.

So, I'm pretty confident that coming updates will mostly go with 3 days of content. And, I think that's a good approach to telling a story, rather than the AWAM .001 upates that only contain a scene or two, within the days that guy has planned out with that game.

I do look forward to seeing what 0.3 has to tell.
 

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what a game fellas! congrats to this dev for delivering such a great game with good story and scenes

just wish we could see the first sex scene properly. I wanted the convo and proper sex scene in the garden, thats just my complain but i liked it a lot
 

TonyMurray

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I hope it doesn't go too far. There is only so much she can do before it becomes irrelevant and too indifferent. Sure the sex scenes might be hot, but story wise it would get bland. The thing that sticks out more in this story is the focus on the betrayed husband. That is something new and different. I'd rather see how he behaves and handles it, rather than non stop whore action by Vivian. Her actions should be used in context for us to see the reaction in Hutch.
I agree here for the most part. One thing that may be worth factoring in is Hutch's mood. He's not even touching Vivian most of the time - pulling his hand away when she tries to hold it, basically ignoring her in all the bedroom scenes, etc. If anything happens with some of the other characters we've met so far, like the mechanic, I wonder if it will be out of frustration born from Hutch ignoring her. Since she's opened the gates, and Hutch has opened the marriage (even though I don't think he meant it this way, I think he might have thought it was for Christian only), she could take the opportunity to relieve that frustration elsewhere - since she keeps getting the subtle (or not so subtle) offers...
What Happens Next – A Tale of Downfall

1. The BBQ


Chris organizes a barbecue and invites some important guests (the Mayor?). He also invites Butch and Vivian.

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Of course, during the event, he fuckin Vivian, which makes Butch furious (calling)
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An important shot—when they come out of the room holding hands after having sex.

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2.The Restaurant

Chris invites Vivian to a restaurant for a date—a business meeting. Vivian thinks she’s going on a date, but… it turns into a business meeting. Chris picks out a truly slutty dress for her.
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I think later, the Mayor joins them at the table, and Chris wants to use Vivian to make a deal—or just explains to her that tomorrow she has to go to the Mayor to handle some business.
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The Girl in the Purple Dress

Taking care of business—A driver (different car) picks up Vivian and takes her to the Mayor’s house.
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negotiations preparing
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Vivian starts thinking—What am I doing here? I’m not a whore!!
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She runs away. On the road, a basketball player picks her up—who either figures out what she was doing or already knows. Maybe he even picks her up from the Mayor’s house?
He took her to his house, where she took a bath.
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He drove her home and she begs him not to tell anyone what happened. She lost her velvet choker—maybe she left it at the basketboy house.

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However, the basketboy wants more—he blackmails her (velvet choker?)
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and gets what he wanted.
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Her son finds out—Vivian begs(?) him not to tell his father. This knowledge will kill him.
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Unfortunately… the snowball has started rolling, and Vivian is deep in black hole that everyone is going to take advantage of…

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didaskalia
If this is a scene with Chris, he explains to her that she has become his slut and will do whatever he tells her to do.
If Mayor/Cigarette Smoking Man, he tells her that he bought her and that she must obey his orders.
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ps. One more important thing—Chris dresses Vivian. It’s a sign, a stamp: "You are mine."
I like this, and think it would fit pretty well actually. As someone else said, I think that's Hutch, not Sawyer, so I don't think that one bit fits in. I'm guessing the render you title "negotiations preparing" is from the same scene as Cigarette Smoking Man (we've gone full X-Files here), it looks like the same background from a different angle - an outside deck with a hottub.
 

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Well, I think this is the correct sequence:

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(1) She arrives for her "date". (2) But, the mayor immediate treats her like some kind of paid-for whore. (3) And, in that middle pic, she's fucked on the table. (4) She has regrets, and slips her dress back on. (5) gets back home (after staying the night at some guy's place as that other guy said), and this is her breaking her promise about returning.

I think that sequence makes sense like that.
 
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LUCIANO2020

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Well, I think this is the correct sequence:

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(1) She arrives for her "date". (2) But, the mayor immediate treats her like some kind of paid-for whore. (3) And, in that middle pic, she's fucked on the table. (4) She has regrets, and slips her dress back on. (5) gets back home (after staying the night at some guy's place as that other guy said), and this is her breaking her promise about returning.

I think that sequence makes sense like that.
In 4 month will know if you were right and much more details about the rest of the story. But your sequence has a very high percenrage of to be right.
 

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In 4 month will know if you were right and much more details about the rest of the story. But your sequence has a very high percenrage of to be right.
Considering what the dev said, probably not, bc these preview pictures are for most of them included in the 3rd release. And i think it's good bc Vivian seems way too comfortable with what's going on. We need something else to happen between these moments of the story.
 
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Considering what the dev said, probably not, bc these preview pictures are for most of them included in the 3rd release. And i think it's good bc Vivian seems way too comfortable with what's going on. We need something else to happen between these moments of the story.
when did the dev mentioned that the pictures from the 3d release are i overlooked that part.
 

TonyMurray

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when did the dev mentioned that the pictures from the 3d release are i overlooked that part.
He mentioned previously that he had a good number of renders already done (I think about half the number that made up the current release), but that most of them were for the third chapter and not the next one that we'll see. The renders shared here could be chapter two renders that he had already, or has made since, or they could be from that third chapter set he mentioned - we don't know where in the story they belong yet.
 

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The VN has great potential, now we need to support this creator and make sure they keep making such high quality content.
 

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The VN has great potential, now we need to support this creator and make sure they keep making such high quality content.
He doesn't want support, not financial support anyway. He does seem to enjoy reading many of the discussions and theories here though from what I've seen. So more of that I guess.
 
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