Hattyrulz

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That's pretty much guaranteed. The ending was the 2nd thing to get outlined. The 1st? It was the backyard scene. As controversial as the whole backyard/bedroom part seems to be, it was/is the foundation I build this world on. I wanted the viewer to live those moments through Hutch, though, hence the teasing.

And I'll just say again, thank you everyone for the praise and support so far. I won't confirm or deny anything story wise. I've got a much bigger response than I anticipated and I'm enjoying reading everyone's theories, critiques, and hopes. I want everyone to have fun with that while we wait for the next update. When will that be? I can't give an answer. This is a hobby, and I do have a day job, so bear with me.
ty for a gutpunch of vn and making one the best vn fmc(my fav). since you stated that you wont be confirming on anything related to the story. i have a few question that run parallel to it.
1. what is your interpretation of the poem by e.a.poe(and to be more specific) the tattoed lines on vivians neck.
2. what type of ntr stories you like? can you be a bit more specific?
3. this story was written by you or was it contracted? if yes to writing then did you write any other stories like this and any way to read them.
4. you said you made a game prior to this...are there any plans to work on that? and will you be sharing it with us?
5. can you name the assets used to create vivian?
 
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you should checkout his other versions of vivian they are as good or better than the pixie cut. but each their own.
I have, and they are all pretty good, but I believe the Dev picked the best version, lol, again probably just my taste speaking, lol

I personally like this version of Vivian, Pixie cut, subtle tattoos, and piercings show she is not old, but not young, just enough to show he age, for the last 15+ years it has been a trend to have multiple body alterations (tats, piercings, ect.) but the way I see her is a woman that got 2 non lobe ear piercings (barbell on the right and inner ear hoop on the left) and 2 tats in areas that were time period staples, probably before she got pregnant, and or kept it simple knowing she was going into teaching, and having body art at the time, it was hard for teachers to get jobs, if they were in areas you can't conceal, and I also think I put way too much thought into this, :ROFLMAO::LOL::ROFLMAO:
 
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What if Hutch is gay? I mean maybe he is with Vivian as a facade to maintain his family? Convinience. I dont want to have gay content here for god sake, but that could explain also his seemly lack of interest in the strip club images, and also his behavior when he proposes Vivian to go with the "project". Who knows?
You serious?! lol
I see Vivian end up with Addison before Hutch would make a move into that direction you're imagining.
Hutch probably suffers a little from stress and cannot process what has happened...but I heard he takes the blue pills in case of start-up problems :ROFLMAO:
 

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I don't know if it has already posted here (in case sorry, I could not find it).

While snooping around in the script, I saw that there is a part of the scene in the office bathroom that has been commented out.
It's when Vivian stops Christian from eating her out to give him a bj.

Here is the part, I put the images and the animation not seen in the game just below the relevant code, a couple of them are missing

# show bs132a1 with Dissolve(.5)
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# hide bsbjpeepani
# w "You like that?"
# scene bs132a2 with Dissolve(.5)

1739138616922.png


# b "Yeah, Baby! You got natural talent!"
# show bs132a3 with Dissolve(.5)

1739138639102.png


# w "What about this?"
# image bs132c: MISSING
# 'images/d06s02 bathroom sex/bs132c1.webp' with Dissolve(1)

1739138688542.png


# pause 1
# 'images/d06s02 bathroom sex/bs132c2.webp' with Dissolve(1)

1739138707009.png


# pause 1
# 'images/d06s02 bathroom sex/bs132c3.webp' with Dissolve(1)

1739138800172.png


# pause 1
# 'images/d06s02 bathroom sex/bs132c4.webp' with Dissolve(1)

1739138809664.png


# pause 1
# repeat
# show bs132c with Dissolve(.5) MISSING
# pause 1
# b "Oh shit... that's the spot!"
# image bs132b:
# 'images/d06s02 bathroom sex/bs132b1.webp' with Dissolve(1)

1739138850929.png


# pause 1
# 'images/d06s02 bathroom sex/bs132b2.webp' with Dissolve(1)

1739138860984.png


# pause 1
# 'images/d06s02 bathroom sex/bs132b3.webp' with Dissolve(1)

1739138869651.png


# pause 1
# 'images/d06s02 bathroom sex/bs132b4.webp' with Dissolve(1)

1739138879788.png


# pause 1
# repeat
# show bs132b with Dissolve(.5). MISSING
# b "You have some serious hidden talent!"
# show bs132d with Dissolve(.5)

1739138945129.png


# w "Did you think I was just an old boring woman with no tricks?"
# scene bs132

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# b "No... you proved yourself back at my house. I know your secret identity of a sex kitten."
# show bsbjcloseupani with Dissolve(.5)
View attachment 4535728

















# pause


In the game, instead, it skips directly to the bj.

This "director's cut" :) shows a more playful side of Vivian and perhaps a different level of complicity between them.
At this point in the story, it's clear that she also enjoys sex with him, as some of the dialogue and actions in this scene in the bathroom show: just before this deleted part, she stops him to willingly give him a blowjob, later she admits that he's good at it, that his cock is hard like "concrete" and she even licks the remains off her finger sua sponte.

I don't know the reason for this cut, maybe it was "too much" or a step too far? Even though it's a tiny detail in a really well-written and compelling story, I tend to agree with the cut because maybe it's too early to explicitly show her active participation (even though it's a pretty hot moment!).
But I would be curious if SC Stories could share his thoughts about this choice. ;)

And in any case, a grand bravo, because it really is a great story, perfectly executed in all its aspects, the quality of the renderings, the quality of the texts and dialogues, the narrative technique with the short "auto-advancing"... Really impressive! (y)(y)
maybe the Dev did not show intentionally, to not showing Vivians as a naughty slut . I mean at this point why hiding that she enjoys Chrstians cock it too obvious . But this definitly show her strong affection for Christian. Is there a way to change from hide to showing again ? i tried to insert the video scene at the right spot but still didnt show in the game . The missings scenes pictures are there but as you said hide.
 

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Now that I think of
maybe the Dev did not show intentionally, to not showing Vivians as a naughty slut . I mean at this point why hiding that she enjoys Chrstians cock it too obvious . But this definitly show her strong affection for Christian. Is there a way to change from hide to showing again ? i tried to insert the video scene at the right spot but still didnt show in the game . The missings scenes pictures are there but as you said hide.
You need to uncomment (remove the # before the code) at the specific lines 913-950 in the script day06!
anyone know if this is a bug or an intentional omission?
Will be fixed in next update!
 
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Awesome game! Probably one of the most well recieved so quickly from what i can remember. Also gotta respect the developers stance on not wanting patreon or anything. Whilst i know people probably just wanna show how much they like it, it also put pressure on them to produce updates etc. They enjoy it as a hobby, and enjoy doing it. You see too many devs become jaded by their own work because of all the pressure from horn dogs :LOL:
 

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I personally like this version of Vivian, Pixie cut, subtle tattoos, and piercings show she is not old, but not young, just enough to show he age, for the last 15+ years it has been a trend to have multiple body alterations (tats, piercings, ect.) but the way I see her is a woman that got 2 non lobe ear piercings (barbell on the right and inner ear hoop on the left) and 2 tats in areas that were time period staples, probably before she got pregnant, and or kept it simple knowing she was going into teaching, and having body art at the time, it was hard for teachers to get jobs, if they were in areas you can't conceal, and I also think I put way too much thought into this, :ROFLMAO::LOL::ROFLMAO:
you have to mention the tstamp the vivian has thats the best one of all and speaks volumes (which we dont know yet) y a 10 is with a 6 in the words of the antagonist.
 

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Let's say this game is set in 2024. They were married 22 years so 2002. She was possibly let's say 21 when they got married. Now that time frame tramp stamps were primarily on well promiscuous women hence tramp stamp. So just a theory she was a hoe. The thing that throwing me off is her education where in that time frame did she finish college to be able to be a teacher.
 

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you have to mention the tstamp the vivian has thats the best one of all and speaks volumes (which we dont know yet) y a 10 is with a 6 in the words of the antagonist.
They've been married 22 years and people change. Maybe 20 years ago, Hutch was an 8 and Vivian was an 8, for instance. Not that that matters, as looks aren't the only thing that go into that particular equation.
The thing that throwing me off is her education where in that time frame did she finish college to be able to be a teacher.
I don't know what there is to have stopped her completing her education. Married women can go to college too (if she wasn't finished with it all before getting married, that is).
 
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They've been married 22 years and people change. Maybe 20 years ago, Hutch was an 8 and Vivian was an 8, for instance. Not that that matters, as looks aren't the only thing that go into that particular equation.

I don't know what there is to have stopped her completing her education. Married women can go to college too (if she wasn't finished with it all before getting married, that is).
I'm a detail oriented dork. Her age and all is she early 40s late 40s how long she was a teacher.
 

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They've been married 22 years and people change. Maybe 20 years ago, Hutch was an 8 and Vivian was an 8, for instance. Not that that matters, as looks aren't the only thing that go into that particular equation.
im just using pgl(porn game logic) but i completely agree with you 2nd part of the statement. not the first half as we can speculate and theorize but at the end of the day the dev only knows or if/when dev posts some gossip materials
 

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The thing that throwing me off is her education where in that time frame did she finish college to be able to be a teacher
Vivian could have gone through teacher's college for 2-3 years as part of her education. She might have also done a graduate degree in Education. I've known people in my professional circle on LinkedIn who have gone through similar career paths and ended up teaching in middle school/high school. She could have finished that in her early-mid 20s and started doing a teaching apprenticeship soon after completing teacher's college.

Just taking a shot in the dark here though. But that could explain the time frame of when she completed her schooling to become a teacher.
 
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Now that I think of

You need to uncomment (remove the # before the code) at the specific lines 913-950 in the script day06!

Will be fixed in next update!
would you send me a copy of the editor corrected so i can just added . i dont see the 906 ffles in my renpy tool i corrected and took the # but it give me a error that i need to correct file 912 but whne i correct ed it keeps showing the error . Thank you
 
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This "director's cut" :) shows a more playful side of Vivian and perhaps a different level of complicity between them.
At this point in the story, it's clear that she also enjoys sex with him, as some of the dialogue and actions in this scene in the bathroom show: just before this deleted part, she stops him to willingly give him a blowjob, later she admits that he's good at it, that his cock is hard like "concrete" and she even licks the remains off her finger sua sponte.

I don't know the reason for this cut, maybe it was "too much" or a step too far? Even though it's a tiny detail in a really well-written and compelling story, I tend to agree with the cut because maybe it's too early to explicitly show her active participation (even though it's a pretty hot moment!).
That's an interesting observation. Definitely would show a different side of Vivian and explore more of her "wild cat" tendencies in how sexually promiscuous she is as a character.

I think the reason for the cut could be simply due to pacing. Mayhaps SC stories thought that it would be too bold of them to portray Vivian as taking the lead so brashly in the scene, which might affect the slow-burn style of narrative that they had wanted to lean on more.

I mean it is good to see this playful side of Vivian, and to see her be more controlling/expressive in the sensual scenes that she develops with Chris, but at the same time, the pacing of the overall narrative build-up and sexual development is also key. So just to balance things out a bit, I can see why this director's cut scene was rescinded in favour of consistent/natural scene progression perhaps :unsure:
 

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I'm a detail oriented dork. Her age and all is she early 40s late 40s how long she was a teacher.
Vivian could have gone through teacher's college for 2-3 years as part of her education. She might have also done a graduate degree in Education. I've known people in my professional circle on LinkedIn who have gone through similar career paths and ended up teaching in middle school/high school. She could have finished that in her early-mid 20s and started doing a teaching apprenticeship soon after completing teacher's college.

Just taking a shot in the dark here though. But that could explain the time frame of when she completed her schooling to become a teacher.
Yeah, you can get pretty young teachers. It's another thing that will be different in different countries, and I don't know the process for it in the US, for instance, but here in the UK, I see teachers in their 20s and 30s pretty regularly. My daughter is about to get a new teacher who has been at another school for 5 years, and before that she did her training at my daughter's school. She (the new teacher, not my daughter :LOL: ) is about 25. My daughter's current teacher is about 40 I think (he's a couple of years younger than me) and he's been a teacher for about 15 years, if I recall correctly. That's probably similar timeframes to Vivian.
 
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