VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[critic specialized in NTR]

nice bro, thanks for the game, but focus on vivian and christian, and fuck hutch =) dont waste time on that cuck

what the fuck are you talking about? Without the husband this game has no weight at all, the whole breakdown of the marriage is what makes this game incredible, if I just wanted to see Vivian and Cristian fucking it would be better to watch a random Milf porn video.

 

[quyxote]

Or is MHB just an exception and choices are always a high priority?

Disregarding the games that are just plain bad, I'll go with this option. The story and narrative you've created is so interesting and immersive, that I don't even care about choices. I just want to enjoy the journey...

 

[ThorMcBalbo]

Project Update

The next 24hrs of game time is done. About 1k images and animations. Most of the preview images already teased will not be in this release. Those will be in the third (v0.6). So a good chunk of that release is, thankfully, already done.

The more I think about it, the more appropriate 20% increments are as they are natural spots in the story to pause on. So next update will be v0.4 and deals more with Viv and her mindset. After that will be v0.6 and deals more with Hutch (but not exclusively) and the limits of what he's willing to endure (if there are any). v0.8 builds towards the final climax (hehe) and of course, v1.0 deals with the end and the epilogue.

Curiosity question: Are you guys more engaged, more interested, in this story because there are no choices? Are other games more boring because every possibility exists and there is no mystery? Or is MHB just an exception and choices are always a high priority?

I don't want to derail this thread talking about other games, but there's a few well know games I've given up on because it was just to many paths and, even with a mod, I got knocked off the paths I wanted and was too frustrated to try and start over. I will mention an exception, Chasing Sunsets, by name cause it's my favorite. It essentially had three paths, which was good, but I didn't feel one ending was significantly different than the others (girl A, girl B, or both).

I choose not to have multiple paths because every event plays into the next so multiple paths would require, literally, multiple stand alone stories. Hutch couldn't bust out of the bathroom stall and bitch slap Chris without rewriting every scene that comes later. If my story is just an exception to the 'multiple paths' rule, then I'm happy to be that exception.

As always, thank for the overwhelming support, positive reviews, and lively debate.

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The MOST important part of NTR/cheating/cuck games is the story, without the story is just 2 people who fuck. If you look at the most popular games are the ones with only 1 path and a good written story. If we look at VN we can see Laura Lustful secrets, the office wife, shadow of desire (this as actually 3 paths, but so diveded that can be counted as 3 games). It's a bit different with RPGmaker games like Lily of the valley, SAO invisible trap, NTRPG, ema milf warrior etc .. cause it's more 1 story with steps for progression.

For other kind of games, like harem, story is not important at all, cause the point of the game is to fuck as many chicks as possible. But NTR ones? I know is not good repeat a point, but IT'S THE MOST IMPORANT PART, the tension , the build up, the lies, the sneakiness, the obliviousness how can the work without a good chain that binds the lives of the protagonist with all the other characters?

You game work cause the way you tell their lives intertwine & branching the paths will only ruin it. I've already seen a lot of games falls because of that + adding that fact that developes can't handle splitting everything and losing interests before even the gamers.

Keep doing what you think is best tho, i've only seen 3 other games grow soo fast in so little time, good luck & i hope to see vesion 0.4 soon

 

[packard1928]

I like it just as you have it ! Look at all the chatter on this page. All of these people talking about your game and NONE OF KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN ! So that said it could not be any better with choices. That option could be handy if you were in this for monies and needed to satisify some level of subscriber.... With this you are telling a story and just like a good book NOBODY CAN PUT IT DOWN ! so my vote is know... you are doing fine.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Project Update

The next 24hrs of game time is done. About 1k images and animations. Most of the preview images already teased will not be in this release. Those will be in the third (v0.6). So a good chunk of that release is, thankfully, already done.

The more I think about it, the more appropriate 20% increments are as they are natural spots in the story to pause on. So next update will be v0.4 and deals more with Viv and her mindset. After that will be v0.6 and deals more with Hutch (but not exclusively) and the limits of what he's willing to endure (if there are any). v0.8 builds towards the final climax (hehe) and of course, v1.0 deals with the end and the epilogue.

Curiosity question: Are you guys more engaged, more interested, in this story because there are no choices? Are other games more boring because every possibility exists and there is no mystery? Or is MHB just an exception and choices are always a high priority?

I don't want to derail this thread talking about other games, but there's a few well know games I've given up on because it was just to many paths and, even with a mod, I got knocked off the paths I wanted and was too frustrated to try and start over. I will mention an exception, Chasing Sunsets, by name cause it's my favorite. It essentially had three paths, which was good, but I didn't feel one ending was significantly different than the others (girl A, girl B, or both).

I choose not to have multiple paths because every event plays into the next so multiple paths would require, literally, multiple stand alone stories. Hutch couldn't bust out of the bathroom stall and bitch slap Chris without rewriting every scene that comes later. If my story is just an exception to the 'multiple paths' rule, then I'm happy to be that exception.

As always, thank for the overwhelming support, positive reviews, and lively debate.

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Honestly, I usually skip kinetic novels cause I like to make choices for my female protagonist. But after playing this gem, you’ve convinced me this story is too good to need to make choices. Just sit back and watch the fireworks happen. But please tell me why you would make such a hot render of Vivian getting banged on the hood of the car if it’s not going to be in the game?
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[Adhdclassic]

Project Update

The next 24hrs of game time is done. About 1k images and animations. Most of the preview images already teased will not be in this release. Those will be in the third (v0.6). So a good chunk of that release is, thankfully, already done.

The more I think about it, the more appropriate 20% increments are as they are natural spots in the story to pause on. So next update will be v0.4 and deals more with Viv and her mindset. After that will be v0.6 and deals more with Hutch (but not exclusively) and the limits of what he's willing to endure (if there are any). v0.8 builds towards the final climax (hehe) and of course, v1.0 deals with the end and the epilogue.

Curiosity question: Are you guys more engaged, more interested, in this story because there are no choices? Are other games more boring because every possibility exists and there is no mystery? Or is MHB just an exception and choices are always a high priority?

I don't want to derail this thread talking about other games, but there's a few well know games I've given up on because it was just to many paths and, even with a mod, I got knocked off the paths I wanted and was too frustrated to try and start over. I will mention an exception, Chasing Sunsets, by name cause it's my favorite. It essentially had three paths, which was good, but I didn't feel one ending was significantly different than the others (girl A, girl B, or both).

I choose not to have multiple paths because every event plays into the next so multiple paths would require, literally, multiple stand alone stories. Hutch couldn't bust out of the bathroom stall and bitch slap Chris without rewriting every scene that comes later. If my story is just an exception to the 'multiple paths' rule, then I'm happy to be that exception.

As always, thank for the overwhelming support, positive reviews, and lively debate.

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Love the ring on the dresser.

 

[Adhdclassic]

That's a question will she wear her ring while she does her thing.

 

[packard1928]

but they are not in the game..... I would love to see something in the game where we can guess at ??? hopefully vivian naked !

 

[Hattyrulz]

The next 24hrs of game time is done. About 1k images and animations. Most of the preview images already teased will not be in this release. Those will be in the third (v0.6). So a good chunk of that release is, thankfully, already done.

The more I think about it, the more appropriate 20% increments are as they are natural spots in the story to pause on. So next update will be v0.4 and deals more with Viv and her mindset. After that will be v0.6 and deals more with Hutch (but not exclusively) and the limits of what he's willing to endure (if there are any). v0.8 builds towards the final climax (hehe) and of course, v1.0 deals with the end and the epilogue.

Curiosity question: Are you guys more engaged, more interested, in this story because there are no choices? Are other games more boring because every possibility exists and there is no mystery? Or is MHB just an exception and choices are always a high priority?

I don't want to derail this thread talking about other games, but there's a few well know games I've given up on because it was just to many paths and, even with a mod, I got knocked off the paths I wanted and was too frustrated to try and start over. I will mention an exception, Chasing Sunsets, by name cause it's my favorite. It essentially had three paths, which was good, but I didn't feel one ending was significantly different than the others (girl A, girl B, or both).

I choose not to have multiple paths because every event plays into the next so multiple paths would require, literally, multiple stand alone stories. Hutch couldn't bust out of the bathroom stall and bitch slap Chris without rewriting every scene that comes later. If my story is just an exception to the 'multiple paths' rule, then I'm happy to be that exception.

As always, thank for the overwhelming support, positive reviews, and lively debate.

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ty for the clarification about the previews and keeping us updated of the progress. i wish all devs had such planned goal oriented progress that you have planned for this vn in regards to the content of the updates. you stating the 3rd 4th and 5th update content has raised a few questions for me and since you don't want to answer questions about the story i'll refrain from prying further.

the involvement factor changed for me... at first i was in love with vivian's model as she looks very similar to my wife who is no more. then i started reading and the way you create a sense of realism and the story and the attention to detail drew me in... the more times i read the vn the more i started disliking vivian as a character as the story showed glaring flaws that the only way i could come to terms with those was porn game logic... even now it's a love hate feeling with vivian and the hurt hutch feels. some may debate that hutch being beta/coward/whatever terminology they want to make them feel validated.... these kinda instance draw me into the vn. the story and how it draws the reader in and how connected they feel, that's just a sign of well rounded good work.

i'm a sucker for happy ending... that's just me. everyone has their own tastes and freedom to do so.... you deciding what's best for the vn is i think better than voting on reader/players opinion of having multiple paths. i would suggest you stick with what you had for this vn and finish it rather be like quite a few of the good vns that were abandoned for various reason. having said that you would have thought about all the various other paths that can or cannot happen.... as a fan of this vn if and when you are done with this project it would be nice to create a version which had multiple paths. no pressure... just giving my input.

love the fun renders as a vivian fan(especially the shoulder length redhead)... just have to ask.... the 4th pic.... it's definitely not in the vn.... RIGHT.i meant the render below.

it feels like you are just faning my nightmare theory this isn't in the ending.

That's a question will she wear her ring while she does her thing.

for me that's a point of no return for the marriage. and the dev did say they are not part of the story... even if there is a slight possibility for that to in the vn its hard to come to terms with for me.

PS: you said 24 hours of the game is done... assuming the 1st update had 6 days will the following 20% incremental updates also consist of about 6 days each?

 

[Viener]

Please leave the VN as is. You have set the bar high for all other creators. Most games and VN's now seem boring and/or predictable. I have watched your creation multiple times. Each time I see something new that was missed previously. Thank you again for this stunning novel. Just the sheer numbers of views on this thread shows you have a unique and special talent. And the best part is you made it because you enjoy it! Stay true to your original concept and direction.

 

[psychedevil]

Honestly, I usually skip kinetic novels cause I like to make choices for my female protagonist. But after playing this gem, you’ve convinced me this story is too good to need to make choices. Just sit back and watch the fireworks happen.

I feel much the same way. In part, I usually like making choices for the female protagonist because otherwise given the "choices" set for her within the game I often dislike the outcome and frankly end up disliking her as a character.

In this case though, the story is well told, and I can appreciate the hot sex scenes while still sympathizing with Vivian and her husband Hutch. Sure, I'm the kind that still dislikes a manipulative and sociopathic character like the husband's boss Christian, but what has happened (at least thus far) does not make me altogether dislike Vivian and Hutch. Regardless of Vivian having to come to terms with getting some unanticipated sexual enjoyment out of the situation, it's not a situation that Vivian and Hutch desired to be in and thus started as a circumstance that (to some extent) was forced.

 

[X|Mortis]

Holy shit! Is this supposed to be a younger version of Vivian? The image is titled as 'Early Days' after all



Anyways, what a fucking knockout babe Sexy then, Sexy now, Sexy fucking forever

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

but they are not in the game..... I would love to see something in the game where we can guess at ??? hopefully vivian naked !

I guess we will even get better stuff in the next updates than the rejected pictures.

 

[packard1928]

I guess we will even get better stuff in the next updates than the rejected pictures.

Hope so... Any Vivian is good but one from the games keep this thread moving...Guessing....

 

[X|Mortis]

love the fun renders as a vivian fan(especially the shoulder length redhead)... just have to ask.... the 4th pic.... it's definitely not in the vn.... RIGHT.i meant the render below.

Hutch sure didn't spare any expenses when he bought Vivian that ring

 

[psychedevil]

Some questions I have asked myself pertaining to the possibility that Vivian had a wild past as a young woman is this: What was Hutch like back then, and what did he do in his younger days to attract her and win her hand in marriage? Was he very different in his younger days and mellowed out with age, or was he about the same kind of guy he is now and got Vivian to fall for him more in terms of being a stable and loving provider?

Whatever the case, with having been married for 22 years, Vivian and Hutch must have been quite young when they started dating, and they must have shared many passionate sexual experiences with each other along the way. Things have simmered down between them, as is the case for many couples married for decades and with children between them, but there's no way they would not have memories of many hot times they shared. Though we do not know how much time has passed, Vivian even referred to one instance where Hutch was like an animal in bed, which was recounted by her when she wore the nightgown out of guilt for him and offered him anal sex (which she said he had wanted for a long time). He turned her down due to being upset with her, but this hints that Hutch was actually more sexually adventurous than Vivian was in some ways, at least in terms of willingness to try anal sex.

 

[X|Mortis]

Was he very different in his younger days and mellowed out with age, or was he about the same kind of guy he is now and got Vivian to fall for him more in terms of being a stable and loving provider?

I think it's not too far-fetched to believe that Hutch was probably a more sexually active and domineering individual in his younger days. Then, over time when he started getting older, having a kid, and getting into his middle age years, he started to tone things down - as he wasn't the same young/adventurous/sexually active person that he may have been in his younger years.

pertaining to the possibility that Vivian had a wild past as a young woman is this

Or, it could be that Hutch who he is now was what he was always like, and it was Vivian who was the sexually adventurous/dominant type that mellowed down a bit over the years since falling in love with Hutch, marrying him and settling down with him to start a family.

To be truthful, I see both these scenarios being likely outcomes given what we know was alluded to in the story up to this point and both Vivian/Hutch's respective personas.

 

[Luc77]

this is their bedroom and her wed-ring (one scene - message: "go and get it done" +

she drop the ring and leaves)

 

[Lukasz1]

I would love to see how Hutch reacts to Vivian's betrayal at the boss's house and later in the bathroom. How Hutch would have reacted the first time and then the second time. Where would a red light have gone off for him.

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[Hattyrulz]

I think it's not too far-fetched to believe that Hutch was probably a more sexually active and domineering individual in his younger days. Then, over time when he started getting older, having a kid, and getting into his middle age years, he started to tone things down - as he wasn't the same young/adventurous/sexually active person that he may have been in his younger years.



Or, it could be that Hutch who he is now was what he was always like, and it was Vivian who was the sexually adventurous/dominant type that mellowed down a bit over the years since falling in love with Hutch, marrying him and settling down with him to start a family.

To be truthful, I see both these scenarios being likely outcomes given what we know was alluded to in the story up to this point and both Vivian/Hutch's respective personas.

there is no both way in this... we know that vivian has a tramp stamp... enough said. and the theory about hutch being a dominant type who mellowed out,there is one interaction between hutch and addison where addison just runs and hugs hutch like a lover but hutch doesn't even embrace her. this just show hutch as a guy who only in love with his wife even when there are younger beautiful women interested in him. this is repeated by vivian in the carpark when talking with christian. thats is y i say hutch didn't mellow out but just a loving husband otherwise we wouldn't even be having this vn... as he would just plain murder christian from what he saw in the backyard. my thoughts aside would any husband do what hutch did... i don't think so. even if the husband is into sharing/open marriage. and the dev has already laid some groundwork for future updates its just how he will build on those... there is enough foreshadowing in the story info as is.

PS: just read the labels on the posts the ring is labeled w4= week 4 assuming that each update has 6 days/1 week approx. . week 4 would be update 4. dev please don't tempt our imagination so much.