VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[88stanford88]

No, I don't realize those are two different things because they're not two different things. Hutch has been given multiple exit ramps from this nonsense and he's pussied out every time. He's pathologically incapable of standing up for himself, he quite literally let Christian talk him into agreeing to be a cuck.

The problem with your view is that you forget the 22 years Hutch and Vivian lived in a presumably faithful marriage for all those 22 years.
If you remove this from your one-sided argument, you are clearly only talking to denigrate a husband who has built his family impeccably, and you also forget that he is paying the mortgage, the car payments, and his son's college tuition...

You're wrong about Hutch. He's a responsible man who is very much in love with Vivian and very honest with himself... he has decided to put aside the stupid views that many who play with the porn-logic have in their brains.

Sex isn't everything in a relationship... sex is only a small part of life with a wife, especially if the marriage has lasted so many years.
It wasn't an easy choice Hutch made, but he made it and we all have to respect that...
This story is about a situation that all husbands could find themselves in after 22 years of marriage.

Choosing to throw away 22 years of your life that you and your wife have built with great sacrifice.
Choosing to throw away your son's life too, just for the sake of moralism and because a man must choose to kill his unfaithful wife...

Well, Hutch is far beter then you.
This is his choice and in my opinion is the better choice possible.


totally agree with Hutch
Choosing to throw away 22 years of your life that you and your wife have built with great sacrifice.
Choosing to throw away your son's life too, just for the sake of moralism and because a man must choose to kill his unfaithful wife...
It takes much more courage to choose to temporarily open up his marriage with Vivian in the hope that things will work out over time, rather than start destroying the lives of his entire family.

You realise these are two different things, right? Not arguing one way or the other about Hutch, but just in general terms, being in total shock and not stopping something from happening doesn't mean you're incapable of doing something completely different and unrelated on a completely different day... Specifically here, once the initial shock has passed, it would be perfectly reasonable for a seemingly quiet man to plot revenge. It's not something that he would only be able to do if he had stood his ground at the time he discovered his wife with someone else.

You've basically said that if a "mastermind" finds his wife cheating on him he would always stop it - I'd say those are the ones more likely to stop and think and plot, rather than just diving in without a thought.

I agree with you, even if you're missing the real point...
There are times when a man has to choose between destroying everything he has built in 22 years or trying to prevent everyone in his family from getting hurt.
OK, Hutch's choice covers the possibility of fixing things...

In life, you should never seek revenge because revenge often cannot repair the fact that Vivian likes rough and extreme sex.

Hutch made the only choice possible to avoid destroy everyone his family and himself...
I would have done the same...

Anyone who believes that a man after 22 years of marriage and a child going to college... just because he discovers that his wife likes extreme sex, he kills his wife and destroys everyone in his family is a real man... I DISAGREE
Accepting murder is for troglodytes.
Hutch knew very well what would happen if Vivian met Christian... for six whole years, he managed to prevent them from meeting.

Now, the most important thing to understand in this story is why did Hutch marry Vivian 22 years ago?
She has tattoos that leave little doubt as to what kind of woman she is... All the women with tattoos that I know love rough sex... Hutch is not a man who likes women like Vivian—at this point, it would be important to understand why they got married 22 years ago.

I hope SCS gives us a flashback in the next chapter about 22 years ago when Vivian and Hutch met as soon as possible.

I repeat:
All women with tattoos I know THEY LOVE ROUGH SEX! Vivian was not the right wife for Hutch anyway.. they have a family... so we will see in the next chapters!

Amazing story

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

The problem with your view is that you forget the 22 years Hutch and Vivian lived in a presumably faithful marriage for all those 22 years.
If you remove this from your one-sided argument, you are clearly only talking to denigrate a husband who has built his family impeccably, and you also forget that he is paying the mortgage, the car payments, and his son's college tuition...

You're wrong about Hutch. He's a responsible man who is very much in love with Vivian and very honest with himself... he has decided to put aside the stupid views that many who play with the porn-logic have in their brains.

Sex isn't everything in a relationship... sex is only a small part of life with a wife, especially if the marriage has lasted so many years.
It wasn't an easy choice Hutch made, but he made it and we all have to respect that...
This story is about a situation that all husbands could find themselves in after 22 years of marriage.

Choosing to throw away 22 years of your life that you and your wife have built with great sacrifice.
Choosing to throw away your son's life too, just for the sake of moralism and because a man must choose to kill his unfaithful wife...

Well, Hutch is far beter then you.
This is his choice and in my opinion is the better choice possible.
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totally agree with Hutch
Choosing to throw away 22 years of your life that you and your wife have built with great sacrifice.
Choosing to throw away your son's life too, just for the sake of moralism and because a man must choose to kill his unfaithful wife...
It takes much more courage to choose to temporarily open up his marriage with Vivian in the hope that things will work out over time, rather than start destroying the lives of his entire family.

I agree with you, even if you're missing the real point...
There are times when a man has to choose between destroying everything he has built in 22 years or trying to prevent everyone in his family from getting hurt.
OK, Hutch's choice covers the possibility of fixing things...

In life, you should never seek revenge because revenge often cannot repair the fact that Vivian likes rough and extreme sex.

Hutch made the only choice possible to avoid destroy everyone his family and himself...
I would have done the same...

Anyone who believes that a man after 22 years of marriage and a child going to college... just because he discovers that his wife likes extreme sex, he kills his wife and destroys everyone in his family is a real man... I DISAGREE
Accepting murder is for troglodytes.
Hutch knew very well what would happen if Vivian met Christian... for six whole years, he managed to prevent them from meeting.

Now, the most important thing to understand in this story is why did Hutch marry Vivian 22 years ago?
She has tattoos that leave little doubt as to what kind of woman she is... All the women with tattoos that I know love rough sex... Hutch is not a man who likes women like Vivian—at this point, it would be important to understand why they got married 22 years ago.

I hope SCS gives us a flashback in the next chapter about 22 years ago when Vivian and Hutch met as soon as possible.

I repeat:
All women with tattoos I know THEY LOVE ROUGH SEX! Vivian was not the right wife for Hutch anyway.. they have a family... so we will see in the next chapters!

Amazing story

 

[duckydoodoo]

im not a wait and plan person, im a fuck you and walk away person. regardless of what kind of person you are, if a cheater is going to cheat, you cant stop them without physically restraining them.

whatever hutch does next, i think he understands that at this point his wife is going to cheat, regardless what he says or does. interupting and cock blocking only stops it this time and it doesnt make her less of a cheater or change the fact she intends to betray him and their marriage.

hopefully he is making an exit strategy that keeps him from leaving with nothing. which lets be honest, he didnt have a job til his wife cheated on him and he knows it. so if he leaves right now, he has no home no job and no money. if he plays along, he can exploit his whore wife and christian and settle his finances for the future, then pull the trigger on divorce.

it would make sense to work with a powerful client or enemy of christian, whether as a parachute or revenge plot.

 

[sincarnate]

How many chapters did you have planned for this amazing piece of work?

There will be 5 chapters in all according to SC and this upcoming chapter will be mainly about Hutch and his point of view i guess which is what everybody is waiting for

 

[dylan93]

Maybe he won't get the girl, but the girl could want him, because she sees in him a good guy. Even more if she finds out that Vivian is his wife, given how she looked down on her the day she visited the office. Maybe she will want to "save" this "good man" from this whore. If it's the case, he will be again the passive one in the supposed couple because it look like Addison is the type who does not hold back, even if she appears calm.

Not that I want it, nor that I think it will happen, even if it's clear that Addison it's the only one in the office having some appreciation for him, and that she will play a role in the future. It remains to be seen which one. That's why I can understand why some want or see this outcome.


I agree, but thing is, if he had decided to leave or divorce, you will not have this story. It would have been just a short one. IIRC it was dev's first idea, to write a short VN.

Unfortunately most women don't want good men, they prefer the rich dramatic hound dogs like Christian or just an out and out Alpha dog that doesn't care about them and keeps them on a their toes guessing.

Hutch (Good man) = weak woke, agreeable feminist liberal lapdog, simp, boring, predictable, insecure

Christian ( hound dog/alpha male) = sociopath, doesn't care, self-interested, self-serving, entitled, unpredictable, sees through feminist Bullshit, doesn't fall for manipulation as he's the manipulator, confidence, secure, womaniser and lots of money

the kicker is, that women love the Christians types as they are the cocain drama that woman are addicted too. Don't believe me, try being a Hutch for a while in your relationship and see how long it will be before your girlfriend or wife leaves you for being a predictable boring man

 

[packard1928]

Hutch has made the decision to for 2 reasons. 1, he reconizes that Vivian has found the need to experiance a different side to Sex that she is not offering to him right now. 2, Vivian is Christians Achilles heal ! She will be Christians undoing and is the Hutch main source to put His plan to work. He open the marriage to release her reluctance to keep having sex with Christian.
It has always been said... watch out for the quiet ones... I think we will see something from Hutch soon... Just my thought...

 

[imagica]

Just finished chapter 2. I really did not expect Vivian to turn that quickly? Her transformation and yielding to her lust and passions seemed to get fast forwarded for the sake of the story. I wish she kept that dread and doom in her about divorce instead of this Mistress path she now seems to be on.

Well, it did not happen fast for me. I mean, she either accepts or get out of this relationship. To observe for 3 chapters how she sells her self in order for husband to keep the job will be felt like stagnation. We need character development.

 

[88stanford88]

Hutch has made the decision to for 2 reasons. 1, he reconizes that Vivian has found the need to experiance a different side to Sex that she is not offering to him right now. 2, Vivian is Christians Achilles heal ! She will be Christians undoing and is the Hutch main source to put His plan to work. He open the marriage to release her reluctance to keep having sex with Christian.
It has always been said... watch out for the quiet ones... I think we will see something from Hutch soon... Just my thought...

I agree with you here...
Hutch loves his wife that is why he took this decision.

 

[NightCall.]

im not a wait and plan person, im a fuck you and walk away person. regardless of what kind of person you are, if a cheater is going to cheat, you cant stop them without physically restraining them.

whatever hutch does next, i think he understands that at this point his wife is going to cheat, regardless what he says or does. interupting and cock blocking only stops it this time and it doesnt make her less of a cheater or change the fact she intends to betray him and their marriage.

hopefully he is making an exit strategy that keeps him from leaving with nothing. which lets be honest, he didnt have a job til his wife cheated on him and he knows it. so if he leaves right now, he has no home no job and no money. if he plays along, he can exploit his whore wife and christian and settle his finances for the future, then pull the trigger on divorce.

it would make sense to work with a powerful client or enemy of christian, whether as a parachute or revenge plot.

That’s actually a pretty solid idea. Hutch should just quietly save up some money first. Once things start to settle or a better chance comes along, then he can go ahead and file for divorce and move on or Vivian did. After that, it’s each to their own. Vivian can do whatever makes her happy, be with whoever she wants. Maybe her life will turn out better without Hutch… or maybe worse, who knows. Same goes for Hutch maybe his new life will be better, maybe not, but at least he’ll finally get his own chance.


As for their kid, just let them decide. They’re old enough to understand anyway. Hutch just needs to keep being a good dad, that’s all. I think the kid will get it.


If it ends that way, I think it’s a pretty fitting conclusion. But in the meantime, we’d get to see Vivian go further down her dark path that’s gonna be fun to watch.

 

[Oriandu]

The problem with your view is that you forget the 22 years Hutch and Vivian lived in a presumably faithful marriage for all those 22 years.
If you remove this from your one-sided argument, you are clearly only talking to denigrate a husband who has built his family impeccably, and you also forget that he is paying the mortgage, the car payments, and his son's college tuition...

You're wrong about Hutch. He's a responsible man who is very much in love with Vivian and very honest with himself... he has decided to put aside the stupid views that many who play with the porn-logic have in their brains.

Sex isn't everything in a relationship... sex is only a small part of life with a wife, especially if the marriage has lasted so many years.
It wasn't an easy choice Hutch made, but he made it and we all have to respect that...
This story is about a situation that all husbands could find themselves in after 22 years of marriage.

Choosing to throw away 22 years of your life that you and your wife have built with great sacrifice.
Choosing to throw away your son's life too, just for the sake of moralism and because a man must choose to kill his unfaithful wife...

Well, Hutch is far beter then you.
This is his choice and in my opinion is the better choice possible.
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totally agree with Hutch
Choosing to throw away 22 years of your life that you and your wife have built with great sacrifice.
Choosing to throw away your son's life too, just for the sake of moralism and because a man must choose to kill his unfaithful wife...
It takes much more courage to choose to temporarily open up his marriage with Vivian in the hope that things will work out over time, rather than start destroying the lives of his entire family.

I agree with you, even if you're missing the real point...
There are times when a man has to choose between destroying everything he has built in 22 years or trying to prevent everyone in his family from getting hurt.
OK, Hutch's choice covers the possibility of fixing things...

In life, you should never seek revenge because revenge often cannot repair the fact that Vivian likes rough and extreme sex.

Hutch made the only choice possible to avoid destroy everyone his family and himself...
I would have done the same...

Anyone who believes that a man after 22 years of marriage and a child going to college... just because he discovers that his wife likes extreme sex, he kills his wife and destroys everyone in his family is a real man... I DISAGREE
Accepting murder is for troglodytes.
Hutch knew very well what would happen if Vivian met Christian... for six whole years, he managed to prevent them from meeting.

Now, the most important thing to understand in this story is why did Hutch marry Vivian 22 years ago?
She has tattoos that leave little doubt as to what kind of woman she is... All the women with tattoos that I know love rough sex... Hutch is not a man who likes women like Vivian—at this point, it would be important to understand why they got married 22 years ago.

I hope SCS gives us a flashback in the next chapter about 22 years ago when Vivian and Hutch met as soon as possible.

I repeat:
All women with tattoos I know THEY LOVE ROUGH SEX! Vivian was not the right wife for Hutch anyway.. they have a family... so we will see in the next chapters!

Amazing story

No, that's not the problem with my view as it would require Hutch to not be a big, giant, gaping pussy. 20+ years of marriage don't mean shit in this scenario since they've seemingly rendered Hutch as barely more than an invalid. Vivian quite literally tells Hutch that if doesn't want her to be a massive slut that she won't be a massive slut and he's all "No, go be a massive slut. I'm going to sit here on the bed and be sad." By the end of the second update Christian has successfully gaslit Vivian into getting off on being raped and y'all are expecting Hutch to be able to stand up to him, sabotage his company, and bang his niece?

 

[彡SILENT๛ONE]

Android ports?

 

[Turner9]

I have to admit, you know its good when you get so many people's thoughtful input into the visual novel and want to shape its outcome.

I really want Hutch to be this closest Kasier Soze Type and wreck havoc at the right time when it all counts!

Someone said that Hutch is weak. I began to think that also but he seems more calculating , no full rage or anger, as he stomachs each graphic sexual display in front of him. I believe the kitchen scene broke him and after that nothing really phases him now.

I hope the Dev are really doing something behind the scenes with this character (Hutch The Husband) Or his behavior to all of this is just off! Does not fit. I mean, like others. Those who have surrender to being some Cuckold .

But this is not entirely the case as he has an option with Addison who knows who else? That is no cuckold just a guy who being cheated on and humilated by gross circumstances from his boss!

Christian: What a monster this guy is.. lol nonstop and it would be great to see a group of husbands in a bar talking about how they are going to deal with him lol. I know it won't happen because they are SIPs to begin with but here is to hoping .

This game does not have all the animation , mini games like others but it has one hell of a story line that is engaging and many will continue to give their POV on it. Well Done!

 

[DarkArchon]

Except he has repeatedly done nothing about it. This isn’t one time thing. He knew she was going to get screwed by the client at the hotel when she yells at him for coming in and waiting in the lobby or when boss fucks her in the bathroom.
then she fucks his boss right in there driveway and half out of the car on the front lawn while he watches from the window and so all the neighbors can see and hear the whore of the block is home. Maybe he should become her pimp and start selling her services, since he doesn’t do a damn thing about stopping her
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On the pimping her out front, Hutch will have to get in line behind Duke. I saw a vision of Vivian negotiating with Duke about starting a booty for cash side hustle in my April Fool's crystal ball.



Whoever pimps her out better start doing it fast! At 45 that booty doesn't have much shelf life left as far fetching a good price for it. I told Duke he will need to start accepting food stamps instead of cash for Vivian's booty in a few years if he starts pimping her out.

 

[88stanford88]

No, that's not the problem with my view as it would require Hutch to not be a big, giant, gaping pussy. 20+ years of marriage don't mean shit in this scenario since they've seemingly rendered Hutch as barely more than an invalid. Vivian quite literally tells Hutch that if doesn't want her to be a massive slut that she won't be a massive slut and he's all "No, go be a massive slut. I'm going to sit here on the bed and be sad." By the end of the second update Christian has successfully gaslit Vivian into getting off on being raped and y'all are expecting Hutch to be able to stand up to him, sabotage his company, and bang his niece?

Your opinion is not important. You are not Hutch, so you cannot speak for him.
You are just judging without reading what he says and understanding what is important to him.
Everything is written in the game, and Hutch at the end of CH1... that's what he wants.

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Your opinion does not respect the people involved in a story in which the husband and wife have loved each other for 22 years, and so you express the typical judgment of the selfish male who thinks only of himself.
Loving a woman means respecting her, and Hutch is showing you that there are men out there who are different from you.
You're just someone who hates NTR stories because you're insecure in life, and frankly, I don't think you'll ever be able to love a woman. You'll probably remain single for life.

You hate NTR stories because you are insecure in life and, frankly, I don't think you will ever be able to love a woman. You will probably remain single for the rest of your life.

You should stop writing your delusional judgments about what Hutch should do...
He knows exactly what situation he's in, and neither Christian nor his wife have cast him aside.
He wasn't fired just because his wife loves and respects him enough to understand that right now they need to have an open relationship for the sake of their family.

I think this game is not for you... but when the third chapter will be ready, you won't be able to resist downloading it...
just remember that you are downloading a story about a love drama... true love leads to jealousy, and jealousy hurts, so there is no love without NTR.

Good luck

 

[noahsombrero]

Again that's looking at two different things though. You're talking about getting confrontational, and maybe that's not the type of person Hutch is, even allowing for shock being the reason for not acting in the first instance. We haven't seen much of Hutch since things happened, so until the next update, we don't really know his state of mind (well, hopefully we will know it in the next update).

There's nothing I've seen though that says Hutch would be incapable of working out some sort of revenge plot to ruin Christian. He would just do it in a "behind the scenes" sort of way that avoids him literally having to square up to Christian. Play to your strengths, and all that - or perhaps in this case, play away from your weaknesses. If Hutch knows that he's not going to come out of a physical confrontation having gained anything but maybe a temporary satisfaction, his best bet is to do something that doesn't involve a physical confrontation. "You ruined my marriage, I'm going to ruin your life/business/finances" is totally the sort of thing I could see someone like Hutch doing.

I guess my question would be, irl would any husband behave as he is? After being married to her 20 years? I think all three characters (Wife, Husband, Boss) are fantasy land extremes that would not exist irl.

Would any husband sit outside a bedroom door and listen to his Wife scream in pleasure? And then pretend heard nothing? A guy would at least leave the scene long before the next morning.

 

[noahsombrero]

im not a wait and plan person, im a fuck you and walk away person. regardless of what kind of person you are, if a cheater is going to cheat, you cant stop them without physically restraining them.

This has been my point for a long time. Husband is smart enough to know that, if she wants to do it, she will do it one way or the other. But if she does not really, he is ready to step up and help as we saw in the bathroom scene where he is in a stall and we see her come in, and then Boss comes in and starts trying to initiate sex, but she resists. He is ready to come out of that stall and do something about it, but then he sees she is giving in. Forget that, he thinks.

So, no he is not a wuss. He is waiting for her to come home and confess and ask to be forgiven because of course he loves her. But the time will come when he is no longer willing to wait for that any more. He will feel the need to act as SC says in chpt 3. Chpt 3 is Husband's chapter he says.

 

[noahsombrero]

Here's what stumps me. SC comes here with pics and explanation of he he sees things, and understands the characters he has created. Things are quiet for a week or two after that, but then we get a new crew in hear acting like they read none of that. Maybe they didn't.

The last time SC was here he said that Wife confronted Boss at the end of chpt 2, and in his mind that was a significant moment in the story. But then we get a guy here a page or two ago who says he doesn't think we can pay much attention to what happened at the end of chpt 2, it was that dizzy headed Wife after all.

Now, just a damn minute, people. How can you think that what you think of Wife overrules SC's understanding of this character he has created and what he intends for her? Who is writing this story, you or SC?

 

[John Smy]

noahsombrero said
" Here's what stumps me. SC comes here with pics and explanation of he he sees things, and understands the characters he has created. Things are quiet for a week or two after that, but then we get a new crew in hear acting like they read none of that. Maybe they didn't. "

You make a good point. I had not gone back and read SC's posts. Just did to most. I personally didn't think it felt confrontational, but if SC says it is. it is. Myguest would be it's her agreeing completely to work for him. I had also missed the preview pics and SC's comments on pacing and story. A lot of things make more sense reading those,particularly the pacing. Still think it's a bit quick for Vivian's fall, but totally understand it now. I also suspect now some of the stuff we've seen, like the students are red herrings/cut content. Not going to worry about them. So if Chapter 3 is Hutch and based off some of those shots, in particular the strip club scenes. i stand by the cliff hanger is Hutch leaving or appearing too probably after she stays the night at Christians. Assuming that, Chapter 4 will be her falling off the cliff, being used by Christian a lot. Chapter 5 will be I think the Hutch making the ultimate decision, which I think will mean Vivian will be done with Christian because he will have pushed her too far. Especially If she's gone to work for him, I suspect it will be him whoring her out to get contracts. I saw less sex scenes were mentioned and I'm a bit sad I was hoping for longer ones, but damn it I'm into the story now. I did see SC mention a lot of hate, I'm sorry they got that, it's an NTR story they are inherently polarizing. The story is pretty interesting though and got me hooked, so I give you full Kudos! Just please no Soprano ending. I HATE those stories "How do you think it ended?" Damn you authors!! But if that's how you go I'll just have to live with it. It is your story.
Side note, which I think is out of left field...What if the ending is her having gotten back with Hutch and dumped Christian then we see her in the bathroom waiting for the results of a pregnancy test? They have been having aLOT of unprotected sex and we assume she's taking pills or something, but is she? Especially if he was whoring her out.

 

[DarkArchon]

noahsombrero said
" Here's what stumps me. SC comes here with pics and explanation of he he sees things, and understands the characters he has created. Things are quiet for a week or two after that, but then we get a new crew in hear acting like they read none of that. Maybe they didn't. "

You make a good point. I had not gone back and read SC's posts. Just did to most. I personally didn't think it felt confrontational, but if SC says it is. it is. Myguest would be it's her agreeing completely to work for him. I had also missed the preview pics and SC's comments on pacing and story. A lot of things make more sense reading those,particularly the pacing. Still think it's a bit quick for Vivian's fall, but totally understand it now. I also suspect now some of the stuff we've seen, like the students are red herrings/cut content. Not going to worry about them. So if Chapter 3 is Hutch and based off some of those shots, in particular the strip club scenes. i stand by the cliff hanger is Hutch leaving or appearing too probably after she stays the night at Christians. Assuming that, Chapter 4 will be her falling off the cliff, being used by Christian a lot. Chapter 5 will be I think the Hutch making the ultimate decision, which I think will mean Vivian will be done with Christian because he will have pushed her too far. Especially If she's gone to work for him, I suspect it will be him whoring her out to get contracts. I saw less sex scenes were mentioned and I'm a bit sad I was hoping for longer ones, but damn it I'm into the story now. I did see SC mention a lot of hate, I'm sorry they got that, it's an NTR story they are inherently polarizing. The story is pretty interesting though and got me hooked, so I give you full Kudos! Just please no Soprano ending. I HATE those stories "How do you think it ended?" Damn you authors!! But if that's how you go I'll just have to live with it. It is your story.
Side note, which I think is out of left field...What if the ending is her having gotten back with Hutch and dumped Christian then we see her in the bathroom waiting for the results of a pregnancy test? They have been having aLOT of unprotected sex and we assume she's taking pills or something, but is she? Especially if he was whoring her out.

Christian said he got snipped in chapter 1, and if he was telling the truth, she won't get pregnant by him. At 45 she is much less likely to get pregnant by anybody than she would be if she was much younger, but it is possible by someone other than Christian. I don't think pregnancy is the direction that the story is going in, but that is up to SC Stories not me.

 

[oshikuru]

I'm new to this thread and the VN. I went through, more like binged both episodes yesterday. I have it a 5 star review. And I still stand by it today. But going over it a second time I'm now more convinced that the pacing is a bit too fast for my liking.

So to start off you have this couple who've been married for 22 years, likely together even longer. Clearly they care about each other very much as is seen from the wifes, Vivian, reactions. The husband, Hutch, on the other hand comes across bored. Maybe it's the models fault, but even at work he seems like he would rather be somewhere else. That he's only doing this job for the money and security. I think that's the main reason why the boss, Christian, goes after Vivian. He knows as he has seen Hutch working, that he's more or less stuck here. That being said I won't delve deeper into psychology of why Vivian and Hutch act like they do. I'll focus more on the erotic side of the VN and it's scenes. If you haven't go through the chapters I'll spoiler them.

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With that said I again reiterate that I enjoyed it. And am eagerly awaiting the next release. Like most I have questions what's going to happen next. Will Vivian tell Hutch and publicly open her marriage? What will happen with the mechanic? With the pupil? Going back to what I've said before, Christian could have used these two in his mind games. Of course if he knew about them and what happened between Viv and them. We will see. Cheers to the creator. It's a good one!