VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [v0.2] [SC Stories]

[Robb123456]

I would be ecstatic to see a scene between Vivian and the mechanic She needs her daily dose of BBC action too

Who knows? It could be that Vivian ends up being a nymphomaniac and ends up being the town's bicycle slutting herself around all the time due to her being corrupted big time by Chris

That's quite a possibility, but i hope it will be much nuanced than that. Won't do good to the story i think. Ithink at some point Sawyer will have some role to play in this story and i don't think she will like it.

 

[alex220477]

The thing is, I think what makes most AVN players so engrossed in the MHB storyline is the perceived realism behind the character's actions and motivations. It's not some big grandiose hentai action plot, and the story/plot doesn't try to make itself out to be complex in an edgy/overdone sort of way.

That's what makes the relatability in the game between the character interactions and underlying motivations that much more impactful. Sure, at the end of the day, this is a porn game, Vivian, Hutch, and Chris are all fictitious characters and are not meant to represent IRL relationship dynamics per-se totally, and some plot details might be exaggerated, but the way certain character interactions are portrayed are still done in a fairly believable manner which makes the overall plot/narrative more relatable to understand.

real character interaction, but what world are you from, a wife who fucks a man 10 times in the same day, who fucks him in front of her husband, and the husband watches and jerks off, hahaha, you're right, it's porn, well done porn scenes, but then everything is rubbish, plot, dialogues, timing, let's talk about sex, I give it 10, but then everything is a 0.

 

[tg]

real character interaction, but what world are you from, a wife who fucks a man 10 times in the same day, who fucks him in front of her husband, and the husband watches and jerks off, hahaha, you're right, it's porn, well done porn scenes, but then everything is rubbish, plot, dialogues, timing, let's talk about sex, I give it 10, but then everything is a 0.

I still don't think you've played the game. When does she fuck in front of her husband? Why not just play it, and see what it's like?

 

[Robb123456]

I still don't think you've played the game. When does she fuck in front of her husband? Why not just play it, and see what it's like?

Guy the more you're gonna engage him, the more he's gonna troll us.

PS : Does he sleep on his "Enter" key ?

 

[JoeBlogs]

So I'm saying she could have given Christian an easy opening (no pun intended) when it came to getting started in the backyard. She doesn't have to enjoy it, she doesn't have to be dominant for it, she just needs to tell Christian she knows what he wants and she's willing to do what it takes, so get it over with.

Anger or pain though? Maybe a mix of both. Perhaps he's being too rough, thrusting too hard and she's not used to it, so it hurts.

If his dick is that big, there is no way its going in her unless she is sufficiently wet (i.e. super horny and ready to go), he happens to carry a jar of lube with him. I didn't see any evidence of lube, so I can only assume she was wet with anticipation, regardless of how much she didn't want it.

I don't know the reason for this cut, maybe it was "too much" or a step too far? Even though it's a tiny detail in a really well-written and compelling story, I tend to agree with the cut because maybe it's too early to explicitly show her active participation (even though it's a pretty hot moment!).
But I would be curious if @SC Stories could share his thoughts about this choice.

This would have been too much, and would have shown without a shadow of a doubt what her real personality and desire is.
Good find.

And he tests Vivian by testing her will to see how far she would go for Hutch, her marriage.

For Hutch maybe, for her marriage not a chance. I don't think any devoted wife of 22 years would think I got to cheat and fuck another guy to save my marriage. But I guess stranger things have happened, and Vivian is shown to be making many stupid decisions so far.

to all those speculating what hutch was doing when he went mia.... my theory is that he went to find out about the missing item in this picture.

I like this. We never did see what happened to the box. Perhaps he did find it and rrealise it's just one more lie to add to the collection.

And, because he wants to get into her panties, he's willing to indulge her, and run with her idea. I think it's a different approach: wining and dining the clients, but it's a woman's approach. And I like it. Let's see if it works, and I'm sure Hutch will benefit from it.

Wining and dining clients is not new. Fairly certain he has been doing it already. However offering them a chance to bang a cheating wife, well that could be something new.

 

[alex220477]

I still don't think you've played the game. When does she fuck in front of her husband? Why not just play it, and see what it's like?

I played, nice, I said while fucking with Crhis in the garden and while they were in the bathroom, Hucth was watching, I'm wrong, NO, Vivian after the bathroom scene notices a man's shoes, then goes out to find where to hide, because she has the doubt that it was her husband, when she sees him, she accepts Crhis' suggestions, to wait for Hucth to take the conversation, do you want other specific examples to make you understand that I played, the sex scenes, are 10, but the rest, especially being a kinetic VN, is bad, no plot or anything else, just sex. I'm wrong about this too, NO, what man sees his wife fucked at will look and stays quiet, a loser, but it's porn, that's how it has to go, right, so, don't talk to me about a good story, here, there are good scenes of sex domination. everything else, garbage

 

[Aimless44]

I would be ecstatic to see a scene between Vivian and the mechanic She needs her daily dose of BBC action too

Who knows? It could be that Vivian ends up being a nymphomaniac and ends up being the town's bicycle slutting herself around all the time due to her being corrupted big time by Chris

No Doubt. And with the DEV's art style that would make for some awesome scenes. I'm just thinking about what that means for Hutch's character. No where to go except full-blown alpha pimp I think!

 

[JoeBlogs]

This is the best scene to describe what has happened to Hutch, in one word.



Does anybody think that Hutch saw her panties on the ground here? It looks like he did.


She had a choice, devastate her husband or don't.


How can any devoted wife, after hearing this confession, think she is doing the right thing? Surely she knows she fucked up more than she is being fucked at this point.




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Question to SC Stories, if you have the time and are willing to answer...
This first version encompasses about 6 days. Are you intending for each update to be approximately the same in-game time?
How much in-game time do you envision the story to cover?

 

[Robb123456]

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This is the best scene to describe what has happened to Hutch, in one word.


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Does anybody think that Hutch saw her panties on the ground here? It looks like he did.

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She had a choice, devastate her husband or don't.

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How can any devoted wife, after hearing this confession, think she is doing the right thing? Surely she knows she fucked up more than she is being fucked at this point.




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Question to SC Stories, if you have the time and are willing to answer...
This first version encompasses about 6 days. Are you intending for each update to be approximately the same in-game time?
How much in-game time do you envision the story to cover?

He said the next update will be 3-4 days but action packed.

 

[Aimless44]

The thing is, I think what makes most AVN players so engrossed in the MHB storyline is the perceived realism behind the character's actions and motivations. It's not some big grandiose hentai action plot, and the story/plot doesn't try to make itself out to be complex in an edgy/overdone sort of way.

That's what makes the relatability in the game between the character interactions and underlying motivations that much more impactful. Sure, at the end of the day, this is a porn game, Vivian, Hutch, and Chris are all fictitious characters and are not meant to represent IRL relationship dynamics per-se totally, and some plot details might be exaggerated, but the way certain character interactions are portrayed are still done in a fairly believable manner which makes the overall plot/narrative more relatable to understand.

100% Agree. These stories are about crazy and over the top situations, but they have little reminders that hit us about real ideas and situations that have either happened to us or strike us in some way emotionally.

 

[packard1928]

I see Vivian as an emotional woman. This may be Hutch Downfall.. Let me explain. In the beginning she mentioned to Christian that the sex was ok... Hutch sometimes needed some help to get going. (Soft emotion) Then she said she wore a sexy nightgown to hutch and he was a tiger ( Hight emotion ). Then Christian stirs the pot with mind blowing sex to her. ( High Emotion ). Last She mentions to Christian he will not kiss or tough me..... ( No Emotion ) This I think will drive her further away from Hutch EMOTIONALLY... He is not offering any in that department. So she will have to got where there is some....Christian or others.

 

[tg]

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Does anybody think that Hutch saw her panties on the ground here? It looks like he did.

I really don't think it matters if he sees them or not. He witnessed the actual fucking. So, he already knows. But, that scene was for her, to see the panties she absently left out, and to hide them. That's just to show that she doesn't want him to know about that sex she had.

He already knows, but she doesn't know he knows at that stage.

 

[Adhdclassic]

I think the utter fucking ridiculousness is what makes this story interesting. Part of me wish it was choice based but good it wasn't. I am hopeing this stays 5 star till the end. Maybe DEV will give us another one.

 

[Adhdclassic]

I really don't think it matters if he sees them or not. He witnessed the actual fucking. So, he already knows. But, that scene was for her, to see the panties she absently left out, and to hide them. That's just to show that she doesn't want him to know about that sex she had.

He already knows, but she doesn't know he knows at that stage.

absolutely agree he saw it but what does it matter when you saw why the panties were on the ground in the first place.

 

[JoeBlogs]

I see Vivian as an emotional woman. This may be Hutch Downfall.. Let me explain. In the beginning she mentioned to Christian that the sex was ok... Hutch sometimes needed some help to get going. (Soft emotion) Then she said she wore a sexy nightgown to hutch and he was a tiger ( Hight emotion ). Then Christian stirs the pot with mind blowing sex to her. ( High Emotion ). Last She mentions to Christian he will not kiss or tough me..... ( No Emotion ) This I think will drive her further away from Hutch EMOTIONALLY... He is not offering any in that department. So she will have to got where there is some....Christian or others.

True, but she knows why Hutch is declining her any emotion, and I think she feels she deserves it. But that last scene in the bedroom undoes Hutch's emotionless stance (that's why I think it fails in the scope of Hutch's character, but that's just me).
That last scene between Hutch and Vivian (although I know why it was done), still feels out of character and flat to me, no matter how many times I see it.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

Surely she knows she fucked up more than she is being fucked at this point

And yet, despite knowing, deep down I'm sure Vivian is into it anyway because she's not as innocent of a housewife as we're made to believe at times

This is the best scene to describe what has happened to Hutch

The facial expression says it all Picture speaks a thousand words after all

Does anybody think that Hutch saw her panties on the ground here? It looks like he did

Quite likely. Although, it could be the case that Vivian noticed Hutch's wandering eyes and intervened right before he could make out what was on the ground.

Either way, before that scene, I'm pretty sure Hutch had already noticed Vivian getting anally fucked by Chris in his backyard, so whether he noticed the panties or not, doesn't change the fact that he already knows Vivian/Chris has been fucking in the latter's backyard behind his back.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Lets keep it 100 she offered her ass and he turned it down he is done with her. I truly believe he has a plan. I will be greatly disappointed if this does not come to fruition.

 

[packard1928]

True, but she knows why Hutch is declining her any emotion, and I think she feels she deserves it. But that last scene in the bedroom undoes Hutch's emotionless stance (that's why I think it fails in the scope of Hutch's character, but that's just me).
That last scene between Hutch and Vivian (although I know why it was done), still feels out of character and flat to me, no matter how many times I see it.

He started it right after they came back from the garden... then again in the morning after she slept with Christian and last at home after the bathroom scene...

 

[packard1928]

Lets keep it 100 she offered her ass and he turned it down he is done with her. I truly believe he has a plan. I will be greatly disappointed if this does not come to fruition.

I agree... Not sure if he is trying to stay emotionally detached so he can concentrate on his plan.... or not.....

 

[Robb123456]

Lets keep it 100 she offered her ass and he turned it down he is done with her. I truly believe he has a plan. I will be greatly disappointed if this does not come to fruition.

We've been discussing that for a long time, u and me, and u know i would like some kind of revenge for Hutch. But the fact he doesn't want ti touch her can easily be explained by the disgust he feels towards Vivian at this point.