VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [v0.2] [SC Stories]

[Luc77]

I agree with this. There are too many theories that make Hutch out to be a mastermind behind the scenes. With the context we have about Hutch's personality, he was most likely just thinking.

He was doing it the whole Saturday
Sunday is the time for action.

Hutch at the nudie bar!
You are going to the nudie bar to have fun, relax and let some steam off. Even Al Bundy, a shoe salesman knows how to appreciate that kind of place. What does Hutch do? Exactly...n o t h i n g !

In my opinion, it's clearly visible that he came there with someone (Vivian? Was she sent there by Chris? ) and in the second image, he's looking for that person

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

She will not meet any Clients (...yet) as far as I remember correctly.

When Christian was planning on having Vivian join him when they meet some of his clients/business partners, I had the sneaking suspicion that they would be planning on going to some sleazy night bars or some underground strip club of some sort, but on the outside, it looks like some "gentleman's club".

From there, Chris would entice Vivian to perform sex acts on some of his clientele/business partners as collateral to motivate them by securing a negotiation/shady business deal. So, perhaps it might also be Chris's intent to whore out Vivian to his older clientele in order to secure some of his business dealings.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

When Christian was planning on having Vivian join him when they meet some of his clients/business partners, I had the sneaking suspicion that they would be planning on going to some sleazy night bars or some underground strip club of some sort, but on the outside, it looks like some "gentleman's club".

From there, Chris would entice Vivian to perform sex acts on some of his clientele/business partners as collateral to motivate them by securing a negotiation/shady business deal. So, perhaps it might also be Chris's intent to whore out Vivian to his older clientele in order to secure some of his business dealings.

Your scenario seem for me to complicated it doesn't go with the style of the dev. I do not think she Vivian become a whore or slut nut only will have some situation where she would be "forced" to fuck with some of the characters like the twin or the basketball player. As a collateral damage. I really think is going to head in that direction.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

This kinetik novel is being describing a tragedy and Vivian, Christian and hutch are the main characters. And this tragedy will get deeper in complications where we all would complain and be mad about such happening in that's exact what keep us focusing this game. We just don't played but we feel it too. We going trough this emphatically with every oft them without notice it.

 

[LUCIANO2020]

And this is only 20 percent of the game. Omg

 

[AssassinWolf67]

Dev told us his story will have a heavy dark end and all you guys come up with is that Hutch reaches a level of self confident out of nowhere and can cope with everything and anyone. That's just not going to happen. This story is not about Hutch!

A dark heavy end is fine. Having written quite a bit myself, I believe readers, to be truly engaged, there needs to be someone or something to root for. In that scenario, I can absolutely see Hutch gaining the upper hand "eventually." After all, every person has a limit from which they rise or spiral into oblivion.

Obviously, Christian is the "evil" in the story. Vivian, while complicit, is manipulated by Christian. Christian is also manipulating Hutch (duh!), and I hope the author doesn't just leave it at surface level and have Hutch continue to be manipulated to the end. That would be WAY too shallow. I'm hoping (praying even) that we get a more complicated Hutch, one that, over time, begins to twist the circumstances to his benefit.

Christian's niece, the one who's nice to him (I believe it's his niece, I'm not sure typing this, so forgive me if I'm wrong), is a good way to start. Hutch mentioned that he's "open" to a different relationship. The word "open" is weighted in the way he brought it up out of nowhere. Now, the question is, will the game move toward "scorched earth" where Hutch destroys both Vivan and Christian? Will it end with revenge on Christian and forgiveness for Vivan? Or heaven forbid, Hutch is destroyed.

I would be disappointed if Hutch remains a cuck to the end. Shallow story, and honestly, a failed ending. It has to have some depth for Hutch to make it anywhere near believable. A dark heavy end, like I mentioned, is fine, but if it's Hutch that goes down, it will be a failed attempt at writing. If I wanted that, I would rewatch Uncut Jems. What a waste of time that movie was.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

And this is only 20 percent of the game. Omg

There certainly is a lot left of the game to experience. That's for sure.

MHB was only just released a few weeks ago and we're already at nearly 100 reviews and 100+ pages already :O

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

When Christian was planning on having Vivian join him when they meet some of his clients/business partners, I had the sneaking suspicion that they would be planning on going to some sleazy night bars or some underground strip club of some sort, but on the outside, it looks like some "gentleman's club".

From there, Chris would entice Vivian to perform sex acts on some of his clientele/business partners as collateral to motivate them by securing a negotiation/shady business deal. So, perhaps it might also be Chris's intent to whore out Vivian to his older clientele in order to secure some of his business dealings.

Vivian won't meet with the clients (yet). She will accompany Christian to scope out locations but not for the meetings.


Maybe later Christian will take advantage of that little project and takes her out to more special and spicier places to corrupt her more.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

Now, the question is, will the game move toward "scorched earth" where Hutch destroys both Vivan and Christian? Will it end with revenge on Christian and forgiveness for Vivan? Or heaven forbid, Hutch is destroyed.

I would be disappointed if Hutch remains a cuck to the end. Shallow story, and honestly, a failed ending. It has to have some depth for Hutch to make it anywhere near believable.

Mhmm. With the pace that the story is going, it would be kind of a let-down to see and too predictable (i.e., assuming) if Hutch remained a cuck to the very end. Having multiple endings would be a great way to add more contextual depth to the story and spice things up.

 

[psychedevil]

Regarding Hutch's being weak or mild, In the bathroom scene where Vivian gets angry and decides to leave, (side-note: Christian wouldn't let her leave, proving that all that bullshit about she is free to go, is just that... bullshit)
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Hutch hears her plea....
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He is getting ready to get up and come to her aid... Showing that he does at least have some backbone.
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But ultimately he hears how she is enjoying it, and is a willing partner, further breaking his spirit. (Seriously Hutch my man, dump this bitch )

Yeah, I had taken special note of this too, that Hutch almost interceded when he heard Vivian say to let her go...but then Christian said he wasn't done yet and roughly pulled her back in, which Vivian played right into by enjoying it, much to Christian's satisfaction and ego. This is another reason that makes me feel Vivian is acting like a fool. By succumbing to Christian in this instance, she is rewarding his use of physical force to continue sex. Maybe she has rape fantasies?

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

Christian will take advantage of that little project and takes her out to more special and spicier places to corrupt her more

Yeah, gradual steps to corruption. I alluded to that being a possibility. But certainly something to consider as Christian seeks to corrupt Vivian more by exposing her to some of his more "perverted" clientele

 

[tg]

Your scenario seem for me to complicated it doesn't go with the style of the dev. I do not think she Vivian become a whore or slut nut only will have some situation where she would be "forced" to fuck with some of the characters like the twin or the basketball player. As a collateral damage. I really think is going to head in that direction.

I do think her turning into a whore is a bit much for the story. But, I hope she is mistaken as a whore, and men often treat her as one. I think that would fit right into the feel of this game. It's still early days, but I could see her filling the role of client-fluffer and such. Not in the next little while, but eventually. When the story turns darker.

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

A dark heavy end is fine. Having written quite a bit myself, I believe readers, to be truly engaged, there needs to be someone or something to root for. In that scenario, I can absolutely see Hutch gaining the upper hand "eventually." After all, every person has a limit from which they rise or spiral into oblivion.

Obviously, Christian is the "evil" in the story. Vivian, while complicit, is manipulated by Christian. Christian is also manipulating Hutch (duh!), and I hope the author doesn't just leave it at surface level and have Hutch continue to be manipulated to the end. That would be WAY too shallow. I'm hoping (praying even) that we get a more complicated Hutch, one that, over time, begins to twist the circumstances to his benefit.

Christian's niece, the one who's nice to him (I believe it's his niece, I'm not sure typing this, so forgive me if I'm wrong), is a good way to start. Hutch mentioned that he's "open" to a different relationship. The word "open" is weighted in the way he brought it up out of nowhere. Now, the question is, will the game move toward "scorched earth" where Hutch destroys both Vivan and Christian? Will it end with revenge on Christian and forgiveness for Vivan? Or heaven forbid, Hutch is destroyed.

I would be disappointed if Hutch remains a cuck to the end. Shallow story, and honestly, a failed ending. It has to have some depth for Hutch to make it anywhere near believable. A dark heavy end, like I mentioned, is fine, but if it's Hutch that goes down, it will be a failed attempt at writing. If I wanted that, I would rewatch Uncut Jems. What a waste of time that movie was.

I totally get you and I know that many are rooting for Hutch to deserve better, but there is this voice from Dev telling us the ending will one half of us enjoy it while the other half definetly won't.
I don't think Hutch will end as cuck either, the story ends a lot heavier than that and not only be just Hutch who will suffer.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

o which corner are you working tonight? I Feel like trying out a younger model so will go elsewhere.

 

[Adhdclassic]

The question truly is will the DEV stick with the NTS or again will he switch back to NTR. Shadows of Silence makes me feel they will stay together but there will be a secret. If these titles are staying. Maybe she kills Christian because he won't stop then he becomes possesive and Hutch knows she did it. But classic I love my wife so I will protect her.
#A Husband's Sacrifice
#The Price of Love
#Shadows of Forgiveness
#Shadows of Silence

 

[Aimless44]

Dev told us his story will have a heavy dark end and all you guys come up with is that Hutch reaches a level of self confident out of nowhere and can cope with everything and anyone. That's just not going to happen. This story is not about Hutch!

Sorry, where is it said that it's definitely going to be a dark ending by the DEV? Is that info on his main thread?

https://f95zone.to/members/sc-stories.4582888/

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

I know that many are rooting for Hutch to deserve better, but there is this voice from Dev telling us the ending will one half of us enjoy it while the other half definetly won't

Off the top of my head, I think that there's gonna be some variation across the routes/paths in which MHB would pan out:

• Cuck Path/Total Destruction - Hutch loses everything. Vivian ends up leaving him for Christian, and in time, he turns into a former shell of the man he once was and laments in despair and loneliness. After some time, Vivian gets sick of Christian and leaves him - only to be lonely herself, as she has no one else to really turn to for companionship. Simply put. No winners.
  
  
• Forgiveness and Reconciliation - Vivian seemingly gives into Christian's manipulative ways, but eventually comes to learn that Chris is not the right person for her and sees through his BS, only to gravitate back to Hutch and seek his forgiveness. Hutch eventually gets back together with Vivian and decides to put their past squabbles with Christian behind them and move on from their life in the city to settle somewhere else where Hutch has found a placement/job outside of the town he currently resides in.
  
  
• Neutral/Sharing/Swinging - So, in this path, Christian/Hutch come to some form of agreement/mutually beneficial understanding. Vivian and Chris still meet up and Hutch has come to embrace a new 'Swinging' lifestyle between himself and Vivian. Mayhaps Addison may also be involved in this dynamic as well?

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

Sorry, where is it said that it's definitely going to be a dark ending by the DEV? Is that info on his main thread?

https://f95zone.to/members/sc-stories.4582888/

From here

 

[tg]

• Neutral/Sharing/Swinging - So, in this path, Christian/Hutch come to some form of agreement/mutually beneficial understanding. Vivian and Chris still meet up and Hutch has come to embrace a new 'Swinging' lifestyle between himself and Vivian. Mayhaps Addison may also be involved in this dynamic as well?

I think that last one isn't going to happen. Hutch doesn't get along with Christian at all, and he really resents what's happening. But, I like the sound of your first two. They do sound interesting.

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

Off the top of my head, I think that there's gonna be some variation across the routes/paths in which MHB would pan out:

• Cuck Path/Total Destruction - Hutch loses everything. Vivian ends up leaving him for Christian, and in time, he turns into a former shell of the man he once was and laments in despair and loneliness. After some time, Vivian gets sick of Christian and leaves him - only to be lonely herself, as she has no one else to really turn to for companionship. Simply put. No winners.
  
  
• Forgiveness and Reconciliation - Vivian seemingly gives into Christian's manipulative ways, but eventually comes to learn that Chris is not the right person for her and sees through his BS, only to gravitate back to Hutch and seek his forgiveness. Hutch eventually gets back together with Vivian and decides to put their past squabbles with Christian behind them and move on from their life in the city to settle somewhere else where Hutch has found a placement/job outside of the town he currently resides in.
  
  
• Neutral/Sharing/Swinging - So, in this path, Christian/Hutch come to some form of agreement/mutually beneficial understanding. Vivian and Chris still meet up and Hutch has come to embrace a new 'Swinging' lifestyle between himself and Vivian. Mayhaps Addison may also be involved in this dynamic as well?

The surprise element is missing Dev mentioned will be a part of his ending is somehow not existent in all your scenarios.