VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [v0.2] [SC Stories]

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A cheaters love is tainted so the person who is being cheated on will always love that person more. Thats one of the reasons this story is so good. It highlights that.

 

[Ponos13]

A cheaters love is tainted so the person who is being cheated on will always love that person more. Thats one of the reasons this story is so good. It highlights that.

Sure it applies to almost situations of infidelity.Some measure of affection is logical but to this situation not so much.We suppose to have a "blackmail" situation.Its whole different to lust and fall for the blackmailer but to hold hands?No it doesnt make so much sense in that first night.Even later on you see its really more a crush of a schoolgirl and not just lust and desires.

 

[wt859]

For me personally, it's the stereotypical whore wife. I wouldn't think so change her just once in the backyard (you could even come up with some really good reason for it, but 22 years of marriage and here she is already fucking...), but she does it again, all night enjoying it. Then she makes the choice of doing it in the loo again. Then she makes the choice again of agreeing to an open marriage and a job. Seriously? Up to this point we're shown how authoritative she is in her conversations with Hutch, how she controls him, and here she so easily agreed because Hutch asked her to? Why didn't you just listen to him and stay home? Why didn't you listen to him then and go home after the first fuck with the Boss (apparently he was that good). So yeah, that's typical wife whoring to me.
Even the moment with the son and his roommates: bitch, they're making fun of your son, he's not enjoying it, and you're letting them flirt? It's your son, you may not like your husband, but it's your son, your blood. Vivian to me is the most disgusting character here.

I can see your perspective. She is definitely in the wrong. However, I think your view on it is too black and white and takes out the layers within the characters.

 

[wt859]

Two of Hutch's clients jumped ship and went to a rival company. That's seen as the debt, a loss of revenue from those customers. Hutch was likely to lose his job for it, and instead of paying that way, Vivian paid it off by fucking Christian.

She did it for Hutch's benefit as above, to stop him from losing his job, but she doesn't want to risk her marriage, so she doesn't want to do it again, or for Hutch to find out. It should be that she doesn't want to risk her marriage any more than she already has, but that's semantics.

The project is going for the personal touch with clients, wining and dining them, etc., which was Vivian's idea in the first instance.

I was basically going to reply with the same response. All that dialogue is about stuff we already know, which you pointed out. I think that person is overanalysing a bit lol.

 

[wt859]

It's weird to quote myself, I know ...

But I remembered something about the scene in the bathroom....
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Here she is talking abut debts. I don't want to believe this is the reason, as it would bring the whole story down, considering there is no mention of any debts out of the ordinary household types (e.g. no gambling debts, etc).

But then we get this...
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Doesn't want to risk her marriage, and only did it for his benefit. two contradicting statements that don't fit in with any real reason to go full slut.

And then we get this...
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Which sounds like Vivian is up to something herself, somehow trying to get Hutch a leg up, we just don't know how. Then she goes on and on about it being the last time etc. We all know that's not the going to be the case.

After the event we get this....
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Two things she admits how she is been lying to his face, but also she mentions that she will explain why she did it and ask for forgiveness. I once again stand by the notion that unless it was a life or death reason, nothing else would justify risking a 22 year marriage.

I replayed that last scene when Hutch finally rolls up home, and something about it just rubs me the wrong way. Even with porn game logic, its just too unrealistic and unbelievable. They both know about the cheating and the lying and are both too stupid to set the record straight?
When she mentions "we will do this together". Come on, what bullshit is that? How can you be in to together when you are not on the same page to begin with. The biggest killer of a relationship, isn't infidelity, its the loss of trust: lying being the main culprit.
The whole thing just irks me. At this point you would expect them both to have laid their cards on the table. Instead, they are so dysfunctional right now, it's a big stretch to believe they're even married, let alone been happily married for so long.

I give props out to SC Stories for giving us all conflicting opinions and discussions regarding this story. It is great. I hope the realism (within reason) prevails.

I think you might be misinterpreting the dialogue a bit here. TonyMurray has already replied with what I was going to say. It's all within the context of what we know in the story.

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

For me personally, it's the stereotypical whore wife. I wouldn't think so change her just once in the backyard (you could even come up with some really good reason for it, but 22 years of marriage and here she is already fucking...), but she does it again, all night enjoying it. Then she makes the choice of doing it in the loo again. Then she makes the choice again of agreeing to an open marriage and a job. Seriously? Up to this point we're shown how authoritative she is in her conversations with Hutch, how she controls him, and here she so easily agreed because Hutch asked her to? Why didn't you just listen to him and stay home? Why didn't you listen to him then and go home after the first fuck with the Boss (apparently he was that good). So yeah, that's typical wife whoring to me.
Even the moment with the son and his roommates: bitch, they're making fun of your son, he's not enjoying it, and you're letting them flirt? It's your son, you may not like your husband, but it's your son, your blood. Vivian to me is the most disgusting character here.

She somehow started unknowingly as a nasty cunt and don't noticed her bad decisions.
In time Vivian will corrupt even more and the story will become really dark.
This game is great!
A NTR dream/ hell for fans of this genre.

 

[packard1928]

She somehow started unknowingly as a nasty cunt and don't notice her bad decisions.
In time Vivian will corrupt even more and the story will become really dark.
This game is great!
A NTR dream/ hell for fans of this genre.

The Dev said there was more trouble for Hutch and Vivian coming...

 

[sslovoe]

The Dev said there was more trouble for Hutch and Vivian coming...

did he have page pateron to know his news and progress and support

 

[Sparta158]

It's been a week since release and I am blow away with the positive reviews, the words of encouragement, and the lively discussions here in this thread. I've posted some things here and on my profile page but I wanted to consolidate everything with the status of this project.

I'm not sure how long ago this project was born but I casually worked on the script, character creation, world building, and test renders, for quiet a while before ramping up into 'production mode'. I released this as v0.2 to signify it is approximately 20% complete. The number I think is fairly accurate, maybe a little high. The entire story is plotted out, including the ending, it's just a matter of rendering it out. The first release was 5k images. I have another 2k+ in the can already for future scenes. Most of that will be in the 3rd release. The 2nd release is mostly new material but I'm actively working on it, and will contain about 3-4 game days worth of story. 3 days is going to take a toll on our weary couple, trust me.

I want each release to be of similar size as the first. I think quick, short updates ruin the immersion but I understand getting bored, frustrated, and forgetting about games with long update cycles. I don't want to promise a particular cadence but I'm setting milestones for a 4month update cycle. Sorry if that pours water and everyone's fire but compared to some of my favorite games, 4 months doesn't seem excessive to me.

Check my profile page from time to time. I'll do short status updates as I reach certain milestones. Those wishing to support me financially, I ask that you give to F95 instead. Thank you.

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... hot off the presses...
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did he have page pateron to know his news and progress and support

 

[packard1928]

did he have page pateron to know his news and progress and support

he does not have Patreon... He released a status here. He does not want support.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

Okay. Here's my main theory.
There's only one way I can see, why Christian can blackmail Vivian so hard in the garden. Hutch is not the biological father. The son (Sawyer) is a milkman or mailman's kid .
Christian finds out, who the real father is. Vivian can't tell Hutch the truth, because Hutch's world would fall apart if she did. Vivian is caught up in Christian's games (Escort?) and she is starting to enjoy it. It becomes an emotional rollercoaster.

Further observations and speculations.
1. The blonde with long hair in Christian's bed could possibly be Vivian's sister or a college friend? maybe she told Sawyer Problem.
2. The 2 brothers Taylor and Tyler) learn that Sawyer is a cuckoo child and also blackmail Vivian. Maybe they are Christian's sons? They have similar looks and character traits.
3. First meeting at Christian house with Vivian and Hutch, Christian shares in the office in front of all the staff (Address, Time).
Addison knows about the meeting and watches everything from the window (maybe photos?) 2. The company toilet sex she also watches from the window. Addison feels sorry for Hutch and comforts him, maybe more.
I think only Addison can save Hutch.

Compliments to the creator for the good detailed work. Well done
Sorry for my bad English.

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At this stage all these theories are as good as any

Normally, I like to grade things especially when they are new projects:
**Art is an easy A+
**Likeable character {Vivian} where players can get invested in another A+
**Character dialogue and character development, solid A+
**Ability to distinguish each character from each other... A
**established character motives... A- it works with no real plot holes, though Christines motives on being a POS needs some refining and some background would help, like why isn't he married to at least his own trophy wife
**story gaps/missing content/scene development... B So how did the boss get Vivian to get railed? So how did the boss and Vivian get from point A to B
**Plot devices, sorry but that is a C- Catching the boss railing Vivian outside--sure... an all nighter that keeps Hutch awake--OK... just happening to catching Vivian and Christian in the restroom-- that's a leap

All and all the story pieces fit together with few needed leaps in logic to understand the main plots. Overall grade B+/A-

My prediction is the easy of setting up Vivian and Christian's relationship is a corrupting influence with other characters perhaps the star basketball player. Somehow from what I've seen, Vivian isn't going to suffer in silence too much with whatever guilt and remorse she has not lasting long. The only thing that I can't really guess at is just how Vivian's character will evolve as she walks in darkness... Nor can I predict if Hutch will accept and enjoy his role as a cuck or that the office secretary will be his comfort.

A truly dark trip would be to bring the office secretary and Hutch get really close, but she finds someone else...
Vivian starts finding fault in Hutch as he lets Christian take advantage of her... and she is presented with a dark possibility like getting pregnant by x, y, or z even if it doesn't happen in the novel--just a moral dilemma.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Is it true the DEV is going to do a NTS to this after he is done with this?

 

[Sparta158]

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At this stage all these theories are as good as any

Normally, I like to grade things especially when they are new projects:
**Art is an easy A+
**Likeable character {Vivian} where players can get invested in another A+
**Character dialogue and character development, solid A+
**Ability to distinguish each character from each other... A
**established character motives... A- it works with no real plot holes, though Christines motives on being a POS needs some refining and some background would help, like why isn't he married to at least his own trophy wife
**story gaps/missing content/scene development... B So how did the boss get Vivian to get railed? So how did the boss and Vivian get from point A to B
**Plot devices, sorry but that is a C- Catching the boss railing Vivian outside--sure... an all nighter that keeps Hutch awake--OK... just happening to catching Vivian and Christian in the restroom-- that's a leap

All and all the story pieces fit together with few needed leaps in logic to understand the main plots. Overall grade B+/A-

My prediction is the easy of setting up Vivian and Christian's relationship is a corrupting influence with other characters perhaps the star basketball player. Somehow from what I've seen, Vivian isn't going to suffer in silence too much with whatever guilt and remorse she has not lasting long. The only thing that I can't really guess at is just how Vivian's character will evolve as she walks in darkness... Nor can I predict if Hutch will accept and enjoy his role as a cuck or that the office secretary will be his comfort.

A truly dark trip would be to bring the office secretary and Hutch get really close, but she finds someone else...
Vivian starts finding fault in Hutch as he lets Christian take advantage of her... and she is presented with a dark possibility like getting pregnant by x, y, or z even if it doesn't happen in the novel--just a moral dilemma.

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Good points, I think but not hard enough. Quote Dev: There are comments about my story hitting people hard. I've seen "brutal" and "traumatizing" used. It's not going to soften.
It wants to hit the viewer deep in the pit of the stomach.
My brutal point is, Hutch is not the biological father of the son. Christian will humiliate Vivian and force Hutch to tell everything in front of him.

 

[Adhdclassic]

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Good points, I think but not hard enough. Quote Dev: There are comments about my story hitting people hard. I've seen "brutal" and "traumatizing" used. It's not going to soften.
It wants to hit the viewer deep in the pit of the stomach.
My brutal point is, Hutch is not the biological father of the son. Christian will humiliate Vivian and force Hutch to tell everything in front of him.

That not being his son would be extremely brutal and a nasty twist.

 

[packard1928]

Is it true the DEV is going to do a NTS to this after he is done with this?

I Don't know ? THe only communication we have seen is this last one... If So...I think he would be GREAT AT ONE !

 

[Adhdclassic]

I Don't know ? THe only communication we have seen is this last one... If So...I think he would be GREAT AT ONE !

You don't feel if a NTS was created it wouldn't diminish the original story.

 

[packard1928]

That not being his son would be extremely brutal and a nasty twist.

Wow... That would be terrible to Hutch. I hope all of this does not drive Hutch to say... harm to himself...

 

[packard1928]

You don't feel if a NTS was created it wouldn't diminish the original story.

Are you planning to use these characters ? If so everything about them may have to change.... could be done. It Depends on how this ends... To how that could begin.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Wow... That would be terrible to Hutch. I hope all of this does not drive Hutch to say... harm to himself...

Shit if that happened, while she out there humping and rumping. When she returns home the house is empty Hutch has left and emptied out their bank accounts took out a second mortgage took the equity emptied her sons college fund and disappeared.

 

[packard1928]

Shit if that happened, while she out there humping and rumping. When she returns home the house is empty Hutch has left and emptied out their bank accounts took out a second mortgage took the equity emptied her sons college fund and disappeared.

Now that would be different.. but Since he is the numbers guy... he also gained account info from Christians offshore account with all the blackmail money . He gets the young Blonde and splits with all.