VN Ren'Py My Hypnotized Family [EP. 1 v1.00] [The Naughty Three]

[Vrijgeest]

Yes to sandbox. Vn isnt a game. I just skip dialogue. More sanbox game on this site is a must.

Well many surveys have resulted of a 2 to 1 preference for VN/Linier games/stories. So not your sanbox whatever that is.

 

[Bloodguard]

I really like this art style, and the premise sounds fun. Just out of curiosity before I get too invested, how do you plan to get around Patreon rules against incest and mind control?

 

[The Naughty Three]

I really like this art style, and the premise sounds fun. Just out of curiosity before I get too invested, how do you plan to get around Patreon rules against incest and mind control?

If we get banned on Patreon the project won't stop. There is subscribestar and other ways of donation. In fact, I am too invested in this project now to stop even if it doesn't bring any money.

 

[Gabaw]

I like VNs specifically because I can skip all the extraneous dialogue and don't have to grind for dat ass Nice art for sure. Glad you're continuing down that path. Good luck to you.

 

[hkennereth]

Remove URM it doesn't work with renpy v8

Oh, now I'm embarassed. I just copied the error message and didn't even notice it was pointing to URM. Thanks for pointing that out.

 

[Ron4164]

My two cents: No to sandbox. Yes, to well-written novels.

 

[PainKnight]

Looking good, its very promising.

 

[Private1234]

Is this still images or animated?

 

[The Naughty Three]

Is this still images or animated?

It's still images for now, maybe animated later.

 

[GiuGiu]

The soundtrack is fantastic.

 

[The Naughty Three]

The soundtrack is fantastic.

Thank you! Original soundtrack for the game)

 

[Mograx]

Yes to sandbox. Vn isnt a game. I just skip dialogue. More sanbox game on this site is a must.

 

[Dave3518]

Keep going as Visual Novel with some choices and linear story

 

[The Naughty Three]

Keep going as Visual Novel with some choices and linear story

Got it! Will do!

 

[Jayard]

Android port plsss

 

[The Naughty Three]

Android port plsss

We'll try to do an official Android version soon. Just need to redesign the game a bit, so you can see everything, including text on smaller screen.

 

[Elaphi]

Whatsup with this art?

 

[sickqt]

I rarely give feedback, but here it is. Dream sequences are bad, they ruin the story, its unearned scenes. Also, your game moves far too quickly, take a look at the most popular games, they have a lot more slow paced character development, no one just randomly starts staring at their family right away, you have to make it more believable.

 

[The Naughty Three]

Whatsup with this art? View attachment 1921909

Yes, the proportions seem off, we'll redo this one. Thank you for your feedback

 

[The Naughty Three]

I rarely give feedback, but here it is. Dream sequences are bad, they ruin the story, its unearned scenes. Also, your game moves far too quickly, take a look at the most popular games, they have a lot more slow paced character development, no one just randomly starts staring at their family right away, you have to make it more believable.

Thank you for your opinion. It's important feedback. One of the most popular 2d visual novel games in incest corruption genre on the site are for example Summer Saga, where you spy at your mom in the shower immediately and end up naked with another character in the gym showers on the first day. Dreams Of Desire, another succesful game has erotic dream sequences right from the start, but you are correct, they are less explicit. Not sure how we can change the tempo that deep into the story, but there is certainly some truth to your observation, IMO